DANGEROUS ISHQ...updated last pt 70 on pg 99 nov 23 - Page 42

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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice
geet showing anger as maan is packing his bag saying he is not having time for her but when maan wants geet she run away to her friends

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part😊
maan planning to kidnap his mishty for HM
maan ko wahi karna padega...kyun ki geet har waqt sam ke saath rehthi hai..ab annie bhi aarahi hai😆
Edited by -Mithuna- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
kabhi nehi badlenge dono...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Part - 65

Next morning...

Maneet leave for Manali while Sam awaits Vicky's arrival...

Vicky and Annie come in the noon and Annie is little disappointed that both Geet and Maan are missing...

But Sam welcomes Annie and she is so happy to join the Mumbai gang...

Sam takes Vicky out and Pinky and Tasha are off to college...

Annie gets bored and she calls Geet...

Geet's mobile is switched off, thanks to MSK...

Annie immediately calls Maan...

Maneet have just checked in and Maan has gone to freshen up...

Geet attends the call...she is so excited...

Geet: Annie, tu aagayi?

Annie: haan Geet, par tum toh mere aane ke kabar subthe hi bhaag gayi ho

Geet: aaisa kuch nahi hai Annie, ye Maan ne achanak plan banaliya, mujhe toh kal raat hi patha chala

Annie: toh Geet, Manali kaisi hai?

Geet: it's just stunning, it's so refreshing and I love it

Annie: ohhh I missed it, patha hai Geet, it's one of my favourite places

Geet: achcha? Maan ne bathaya kyun nahi?

Stupid Geet...Maan yahan Manali ke mosam enjoy karne thodi nahi aaya...

Annie: bhai ka bhi favourite hai

Geet: ohhh

Annie: Geet, aaj ka kya plan hai?

Geet: aaj oura din hum gumne jayenge

Maan just comes out of the washroom...

He just comes and shakes his head to sprinkle water from hs wet hair...

Geet turns back and Maan catches hold of her...

Geet: Maaan Anieee

Maan moves back and looks around...

Maan: Geeet, Annie kahan hai?

Geet takes the mobile that had droped from her hands...

Geet: phone pe

Geet had successfully fooled Maan...

Maan: tumne mujhe ullu banaya?

Maan chases Geet and Geet runs for safety...

Maan gets hold of Geet and pulls her closer...

Geet: Maan, aap jaldhi tayaar ho jao, mein bhi fresh hoke aathi hoon

Maan: mein toh tayaar hoon Geet

He is still in his towel...

Geet stares him...

Geet: aap aaise bahar jaoge?

Maan: bahar kaun jaa rah hai?

So saying Maan lifts Geet and places her on the bed...

Geet: Maan, ye kya hai? mujhe manali nahi dikahoge?

Maan: tum yahan gumne aaye ho?

Geet: nahi mein yahan padne aayi hoon, haina?

Maan: achcha Geet, lets start the lessons

Geet: what?

Maan: tumme toh bahut kuch seekhna hai

Geet: Maan, ye kaise mazak hai

Maan: pehla lesson, Manali se jaane tak koi sawaal nahi karogi tum, smajhi?

Geet: sawaal kyun nahi kar sakthi?

Maan closes her mouth...

Maan: chup bilkul chup... ek aur sabt nahi

Maan pretends to be angry...

Geet shakes her head...hmm hmmm

Maan: abhi jaake tum bhi apne class ke liye tayaar ho jao

Geet goes to take bath...

She returns after a shower to get her dress...

She opens her trolley and finds very short and revealing suits just not her type of dress...

She thinks that her bag has been swaped and she turns towards Maan who is lying on th bed drooling...

Maan is admiring his Mishti and enjoying her plight...

Geet: Maan, lagtha hai luggage badal gaya

Maan: nahi Geet, meinne check kiya tha, sab hummar hi hai

Geet: nahi Maan, ye meri nahi hai

Maan: teek se dekho Geet, ye tummari hi hai

Geet shows the suit to him...

Geet: ye kiss angle se mere kapde lagthe hai Maan?

Maan: ye toh har angle se tummare hi lagthe hai Geet, meinne kitne gante ki shopping kiya tha iss ke liye

Geet: kya? ye aap laye ho? kisske liye Maan? Hummare bachi ke liye?

Maan: hummari bachi nahi, meri soni bachi Geet ke liye

Geet: Maan, mein aaise kapde kaise pehen sakthi

Maan: mein hoona, mein madat kartha hoon

Maan gets on his feet in a second and tries to help her...

He catches hold of the towel and pulls it...

Geet too pulls it...

Maan pulls harder and both of them fall on the bed...

Maan doesn't miss the opportunity...mahiii...

Geet comfortably lies beside Maan as he embraces her within his long arms...

Geet: Maan, aap ne kya kiya hai?

Maan: meinne kya kiya Geet? sab apne HM pe yahi karthe hai

Geet: woh nahi hai

Maan: achcha hua ki tumme patha hai ki HM kyun jaathe hai

Geet: Maaan

Maan: Geet, tum kya kehthi ho?

Geet: ye kapde? Mein inne pehenke bahar kaise jaa sakthi?

Maan: Geet, tumme bahar jaane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai, ye toh andar ki baat hai

Geet: Salman ki dialogue ko kyun churathe ho?

Maan: hare Geet, ye sab iss char deewar ki andar pehenne ke liye hi hai

Maan winks...

Geet: kya?

Maan: ahchca Geet, shuru ho jao

Maan opens the bag and selects a suit for her...

Maan: pehle ye

Geet looks at it and closes her eyes...: chi chi, mein ye nahi pehen sakthi

Maan: Geet, teek se socho, abhi tohtumme ye pehenna hai ya nahi

Geet: nahi

Maan: toh teek hai, mujhe koi probem nahi hai

Maan starts pulling the quilt and just then Geet realizes that she is yet to dress...

Geet: nahi Maan

Geet tries to stop him...

Maan: tumme toh mere choice pasand nahi haina?

Geet: nahi, mujhe pasand haina? Mein yahi pehenthi hoon

Geet quickly dresses herself...

Maan never takes his eyes off her...

Geet blushes as she still feels as if she has not put on her clothes...

Maan signals her to come near...

Geet closes her syes with her hands and runs away...

Maan jumps and catches hold of her...

Maan: Geet, tum toh bahut sundar lagthi ho

Geet: Maan, abhi toh break ka time ho gaya hai

Maan: what?

Geet: kitkat break

Maan: Geet, are you kidding?

Geet: Maan, mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai

Maan: tab toh break lena hi padega...

You too have a kitkat break...

Part66

started the next story... Tum mille...

pls check this too...

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
finally maaneet go for hm

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Posted: 10 years ago
part 61
awesome dear...
lovely...
the way they tease is so lovely...
Sam has the feeling thats its about her marriage...
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 62
awesome...
the elders are so smart...
Sam was gonna refuse but realized its Vicky's family...
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 63
awesome dear...
wow Vicky gave her the car?
nice one...
it was a shock to Vicky too...
but they confessed at least now...
lovely...
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update!!
maaneet went to manali for hm
they are enjoying there😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part - 66

Maan orders room service and Geet relishes her favourite Punjabi khana...

After a good feast they take a quick nap...

In the evening, Geet wakes and fnds Maan still sleeping...

She searches her mobile and finds that it's switched off...

Geet: ye Maan ka kaam hi hoga

She quickly moves to the balcony without disturbing Maan and calls Annie...

Geet was worried that she had abtruptly cut Annie's call...

And Annie too didn't want to disturb them...

Annie: halo Geet

Geet: Annie, Sam kahan hai?

Annie: Vicky ke saath bahar gayi hai

Geet: tumme chodke chali gayi?

Annie: tub hi toh chali gayi ho

Geet: sorry Annie

Annie: hay Geet, I'm just kidding, so, aaj kahan kahan gumke aaye ho?

Geet couldn't answer...she begins to think...

Geet: aaj? Aaj hum...

Annie: achcha achcha, mein samaj gayi

Annie giggles...

Geet is embarrassed...

Annie: so, you are very busy Geet, OK Geet, you carry on

Geet: Annnieee

Annie: haan Geet

Geet: tum log bhi Manali kyun nahi aathe?

Annie: that's a great idea Geet

Geet: haan toh kal hi sab aajao, saath mein

Annie: saath mein HM manayenge, par Arjun nahi haina

Geet: tum Arjunji ko bhi bhulao

Annie: Arjun ko bhi? Bhai bahut kush honge, haina Geet?

Geet: haan, Maan ko bahut badi surprise hoga

Annie: surprise? Nahi Geet, ye toh zor ka jatka hoga

Geet: toh kal milthe hai

Annie: OK Geet, bye

Geet is so happy...

Maan searches Geet and finds her...

Maan: Geet, tumme phir bhook lagi hai kya?

Geet: nahi Maan

Maan: phir yahan kya kar rahi ho?

Geet: woh mein Annie se baat kar rahi thi

Maan: roh issiliye itne kush ho?

Geet: Maan, aap ko patha hai kal

Geet stops...

Maan: kal kya?

Geet: kuch nahi, kal kuch bhi nahi

Maan finds something wrong with Geet's answer...

Maan: Geet, kya chupa rahi ho mujhse?

Geet: kuch nahi Maan, kuch bhi nahi

Maan: Geet, tumme joot bolna nahi aatha, sach sach bathao, kal kya hone wala hai?

Geet: kal hum kya karenge?

Maan: what?

Geet: woh Maan

Geet gets closer...she tries to distract him...

Maan couldn't believe it...

Geet: kal bhi hum kya aaise hi

Geet stops...

Maan continues...

Maan: aaise hi?

Geet feels shy...

Maan: tum jab shramathi haina, tab toh mera mood ho jatha

Geet: kya?

Maan: ssshhh ab aur batein nahi kal ki batein kal karenge aur aaj ka kaam aaj

Geet: Maaan

Mahiii

Next day...

Annie calls again...

Geet: Annie, tum ne Arjun ji se baat kiya?

Annie: haan, Arjun is on his way, he'll join us at Manali itself

Geet: good, aur tum log kab nikal rahe ho?

Annie: aaj raat ki flight hai

Geet: toh tum log kal aathe ho?

Geet is very happy...

Maan is surprised to see Geet so excited...

Maan: Geet, kaun hai?

Geet: Annie

Maan: Annie? Mujhe baat karna hai

Aanie: bhai, aapne toh secret mission(HM) banaliya aur mujhe bathaya bhi nahi?

Maan: tum hi kehthe haina, secret mission, tum logon ko pehle hi patha chaltha toh mujhe chodke tumlog chale jaathe haina?

Annie: bhai, hum aaj raat ki flight pakadke aarahe hai

Maan: what? Geeet

Annie cuts the call...kaam ho gaya na...

Geet: Maan, kaisa laga meri surprise?

Maan: wah wah Geet, tum kitne samajdar ho?

Geet: kal Annie bhi aayegi toh kitna maza aayega, haina?

Maan toh bahut kush ho gaya...aur hummari stupid Geet toh kushi se pagal ho rahi hai...

Maan: babaji, ab iss ladhki ko aap kaise sambalthe? Achca kiya aapne? Ab aapko isse mere shir pe bitakke aap bach gaye ho

Geet: Maan, aap bhi babaji se batein karthe ho?

Maan: tujhe shadhi karke aadmi babaji se kya apne aap se bhi batein karne lagega

Geet: kya?

Maan: Geet, tumne aur kitne log ko invite kiya hai, hummare HM celebrate karne?

Geet: meinne toh sirf Annie, Arjunji, Sam, Vicky, Pinky aur Tasha ko bhulaya hai

Geet then keeps thinking if she has left out anyone...

Geet: Maan, meinne toh Adi sir ko bhool gayi, aap unko bhi bualaona, Pinky bhi bahut kush hogi

Maan: aur saath mein Romeo ko bhi bhulatha hoon, Tasha bhi kush hogi, haina Geet?

Geet: haan Maan, aap bahut achche ho

Maan: mein ek kaam kartha hoon Geet, mein Mumbai wapas chale jaatha hoon, tum sab ke saath HM manake aana, teek hai?

Maan is frustrated...he couldn't control his anger...

Geet: aap jaa rahe ho? aapko koi urgent kaam aagaya?

Maan: kyun tum bhi mere saath aayegi?

Geet: mein kaise aa sakthi? Kal sab yahan aa rahe hai toh mein sab ko chodke kaise aathi?

Maan: aur Maan ko toh tum ek second mein bhool jathi ho

Geet: kya?

Maan: isse achcha hum Delhi mein hi rukhthe

Geet: meine aapko HM lekhe aane ko kaha tha? nahi na? phir mujhse kyun naraz hothe ho?

Maan: mein tumse nahi apne aap se naraz hoon, duniya ke karodon ladhkiyon mein meinne tumse pyaar jo kiya haina

Geet: aap iss duniya mein hi nahi iss pura universe mein hi doodhlo, aapko dusri Geet kahin nahi milegi, samjhe aap?

Maan: babaji, ek Geet ko hi iss duniya sambal nahi sakthi ek aur hothi toh?

Geet: aap ne kya kaha?

Maan: meine tumse nahi babaji se baat kiya

Geet: babaji se mere barein mein kya kaha aapne?

Maan: tummare hi babaji haina? Tum unse hi poochlo

Geet: Maan, aap bahut bhura ho, pure ke pure Dhust Danav ho

Maneet start fighting...

Annie calls back...

Geet: halo, Annie

Annie: Geet, kya hua? Tum itne udaas kyun ho?

Geet: woh tummare bhai mujhse naraz ho gaye hai

Annie: what? bhai se baat karawo

Geet gives the phone to Maan...

Maan: Annie

Annie: bhai, aap Geet ko parehsaan kyun karthe ho?

Maan: Annie, tummare babhi ko ab mein sambal nahi saktha, tum hi aake usko sambalo

Annie: tummare bhai, tummari babhi, ye kya hai bhai? Aap donno toh kids bangaye ho

Maan realizes that he too has started stupid like Geet...Geet ke saath rehne ka asar...

Maan: forget that, when are you coming?

Annie: where?

Maan: Manali?

Annie: are you kidding?

Maan: Sam aur Vicky?

Annie had just played a game with Geet and Maan too became a victim...

Annie: bhai, I'm here to help Vciky shopping for his wedding not to disturb you

Annie starts laughing...

Maan then finds out that it's one of Annie's pranks to fool him...

Geet could be easily fooled, but what happened to Maan?

Didn't he know that Annie is not Geet and she knows HM is meant for the couple alone...

Maan sighs...now he can have his Geet for himself for the rest of the days...

Maneet have a blasting HM at Manali...

updated New FF - Tum Mille

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago

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