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spoorthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

OK!

I Got it ... ican never write OS!

So ... The Story continues...

Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago

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tabby999

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28
OK!
I Got it ... ican never write OS!
So ... The Story continues...

😆😆 the ending wsa not perfect so continue

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Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

just read this one...beautiful short story.

the initial meeting, unspoken feelings..him leaving, and Geet losing the hope with the realization of him being the MD of the company...then the surprise and lovely ending.

loved the unconditional love when she said, he will not argue with his wife..

the end with the Part 3 is also fine in my opinion, but everyone has different views...and

you have turned the epilogue 1 also towards proper ending way...she is craving to hear him and he did that in person by loudly calling her name.

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Disadvantage of trying to update from phone!

Got a call while posting n lost the whole part!😡

Now typing again. ...

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_Maaneet_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28
Disadvantage of trying to update from phone!
Got a call while posting n lost the whole part!😡

Now typing again. ...

double mehnant!!!!

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: sparklingeyes11
Yipeee Me waiting!!

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spoorthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest
just read this one...beautiful short story.
the initial meeting, unspoken feelings..him leaving, and Geet losing the hope with the realization of him being the MD of the company...then the surprise and lovely ending.

loved the unconditional love when she said, he will not argue with his wife..

the end with the Part 3 is also fine in my opinion, but everyone has different views...and
you have turned the epilogue 1 also towards proper ending way...she is craving to hear him and he did that in person by loudly calling her name.

😃

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Part -5

Something didn't seem right. .. though he didn't return that day he was back a month after that. ... he was more rude n all serious. ...I didn't know what to make of his indifference. ...

He made sure that were never alone. .. there was someone or other with him whenever we met...N it was mostly professional. ..

N what increased my worries was I never heard him speak!

His brother was on some education tour from his school which I sent him giving a long list of instructions of do's n don'ts of course and scooby was with us. ...

As it was weakend I was instructing workers to clean up the garden of OUR home ... It was the very place were we started weaving dreams of our future. ...

I was lost in thoughts when someone handed me a letter n left strange I thought...settling my self on the stairs I opened the letter. ...

Geet

I know you have lot of questions. ... but all I have to say is

Sorry!

Please try n move on in ur life. ...

Maan

Strange enough I didn't feel bad or anything like that after reading the letter I grabbed the keys n entered OUR home. ... Maybe it was the smudged ink near my name or the moisture I felt which gave me courage. ...

As I entered the house my smile only widened after looking at the framed picture in the study. ... It was his family pic I suppose. ... but what caught my attention was my name next to his pic. ...

So he was here. ... Not bad Mr.khurana. ... The house only told me of the unsaid dreams which he saw alone. ..which has me in them... I pulled out a saree from his wardrobe n hugged it close to my heart. ...

A lone tear escaped from my eye...

Now I know what to do. ..

I woke up next day all excited ... I was in super good mood with all the shopping I did yesterday. ... I walked in to the office all cheerful... though I felt people were looking at me but I cared less about it...

I know I had a meeting with my Boss today so. ... there was a spring in my step. ..I stepped into the meeting an our eyes met... though I was all nervous till now but one look at him I knew that was bulls eye!

I was dressed in a deep red cotton saree. ... with few bangles on my right wrist n a big watch on my left , small golden drops to my ears hair loosely done in to a plat. ... in short a perfect house wife look. ...

The lost look on his face clearly proved my point. ... I knew he always wanted to see me like that. ... Like his wife!

I faked a cough to distract him. .. as it was getting hard for me to control my blush under his admiring looks. ... he quickly composed himself n I completed my part on the design somehow. ..

The only problem with this look was the kajal. ...as I tend to rub my eyes often n the stupid kajal spreads around my eyes n to my hands too... I thought pouting looking at my hands...

I was about to wipe it with my saree when he caught my wrist handed me his kerchief n left hurriedly. ..

I didn't know if I was smiling or crying as it was the first time after his return he acknowledged my presence ...

He was determined to let me go... n I to become his shadow!

To be continued. ...

Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago

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tabby999

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Posted: 11 years ago

#109

hi sporthy

nice update

maan want geet to go ..now want to know what happen wrong

but geet has faith in her love .

she want to maan's worls

waiting to see who win ..

thanks for nice update

waiting for next

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 11 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: tabby999
hi sporthy
nice update
maan want geet to go ..now want to know what happen wrong
but geet has faith in her love .
she want to maan's worls
waiting to see who win ..
thanks for nice update
waiting for next

Thanks for liking!😳

Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago

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