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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful update
all planning for maan's b'day...
geet avoiding maan...poor maan wants his mishti to wish him...geet acting too good
waiting for the surprise party for maan
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Part - 69

After the function...

Maan eagerly waits for Geet...

And Geet is still thinking about her next plan...

She can't fool Maan further...

Maan is already restless and waiting from morning ...

Mr.Khanna takes leave as some problem has cropped up in his business...

He leaves Sam with Geet and others...

Annie is happy that Geet and Sam are staying back for the weekend...

Moreover she is excited for her Bro, this is going to be fun...

Maan goes and sees Annie...

Geet is no where in the house...

Annie: bhai, aap ko kuch chahiye?

Maan: toh tumme abhi abhi bhai ka yaad aayi? Kamaal hai, aaj toh kissi ko bhi MSK ka itna bhi yaad nahi aaya, wah babaji, kaise pariwar mila hai mujhe?

Annie: bhai, ye aap bhol rahe ho?

Maan sounds senti after he Geet had come into his life...

So, he too wants to savour life to the full extent, and celebrations of one's b'day is an excuse to shower your love on that person, haina?

Maan has become addicted to human emotions?

Geet ke saath rahoge toh thoda toh dramebaaz ban hi jaathe, haina babaji?

Maan: patha aaj kya ho gaya hai sab ko?

Annie: kya hua bhai? Aap kuch bhool gaye ho?

Maan: mein bhool gaya hoon?

Annie: phir, kuch doondh rahe ho kya?

Maan: Geet kahan hai?

Annie: Geet, aapke saath nahi?

Maan: what?

Annie: Geeet

Annie pretends to search Geet though she knows Geet is hiding from Maan and playing this hide & seek to keep him distracted...

Maan: ab ye ladhki kahan gayab ho gayi?

Annie: bhai, shayad Geet aapko hi doondh rahi hogi?

Maan: mujhe? Kyun? Usski dimag karab ho gayi kya?

Annie: bhaaai?

Maan: mein kaun hotha hoon? Mujjse kya lena dena hai ussko? Ussko to hiss duniya ki sare logon ki chinta hai sewa ek MSK ki

Annie: bhai, aap shadhi ke badh bahut badal gaye ho

Maan: shadhi ke badh tum badal gaye ho? mein nahi

Annie: what?

Maan: haan Annie, ab toh tum apne bhai ko bhi bhool gayi aur bhai ke

Annie: bhai, aap kamakaam tension lethe ho, shayad aapko bhoog lag rahi?

Pinky comes with sweets...

Maan stares her and leaves...

Maan is angry that even Annie didn't remember his b'day...

Jab se ye Geet ke saath milli Annie bhi Geet ke tarah hi ho gayi...

Maan searches Geet and tries to call her...

Geet: Maan

Maan: shukar hai babaji ki tumne mera call attend kiya, kitne bat call kiya tha? tum kisse baat kar rahi thi?

Geet was just talking with Adi about the arrangements and the blue berry cake that's Maan's favourite...

Geet: mein toh Sam se baat kar rahi thi

Maan: Sam se?

Geet toh pura din Sam ke saath hi thi, aur abhi bhi Sam se baat?

Aur Sam ko toh abhi Vicky se baat karni chahiye...

Geet: aap kahan chale gaye ho?

Maan: pehle tum bolo, tum kahan ho Geet? meinne tumme kab se doondh raha hoon

Geet: mein toh yahi hoon, chat pe

Maan: wahan kya kar rahi ho?

Geet: woh mein hawa khane aayi hoon

Maan: tum wahi rukho, mein aa raha hoon

Maan rushes to the terrace...

Thankfully Geet is alone in the terrace...

But Maan is angry...Geet Maan ko manane ki koshish karthi hai...in her style...

Maan wouldn't talk to her...

Geet: Maan

Maan stares...

Geet: abhi bhi naraz ho?

Maan shows his attitude...

Geet: Maan, kya hua? Jawab do

Maan: mujhe kissi se baat nahi karni

Geet: mujhse baat nahi karoge?

Maan: baat karke kya faida?

Geet: phir yahan kyun aaye ho mere peeche peeche

Maan: tumme kuch yaad dilane ki

Geet: kya?

Maan: abhi sare guests nikal gaye, aur humme bhi ghar jaana chahiye

Geet: ghar? Abhi?

Maan: kyun? Tumme ghar nahi jaana hai?

Geet: woh itne jaldhi?

Maan: nahi, tum do din yahi aaram karkke aao mein jaa raha hoon

Maan leaves...

Geet tries to stop him...she runs after him...

Maan doesn't stop for he knows Geet would definitely follow him...

Geet: Maaan rukho, mere baat toh suno

Maan: Annie, Vicky hum chalthe hai, Dadi kahan hai?

Dadi too comes...

Maan: chalein dadi?

Dadi looks at Geet...

Geet signals Dadi to stop Maan...

Dadi: Maan bete, aapko aaj office nahi jaana hai kya?

Maan: dadi, I'm on leave

Dadi: phir bhi, koi zaroori kaam bhi toh aa sakthi, aap chahe toh ek bar check karkke aao bete, hum bhi thode dher sabse batein karke aathe hai

Maan: Dadi, aap log chahe toh kuch bhi karo, mein ghar jaa raha hoon, kissi ko aana hai toh aa sakthe, nahi toh

Maan stares Geet...

Geet had to go now...

Annie: bhai

Maan: ab kya hai?

Annie: Vicky chahatha hai ki aap usske saath raho

Annie kicks Vicky...

Vicky: haan bhai, aaj toh mujhe akhele chodke kaise jaa sakthe?

Maan: mein nahi rukh saktha, mujhe koi zaroori kaam hai

Geet: aaisa bhi kya zaroori kaam hai? abhi abhi keh rahe the ki aaj koi kaam nahi hai

Maan: mujhe koi personne kaam hai, tum mere aa rahi ho ya nahi?

Maan raises his voice...

Geet: chalo

As they start to walk, Geet goes down her knees and faints...

Maan is shocked and he rushes to her side...

Maan: Geet Geeet kya hua Geeet

Geet doesn't respond...

She doesn't open her eyes...

Maan is worried...he lifts her up and carries her...

Annie: Geeet

Dadi: kya hua Geet ko?

Sam: Geeet?

Everybody rush to see Geet...

As Maan takes her in his arms, Geet slowly opens her eyes and winks at Annie...

Annie understands that Geet is acting...

Geet signals them to stay back and make the arrangements...

Dadi is worried...

Annie: dadi, Geet ko kuch nahi hua hai

Dadi: what?

Annie: she's acting dadi

Dadi smiles...ye Geet bhi na, hum toh sach mein dar gaye the

ending this in the next part...

Updated Tum Mille...
Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part
sab ko kitne papd belne padraha hai...maan se surprise chupane keliye
geet...👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 65
awesome dear...
lovely...
Maan is very careful...
he switched off her phone knowing Geet...
lovely moments...
he wants her all for himself...
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 66
awesome...
bechara Maan...
seriously Geet is so kiddish at times...
and Maan too has started talking to Babaji...
but Annie is understanding...
now Maan can enjoy fully...
lovely...
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 67
awesome dear...
they are back...
and all are busy in the preps...
Geet is planning a surprise for Maan...
and is arranging that...
Maan is not able to spend time with her...
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 68
awesome...
finally he cornered her...
and Geet once again slipped from him...
but Maan issise kaam chalayega...
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 69
awesome dear...
excellent...
too good...
Geet is so naughty...
and Maan was so angry but he knows how to handle her...
hahaha dramebaaz Geet...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part - 70

In the car...

Maan drives fast...

Geet is scared...

Geet slowly opens her eyes...

Geet: Maan

Maan stops the car...

Maan: Geet, tum teek toh haina?

Geet: haan

Maan: ye lo pani piya

Geet drinks the water...

Maan: gabrao mat Geet, hum jaldh hi hospital pohunch jayenge, meinne Dr se baat kar liya hai

Geet: kya? hum Dr ke paas kyun jayenge?

Maan: tum behosh ho gayi thi

Geet: toh?

Maan: humme abhi Dr se consult karna padega, tum kamzoor ho gayi ho Geet, upar se sara kaam apne shir pe lethi ho, sab haina? Tumme akhele itna kaam nahi karna chahiye

Geet: Maan, mujhe kuch nahi hai, mein teek hoon, dekho

Maan: tum kuch nahi jaanthi, tum itna laparwa kaise ho sakthi? Apna khyaal nahi rakhthi

Geet: Maan, aap kamakaam pareshaan ho rahe ho, mein bilkul teek hoon

Maan: chup bilkul chup

Maan takes her to the doctor...

Geet also takes this opportunity to while away the time...

There are a few patients waiting...

But Maan is worried and he wants Geet to consult the doctor immediately...

Maan: sister, emergency hai, humme abhi Dr se milna hai

Sister looks at him...

Sister: appointment liya hai aapne?

Maan: what? I'm warning you, call the doctor, it's an emergency, my wife fainted, she's too weak

Sister looks around...

Sister: patient kahan hai?

Maan turns back and finds Geet playing with a kid...

Maan points Geet...

Sister smiles...: ye toh khel rahi hai

Maan calls her...: geeet

Geet: Maaan, aap yahan aao

She signals Maan to come...

Maan goes towards her...

She is carrying a cute baby...

Geet: Maan, kitna pyara bachcha haina?

She tickles him and he smiles...

Geet: Maan, aapko dekhke hansraha hai

Maan loves the way she pampers the child...

Maan: Geet, humme Dr bhula rahe hai

Geet: Maan, mujhe kuch nahi hai, mein jaanthi hoon

Maan: sshhh yahan tum Dr ho?

Geet: nahi

Maan: phir chup chap mere saath chalo

Geet reluctantly goes with him...

Dr asks Maan to leave them alone...

Geet tells her that she had acted ...

The Dr still examines her just for Maan's satisfaction...

Dr: you know Mrs.Khurana, Mr.Khurana almost blackmailed the sister to let you in

Geet: I'm sorry Dr

Dr: ohhh don't be sorry, you are very lucky, Many husbands don't even accompany their pregnant wifes

Geet is proud of her Maan...

After taking a few tests Dr calls Maan in...

Maan is very nervous...

Dr: aayiye Mr.khurana

Maan: Dr, Geet kaisi hai?

Dr: Mr.khurana, it's time you take good care of your wife, kyun Mrs.khurana, aapke pathi aapke khyaal rakhthe haina?

She looks at Geet...

Geet looks at Maan and says: mera khyaal toh hamesha yahi rakhthe hai

Dr smiles...

Dr: that's good...abhi toh Mr.Khurana aapko dukhna khyaal rakhna padega aapki biwi ka

Maan is worried...what's wrong with Geet?

Maan: Dr, Geet ko kya hua? Any thing to worry?

Dr: nothing to worry Mr.khurana, she's not single now

Maan looks confused...

Dr: I mean, she's carrying a little Khurana now

Maan is so happy...

Even Geet didn't expect this...

She is very very happy...

Maan looks at Geet...she blushses...

Maan: thanks Dr

Dr: Mrs.Khurana, take care, let's see next month

Maan is so happy that he forgets about his B'day...

He is only worried about Geet now...

How is this child going to take care of another?

But Maan will take care of both his children, haina?

He decides to take up some new case at Delhi and stay with Geet itself till she completes her exams...

Maan has to drop her and pick her up from college...

And yes, he has to acompany her till her class...

It's on the second floor know...

Sam is with her, but still Maan wouldn't take any risk...

After all the sufferings she had been thru babaj has finally blessed her with happiness...

This child would help her forget the past and she will not miss her family any more...

Yes, she already has a family but still this is her own blood, and Geet is overwhelmed that babaji had given her a chance to pay back Maan...

Maan is not the one who expects pay backs, but still Geet is happy that she is being able to make him happy once instead of troubling him all the time...

Just as they leave the Dr's room Geet jumos in joy and the nurse who had been following them stops her...

Sister: hmm hmm no more jumping Mrs.Khurana, jab baby bada hotha tab usske saath jump karlo, abhi nahi

Maan: Geet, suna tumne, abhi se ye bachpana chodtho aur apna khyaal rakho

Geet: Maan, aapne suna, aap papa bannewale ho

Maan: haan Geet, ab toh meri zamedari aur badh gayi

Geet: meri bhi, Maan ab toh mein 24*7 aapke saath hi rahoongi, aap jaise kehthe ho waise hi karoongi, iss bar koi galthi nahi karoongi

Geet is a little worried how would she manage with all her carelessness...

Maan: haan Geet, ab mein har waqt tere saath rahoonga aur tumme fikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahi, mein hoona, mein sab sambaloonga, tumme bas teek se khana hai, time pe sona hai,aaram karna hai, apna khyaal rakhna hai aur sabse important tumme kissi bhi tarah ki tension nahi lena hai, tumme toh bas kush rehna hai, samjhi tum

Maan knows that why Geet is worried...all the girls depend on their mother at such times...

Maan has to become the mother of the going to be mother...

Maan knows that very well...

They return to KM...

Maan is welcomed by everyone with a huge greeting...

HaPpY bIrThDaY dEaR MaAn...

Geet starts to sing followed by the others...

Maan is surprised and now he knows why no one even wished him...not even Annie...

Annie comes and hugs Maan...

Annie: Happy B'day bhai

Maan: thanks Annie, for everything

Annie: mujhe nahi Geet ko thank karo, usne toh kitna mushkil se isse surprise rakha, she even fainted for that, haina Geet

Annie looks at Geet and winks...

Maan: what? Geet?

Geet is scared...but Maan doesn't get angry at all...

How could he get angry with her now?

Annie is surprised...

Annie: kya baat hai Geet? tumne aaj kaise jadu kiya? Maan bhai toh budha ban gaye

Maan looks at Geet's tummy itself...

Geet is embarrassed...

She moves to the cake and asks Maan to come and cut it...

Geet: Maan, jaldhi kaato, mujhe bhook lagi hai

Maan: tumme bhook lagi hai ya

Maan touches her tummy...

Geet closes her eyes with her hands...

Annie: hare Geet, ye kya ho raha hai?

Dadi had guessed what's going on...

She goes and hugs Geet...

Geet takes Dadi's aashirvaad...

Dadi: kush raho bete

Annie: dadi, it's bhai's b'day

Maan then gets dadi's blessings...

Dadi: apne pathni ko hamesha kush rakhna

Annie: what's this dadi? Aap toh aaj Geet ki side legaye ho

Dadi: aaj se hum sab Geet ke side hi lenge, kyunke Geet has given us promotion

Annie: what?

Dadi: haan Annie, ab aap mausi bannewwale hai aur hum Great Gradma

Annie: sach Geet

Annie goes and hugs Geet...she kisses her forehead...

Annie: I'm so happy Geet, ab toh mujhe apne babhi ka kaas khyaal rakhna padegi

Sam: Geeet, congrats

Sam too is very very happy...

All the girls surround Geet and are so excited for she is the first to have conceived ...

And Annie and Sam have to learn their lessons from Geet...

Aur Geet ko kaun samjayega? Aur kaun? Hummara MSK...

Now all of them comfortably forget the cake...

Maan waits with the knife in his hands and keeps adoring his Mishty...

She is looking divine...why not? She's like a goddess now...

She's about to create a new life...only a woman is gifted with this magic...

Geet: hare, aaj ka hero toh MSK hai, aao aao sab

Maan cuts the cake and the party starts...

And Annie requests Maneet to dance for Kurban Hua for Sam had told about their mersmerised dancing at her B'day...

Annie had missed that and she wants to see them dancing as a couple...

And Maan toh phir se kurba ho gaya hai...

Iss bar ko hiding...kullam kulla pyaar...

Maneet dance to the tunes but Maan is careful that Geet is not straning ...

After the party Maan waits for Geet in his room...

Geet had gone to meet Sam...

She has to take the gift she got for Maan in Delhi...

Geet had packed it and given it to sam to bring it along with her things...

Geet and Sam look for it but it's not there...

Geet had left it in delhi itself...

She had neatly wrapped it and was about to take it to Sam's room when Maan suddenly entered and Geet quickly hid it in the kitchen...

Maan took Geet home and Geet totally forgot about it...

Now it's there in the apartment...

Geet is angry with herself for forgetting everything like this...

She returns to her room...

Maan is eaherly waiting for her...

Maan: Geeet

Maan comes to the door to take her in...

She looks dull...maybe she is tired...

Maan lifts her and carries her to the bed...

Geet: Maan

Maan: ssshhh

Geet keeps looking at Maan...

Geet: Maan

Maan: hmmm

Geet: aap bahut achhce ho

Maan leaves her on the bed and moves to take the ear rings...

Geet catches hold of his hands and stops him...

Geet: Maan, kahan jaathe ho? hospital mein toh bade bade batein kar rahe the ki ab aap 24*7 mere paas rahoge

Maan turns back and sits beside her...

Geet makes his lap her pillow...

Maan looks at her and smiles...

Maan: meri Mishti ab itni badi ho gayi? Aaj toh mein bahut bahut kush hoon Geet, thank you Geet for taking me along side in this beautiful journey of life...

Geet: kya Maan aaj aap shayer ki tarah batein kar rahe ho, mujhe toh kuch samaj mein nahi aatha

Maan: hare buddu, meinne kaha ki mujhe apni zindagi mein apnane ke liye aur apna humsafar banana ke liye shukriyada toh karna haina?

Geet: ab mein aapki shukriyada karna shuru karthi toh subha ho jayegi, aap ko aaj kya ho gaya? Aap meri tarah batein kar rahe ho, ye kaisa mazak hai Maan?

Maan: I mean it Geet, meinne toh kabhi bhi shadhi nahi karne ki faisla kar liya tha, magar jab se tumme dekha mera mann dhere dhere badal gaya aur tab hi meinne socha liya ki agar meri zindagi mein shadhi hogi toh woh tummare saath hi hogi

Geet: sachi?

Maan: pehle toh mujhe laga ki MSK kaise aaise pagalpan mein pasgaya? Par ab mujhe patha chalgaya ki pyaar pagalpan nahi balki zaroorat hai

Geet: Maan aap raat bar aaise batein karthe rahoge kya?

Maan: kyun Geet?

Geet: mujhe neendh aarahi hai, aap mere liye ek kahaani sunaona

Geet ko lagtha ki ye Maan ki bas ki baat nahi aur woh bhi sojayega

Lekhin Maan apni kahaani shuru kartha...

Maan: ek Rajkumar tha

Geet: Maan, itni purani kahaani?

Maan: sshhh suno toh sahi

Geet: hmmm

Maan: aur ussko laga ki ek Rajkumar hone ke nade usska kaam hoga apne Rajya ko aur bada karna, aur woh issi kaam ko ek tapasya manke apne sena ko lekhe jung ladthe jaatha aur jeet the jaatha, ek waqt jab woh kissi jungle mein jaatha usne ek pari ko dekha, aur usska peecha kiya, lekhin woh kissi shikari ke peeche jaa rahi thi, ussko patha nahi chal ki woh ussko hi shikar banyega ek din, lekhin uss rajkumar toh uss shikari ko dkehthe hi samaj gaya ki ye kaisa aadmi hai, Raj kumar uss pari ko shikari se bachakar apne saath lekhe jaatha aur ussko apni Rajkumari banatha

Geet had already slept...

Maan slowly shifts her to the pillow and takes the ear rings...

He carefully removes her old one and wears the new one...

Geet wakes up with his touch and she looks into his eyes...

Geet: Maan

She hugs him tight...

Geet starts weeping...

Maan: Geet, kya hua?

Geet: woh aaj meinne aapko kuch nahi diya, mein ne toh aapki gift ko Delhi mein hi rakh ke aagayi, aur mujhe abhi abhi chala ki mein bhool ke aagayi, I'm sorry Maan

Maan: Geet, tumme sorry kehne ki koi zaroorat nahi, tumne toh pehle hi mujhe itna achcha tofa de diya haina?

Geet: meinne kab diya?

Maan touches her belly and looks into her eyes...Maneet eyelock...

Maan: isse achcha tofa kya ho saktha hai Geet, mere liye toh tum hi sab se badiya gift ho Geet

Maneet passionate hug...mahiii...

After 9 months...

Geet gives birth to a little prince...

Maneet love story continues...

THE END
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Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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