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updating...

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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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For banner credit goes to my dear Priya...🤗


I feel like everything in my life has led me to you . My choice, my heartbreaks, my regrets, everything...

And when we're together, my past seems worth it.

Because if i had done one thing differently,

I might never have met you.


Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.


Part - 47



Part - 48




On d other side at eve after office hr when Maan was on d way to home , his phone vibrated,, he got a call from G No***, where KC was constructing a corporate building ,, d work was on full swing nd d chairperson of that grp wanted an urgent meeting with Maan ,, he personally called Maan nd requested him to give some time for meeting ,, he said that he was going US for treatment very next day so he wanted to discuss some matters with him ,, Maan saw d time nd decised to go , asked d add for meeting then he think to inform Dadima but his phone's gave a long beep of low battery nd turned off,, Maan decided to call after reaching at client's add, but when he reached at his place d client was not well nd laying on bed ,, both discussed some imp business matters nd meeting stretched lil long nd Maan forgot to call Dadima ,, weather was also turned bad ,, after meeting he came out nd started back to home , now it was raining after strong winds ,, he was in mid way when he stuck in this jam .

In KM Geet trying hard to controle Dadima but eyes turn wet ,, she was sitting hugging Dadima side way ,, assuring her again nd again that Maan wd come , he is fine ,, Though Maan went out on tours almost every week but he never missed calling Dadima before nd after reaching his destination nd informed her if he went for meeting after office hrs ,, this was d 1st time he didn't call back or inform her ,, she too was dying to get a single sign form his side nd his well being .

There in d miles way Maan was stuck in d traffic jam coz of sudden storm nd heavy rain ,, a tree fell down in mid road nd blocked d road , it was peak hr nd traffic was moving on snail speed ,, near 3 hr passed nd he was on d road , mid in heavy jam nd rain ,, pile on d agony his phone was off ,, he was irritated nd cursing weather,system nd traffic helplessly,, not even he there wr lots of ppl stuck in same situation nd cribbing d situation ,, all wr helpless ,, Maan stopped his car AC to save d fuel in jam , opened d widow glass for air ,, rain drops wr falling on him ,, he took off his coat nd kept that on side seat but something fell down from it ,, Maan took tha t nd that was d Taveez which was in his inside pocket ,, he took that nd saw carefully , remembered that nd kept back in his coat pocket with a smile * Maan saw his watch nd sighed gave an annoyed look to his phone ,, he cdn't go out from d car in mid traffic nd rain to call from a public booth ,, he was worried for Dadima nd Geet nd just wanted to reach home ASAP.

It was after 12:00 when his car entered in KM ,, stopped in porch ,, a servant ran to inform Dadima in her room .

Seravnt: Dadima , choty saab aa gay .

Dadima : kya ,, Maan aa gaye, kahan hei ?

She got up in a jerk to go out ,, Geet held her hand for support ,, both came in living hall nd Maan entered in d hall worried nd exhausted ,, he saw Dadima nd Geet whose faces wr showing how worried they wr for him ,, he handed d bag to Nakul nd hugged Dadima who started shedding tears ,, Geet took a sigh of relief seeing him all fine nd thanked her babaji.

Maan: sorry Dadima , I was stuck in traffic nd was not able to inform u ,, sorry.

Geet went to bring water for both nd handed him nd made Dadima to drink some sips ,, Dadima was chocked nd her whole body was trembling .

Geet: Dadima bas ab shant ho jaeye ,, aapki tabiyat kharab ho jayegi .

Maan: haan Dadima , chalo aap apne room mei , mai aapke paas baithata hu ,, etna ku tension leti ho , mai theek hu na .

Dadima sobbed nd spoke in a cracky voice .. hum bahot darr gaye thy , aap kabhi essa nahi kerty .

Maan settled her in d bed nd sat near her holding her hand in his ,, consoling her ,, Maan told her about his sudden meeting in Noida ,, how his phone turn dead nd he stuck in jam ,, after few min Dadima became lil normal ,, Geet was in kitchen to bring something to eat for Dadima ,, she prepared a plate for her nd came in her room ,, Maan took d plate nd fed her ,, Dadima told Geet to take their meal but Maan said that he wd change 1st ,, Geet brought her meds , gave her after meal nd made her comfortable in bed to sleep ,, she was better now, nd showered her love on Maan nd Geet.

Maan went in his room nd went to freshen up ,, Geet set a tray of dinner for him nd brought in d room ,, placed that on table ,, she looked around nd find him in washroom ,, she came in her study ,, she too was very disturbed nd her inner self was shaking ,, seeing Maan she wanted to hug him nd scold him for not informing them ,, she was standing near d window nd watching d downpour ,, she was feeling chocked nd wanted to pour out all her worries nd pain , but how ?

Maan came out from washroom after change nd find his dinner on table , he knew Geet too didn't eat ,, he peeped in d study nd find her there sad nd disturbed ,, seeing Dadima's condition he cd guess how difficult d situation for her to console that heartily weak nd worried old lady but she managed perfectly nd took all care for her .

He came close to her , her back was facing him ,, he saw that Geet wiped her tears which dropped down on her cheeks ,, his heart cried seeing her like that ,, crying alone in a silent corner ,, he placed his hand on her shoulder nd called painfully ... G e e t t ,, she turned nd with a jerk feeling d touch on her body nd looked straight at his face ,, Maan looked in her wet eyes nd nodded in a NO ,, he turned her to face him, cupped her cheeks nd wiped them with his thumbs .

Maan: ssshh,, rona nahi Geet , dekho mei aa gaya hu na .

She felt a gush of emotions nd in a blink she hugged him nd cried out hiding her face in his neck,, Maan was startled with this sudden action ,, he came in sense nd then hugged her back seeing her worn stage ... Geet , calm down .

She was sobbing clinging to him ,, he was caressing her head to consoling her ,, after few min she became lil normal nd parted but she was stealing her eyes embarrassed on her sudden break down in front of him like this ,, she was sniffing with lowered head ,, Maan cupped her face nd mahe her look at him .

Maan: Geet don't feel bad , there is nothing wrong in this , nd now no more tears ,, chup ,,, tum to Dadima se bhi jyada roti ho ,, mai to tum dono ke aansuo ki baadh mei beha hi jaunga .

Geet sniffed , gave an angry glare to him nd hit him on his chest with her fist ,, aahh!

Geet: aapko majak sujh raha hei ,, kahan thy aap ? pata bhi hei humari kya halat thi ? Ek phone ya msg nahi ker sakty thy ? Etne responsible aur caring hein aap ?

Maan smiled at her gestures ,, how authoritatively she was hitting him nd complaining him ,, her hit on his chest pleasured him ,, he cd listen her like this for ever .

Geet: aapko hassi aa rahi hei na ,, meri takleef se aapko ku kuch ferk padega ? maine kaise Dadima ko sambhlala hei eska andaja bhi hei ? aapne ek baar bhi nahi soch hum kitne pareshaan honge ? meri chodo Dadima ... Ssshhh,,, chup , etne sawal ? he shut her mouth placing a finger on her lips ,, she looked at him with wet eyes .

Maan: mai bhi tum dono ke lye pareshaan tha Geet ,, aur mujhe fark padta hei ,, mujhe andaja hai ki tumne kaise Dadima ko sambhala hoga ,, Geet mei bhi pareshaan tha lekin mujhe ek sukun bhi tha ki tum ho Dadima ke sath ,, I'm sorry Geet mai inform nahi ker paya ,, battery dead ho gai , mera phone off ho gaya aur meeting bhi jaroori thi . mai time de chukka tha .

Geet: etne bade businessman bane ghoomte ho ek car charger nahi rakh sakty gadi mei , battery bank nahi rakh sakty ?

He smiled at her remark nd replied : mera car charger Dadima ki gadi mei raha gaya aur battery bank mere pass nahi hei , kabhi jaroorat nahi padi ,, I'm sorry Geet .


Precap --- Maan made Geet to eat with him ...

Theek hei le jao ye khana mujhe bhi bhook nahi .


sorry sweeties...😆
😆😆 kal update nahi hoga sasuma aa rahi hei.. mai chutti per .. ll try to come lil late.😃


Part - 49

Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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aww ...love u too ...babbie ...how r u ...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Missed many updates
Woh net kharab ho gaya tha isliye
I m happy that maan got to know how much geet suffered coz of his ignorance and geet's outburst is emotional
And maan trying to make everything alright but that will take time na
Continue soon dear
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🤗 dona ,priya ,tabby ..

😆😆


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Originally posted by: singh24



🤗 dona ,priya ,tabby ..

😆😆


where r u passing by ..tumhara ghar hai yeh ...😆
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😆😆 hi tabby ,
bful pics..
sab de do..love it.😳

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Originally posted by: singh24



🤗 dona ,priya ,tabby ..

😆😆




arey rukho tho itni speed se jij ke paas bhaag rahi ho kya? saath samundar paar karke😆😆
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Originally posted by: tabby999

where r u passing by ..tumhara ghar hai yeh ...😆


😆 wo to tum sabka bhi hei..
update dene ja rahi hu..
net slow hei..

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