Till daddy comes home - Part 4 (Final) updated pg 15

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Jayeeta Paul

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Posted: 11 years ago

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beautiful ending...👍🏼...Geet got a call from Maan's office that he has left 4 home 4 hrs before...😲😲...Geet was tensed y he didn't reach home till now......she thought something bad might have happened...😭😭...little did she know that Maan has kept a surprise 4 his family...😉😛...Sneha was so overwhelmed by this......Geet was also very happy...👏👏...they enjoyed a lot......thank u 4 pm...😃...pls do make more stories...😊...will be waiting 4 Ur stories......

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MystiqueDew

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Very beautiful !!!

Glad that Maan planned surprise for their kids.

lovely..

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angel0912

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

love it so much finally daddy comes home and celebrate with kids wow

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Sandy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

For a moment even I thought Maan hz met wid an accident 😆 but thank God he didnt , maan is so adorable nd so was his surprise 😊really cute update nishi I loved it😊

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punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

WHAT A BEAUTIFUL STORY

MAAN AND GEET ARE THE BEST PARENTS

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sdlife19

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

One of the best story i read these days...

Sneha was a typical daddy's girl but even when she understand her father at time she failed to realise..

but Maan should even think about his family. just loving geet and the leaving everything on her wasnt right.. and serving his profession was good but same time he needs to make sure he has time for family and though he did not attend her function he made it special for her... and brought the lost smile on his kids faces

beautiful one

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..Twinkle..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

@Uma

Aww thanks a lot for your feedback 🤗 & glad you loved it 😳 Your prediction came true too 😉😆 Will come up with a new story soon 😃 & All the best for your FF 🤗 Love you ❤️

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..Twinkle..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: insight555
Wow...so we get a happy ending...
It was awesome...loved Maan's homecoming and his surprise for the kids...
Thanx for the update and Keep writing...

Glad you loved the story 😳 Thanks a lot 😃

Edited by ..Twinkle.. - 11 years ago

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..Twinkle..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: Hanishadevi
very lovely story and a beautiful end..tk you

Glad you loved it 😳 Thanks

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..Twinkle..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: --Ratna--
Nishi 🤗...thank u for this short and sweet story...it felt so real and true.👍🏼...could relate to the story and characters ...lovely couple and beautiful children.❤️...kids missing their busy father😭...he busy trying to work hard for his family and for saving little children in need 😕 ...glad u did not drag the story and gave a happy ending...was worried when Maan was missing...wonderful surprise...the kids were so happy 😃

Aww thanks a lot for your wonderful feedback 🤗 Glad you loved my story 😳 Hoping to write more about Maaneet 😃