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spoorthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -MSKdeewani-
nice epilogue
maan got his voice back , gelled well with geet's family!!!!!!

Thank you! 😃

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caller123

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

On a serious note didn't you feel Maan shouting on geet is so out of his character ... I actually wanted someone to notice it!

No coz I felt he wanted to surprise her.😳

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CookieMonster

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Posted: 11 years ago

Very nice n sweet story!!
Loved it

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spoorthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: _CookieMonster_
Very nice n sweet story!!
Loved it

Thank you! 😃

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vandy28

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey awsm ss...totlly loved it...
Very simple n sweet bt romntc too...i love ds light heartd stry of maan n geet...
Love ur wrk...

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spoorthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vandy28
Hey awsm ss...totlly loved it...
Very simple n sweet bt romntc too...i love ds light heartd stry of maan n geet...
Love ur wrk...

Thank you☺️

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December04

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Yaar I didn't read that one...
Well thanks for letting me know I will definitely read it now..😃

read and say ur views
waiting for another story frm u

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sparklingeyes11

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome story!
But me wanted more... may be epilogue part 2...
It seems a bit abrupt ending. No??

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spoorthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sparklingeyes11
Awesome story!
But me wanted more... may be epilogue part 2...
It seems a bit abrupt ending. No??

That's the reason I didn't give epi!

But they insisted on having one...

N part 2... yaar it will go on... im sure of it!😆

There's so much to the story that people will definitely ask for next...

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tabby999

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Posted: 11 years ago

hi sporthy

nice story but ending is not perfect .

it seems incomplete ..

he got his voice back ya geet dreaming!!

i am so confused ..

plese give epilogue part two

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