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.Tulip.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#91

OK m feeling like my previous comment came outas an insult to the rest of d 5 chapters of this story😕

BT beleive me that is definitely not d case...n I did not meant it to come out like that way...OK m bad in expressing...my apologies fr that if u too felt it like that...

Plz continue the story

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Posted: 10 years ago

#92

beautiful part eagerly waiting 4 next plz if possible update twins of heart

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Zeal-DD

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Posted: 10 years ago

#93

feeling when you are leaving your college/University can't be expressed in words but you did a fab job... beautifully written all the emotions... two different people , two different emotions and feelings. Maan is sad for leaving and Geet is because her love/crush is going...
please i don't want you to keep the end in your diary... share with us... pretty please

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Veil

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: .Tulip.
OK m feeling like my previous comment came outas an insult to the rest of d 5 chapters of this story😕
BT beleive me that is definitely not d case...n I did not meant it to come out like that way...OK m bad in expressing...my apologies fr that if u too felt it like that...
Plz continue the story

No, I didn't misunderstand. Personally I would love the last part myself because that's the only chapter where the leads interacted in entirety :)

So, Chill. That makes the two of us😊

Edited by Veil - 10 years ago

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.Tulip.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: Veil

No, I didn't misunderstand. Personally I would love the last part myself because that's the only chapter where the leads interacted in entirety :)

So, Chill. That makes the two of us😊

Oh thank you so much ..now relieved...:)

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Aditi.kesari

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Posted: 10 years ago

#96

Please cont soon it is awesome story

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Posted: 10 years ago

#97

Chapter 1
Reminds me of college confession pages.
Though most of the confessions are fake and put up to pull each others legs yet among all these there are certain messages which manages to string the chords of the heart.
And if not that it provides an ego boost at some of the most unexpected times.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Chapter 2
And it is these small moments that i will collect and store and will relive them when you 'll not be around.
He cared enough to offer her his cup.
For him he might forget it tomorrow but for her it will become a part of pleasant memory and the cup a dear remembrance.
Bading good byes has always been a hard task especially for an indeterminate period of time.

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Chapter 3
And when i saw your eyes smile while your lips worded your heart's desires without any restrains that was one moment i knew i'll carry forever with me.

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Chapter 4
But then we all are doubtful of ourselves when it comes to take the first step towards everything that looks like a beautiful dream.

But then if we dont make the first step that wouldn't stop others to do so. So grab the chance before its too late.