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Posted: 11 years ago

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Part 3


The relatives settled in their rooms.. some come here for this type of gatherings only to gossip n they were busy in that...

only bride n grooms family were staying in first floor..pammi has a room for herself which nt stayed till her wedding..next was dadi's..n next was maan's which dev stayed till marriage..followed by devnaina's room for wedding night n geets parents room..

Dadi's room..

Savithri n her cousin was sharing the room..

Cousin:savitri..have u thought of maan.now devs marriage too is over..

Savitri:hmm sharadha..when maan will see the love between dev n nt he will change his mind..now all in babaji's hand..i have fulfilled my prayer..now its his turn to shower his blessing on my maan n settle him..if babaji showers his blessings,.i will get maan married tomorrow itself..n will take my two dil's to delhi without any worries of my grand sons..

Sharadha smiled..hope ur wish come true..par kuch zyadha hi sochrahi ho like the bride is here n u will get married with maan tomorrow..

Savitri:if I have seen I would have finalized by now if maan accepts..

Sharadha:chalo so jao..kal delhi bhi jaana hai..

Savitri:yes..

Both slept down..savitri let a small prayer to babaji to give maan his life partner soon n dev n nainas married life to be happier..

Dev nainas room..

Nt was taken to her room .n was settled in mid..she was admiring the decors of the bed ..very classy creating the romantic feel..she started thinking about her mothers words which she told after their marriage papers signed officially too after the marriage rituals...

Pammi:naina..now u r lawfully too dev's wife..devs family is rich...dadi is old..will leave this world anytime..but u have to make place in her heart..so behave nicely with her n gain her trust.. ..n maan is the whole incharge of all.dev is dependent on him..n has no identity of his own..if maan gets married n had childrens u cant rule this entire property...so do something that maan remains single..so his share of property will also come to u n dev..n dev must come in the lime lights not maan.rest I don't want to tell ..tum tho samajdhar ho..

Naina nodded for that time.Now she was thinking on it..her mother was right..first let me gain the trust of dev n dadi..then I ll make maan in knees before me..naina se panga liya...I ll not let him have a happy life..

something pricked her foot when she stamped her legs on bed in anger..she took it n noticed it's a ring..

She got annoyed..

Nt st:Yeh geet bhi na..doesnt leave me to live peacefully..why she makes me remember her in this moment..waise humari room mei wo kya karrahi thi...

With thought she kept it aside..

Dev entered the room n nt sighed in relief..dev lifted her gunghat

Nt:thank god..u came soon..warna I will be irritated more.

Dev was surprised

Dev:irritated..kyun..

Nt:this dress n jewels..uff its too heavy..

Dev smiled thinking of other meaning..

Nt: ..mummy said I cant change till u remove my viel..

Dev:let me help you..

Nt:dev..

Dev:hmm..

Nt:pls wake me up soon in morning..

Dev:don't worry darling I ll make u wake till morning..

He winked n soon the newly wed forgot themselves in passion..

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Maans room..

Maan was frustrated with the happenings..he was faking smile all the while before the relatives n friends..he didn't have his dinner too..the day which he dreamt for his brother turned dreadful for him..

He threw away his sherwani n paced to and fro..still he couldn't digest naina is his bro devs wife..something bothered him..whats it..is that he thought wrong of naina or is that his past love is married to his brother n he has to face her often..

But kya wo sach tha..whatever her mother told..can he believe them..he sat on the bed n started to think of his past n present..

Maan: maan soch..calm down first n think like a business man not like a brother..think by mind not through heart..u will get what u r missing..

He took long breathe n closed his eyes..he started to think how he met nt n how he heard her betrayal..

Maan snapped n opened his eyes..naina..she is lying again..that day she was saying 2 her friends she want a rich guy to marry...there was no seniors at that time..matlab..she..she played with my brothers feelings too..just for money she married him..

Maan was shattered now getting nainas intentions..he hurriedly took a shirt n weared it n rushed to dadi's room..seeing her sleep peacefully he came back n leaned on the wall between his n devtaras room.he heard their moans n he couldn't stand there more hearing it..he rushed down..

The manager of the place approached him asking if he needs anything..its unusual to see someone roaming at this time when all are slept..maan searched for words..thinking of excuse..

Maan:hmm..ya..i need some fruits or juice..can u keep in my room.. I ll go for a walk n come.

Manager:sure sir..

Maan really needed some fresh air..so he started to walk unknowingly..n halted seeing the temple glowing in moon light..

Maan stood there leaning on the tree..

Maan:mei aapko maanthi nehi hoon babaji..but my dadi do na..why u r playing with our feelings..what we did to u..is this what u do for ur devoties..i cant say anything now to dadi nor dev..both are happy with the happenings..but when they will know the truth they will be heart broken..mei apneliye nehi unkeliye aapse duwa maangra hoon..do something..that our family is happy ever..

Tear slipped his eyes ..

Someone touched his shoulder n maan turned n saw a baba standing there with a smile.. a smile that no human being can have..a pleasant one giving peace to the person who witness it..

Baba:who told that u don't believe in prayers..

Maan looked at him confusingly..

Baba took his tears in his finger tip n showed maan..

Baba:this is true love of yours towards your family..u did not ask for your happiness but for the one who u love..u know what babaji sab jaanthe hain..he tests his devotees more n more..so they shine like a diamond at the end of his tests..u will also get pass this situation..believe in him..go n sleep peacefully...tomorrow is going to be ur day.. lets see how u pass it..

With that he went off leaving a baffled maan..he understood some but the last part he couldn't..

He started to walk again..now his stress was again back..he felt chocked n his heart pained thinking of dev..

I failed in my responsibility..i should have searched the details about naina n family..meri galthi hai.

he blamed himself for his failure..he has kept dev from all downs ..will dev be able to handle nainas truth..

He hit the tree with his fist..his hand bleeded but it doesn't pain like his heart..he walked a few steps n found he was at a lonely place..

Maan looked around:where I am..

There was only a light from a building n he went there..n found it a bar..

Maan:a single peck may give me some peace..

He went inside n ordered a drink..a drink changed to 2 then 3 then 4..

Maan ordered one more..but the attender refused..

Attender:sir..u r already losing ur sense..one more wont suit u..better u go home sir..

Maan grabbed his collar..how dare u stop me..u know who I am..

Attender slowly released his shirt from his fist..

Att:aap job hi ho..ab aap sirf apne gham kam karnekeliye yahi hai..if u take more what will ur family feel..think about it..

Maan:dadi..dev..relatives..aur mei..

He was mumbling..

maan:sry..im sry..

he took a few thousands n pressed in his hands..

maan:Thank u..thank u..dadi ko bura lagega..

He started to walk but couldn't..he stumbled at his place.

Att:where u stay sir..

maan:Xyz place..

Att:aayiye mei kisko aapke saath bejthi hoon wo aapko chodega..u cant go like this as this place is in outskirts of Amritsar..

Maan:outskirt..mei itni ddooor..how aur aap bhi yahaan kyun..

At:bars is prohibited in Amritsar so this shop is in outskirts.chaliye ..

Maan:ty..

He called some driver n asked him to leave maan in xyz place..

The driver dropped him n the manager found maan in drunken state..

driver:sir..i think this is first time he has drunk more..he couldn't handle it..

Manager knowing maan n his fame took silently to maans room thanking the driver for bringing him back safe...

Maan :do u know mr..i love this decors..acha haina..

He pulled a flower n kept in his ear..

Manager:yes..

Maan:meri bhi khwaab hai..shadhi keliye..

Manager:oh..

maan:but she broke my dream.will u listen what i dreamt.

Maan:boloon..

Manager was struggling with maan in steps n was hearing to his blabbers too..

Maan:yesehi phool..sab jaga..par yeh combination nehi..red n white..combination will be bright..meri would be also will be wearing red ghagra..she will be innocent by look n heart..n..

Manager finally brought him to his room..he switched on the lights..

maan:no no..off off..i couldn't open my eyes..

Manager switched off..uff how much he has to bare today..

He made him sit on bed

Manager:gud night sir..

He left..

Maan:don't go listen to me then go..

But manager was long gone..

Maan started to say how his bride must be dressed how beautiful she must look how she must be loving for his family..he smiled n bllushed saying his next wish..

maan:at nights na..mei,,mei usei chodunga nehi.. I ll pull her in my arms..she will struggle to leave from me..kyunki wo shy shy haina..then I ll kiss her..ummm..

Umm..

Hmm

She will moan like this..

N my hands will reach her dress..woh tho nehi managi..mein bhi maan singh khurana hoon..

Hehe..

I ll squeeze her in my arms ..will kiss her hard that she will let me touch ..touch..her..kiss her..

Jao iski aage mei nehi bolungi..jo bhi hai mei uske saath karungi..

he was like a child pouring his dream off..but noone is there to hear him..

Hmm..

maan:this pillow..yeh bohut soft hai..meri room ki pillow se zyadha..i ll take this pillow with me ..

he hugged his pillow n ...šŸ˜†šŸ¤£

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next part will be at night..hope i would ..but its in ur hands..here no geet but next part mei hai..

Edited by vrinda22 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Then giving 2updates akka 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: diyadecember

Then giving 2updates akka 😊

yes at night
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Posted: 11 years ago
intelligent maan naintara ka plan samajh gaya ki she married dev only for money and both mother and daughter told lie. poor maan kitna sapne dekh raha hai apni wedding night kašŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†par sunne keliye koi nahi hai😭😭😭
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Posted: 11 years ago


maan ne apna pura SR plan bak diya,,

theory bata di practical baaki hei...šŸ˜†šŸ˜‰

ye NT sach mei chau hei kya..??😲

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
maan find out recalling past what is naina's motive to marry dev
what will maan do now
sad for maan
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update...loved it...maan in so Mich pain...at the end by any chance is he on geets room??? N this comfy pillow is geet???

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