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Posted: 11 years ago
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Crushed it was, yet in the locker

states her state of mind, which she doesn't know even.
Awesome update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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BREAKING WAVES : PART 3

After dedicating two complete hours to prepare a New Mexican dish that she had searched up on the internet, she came up with something that tasted nothing Mexican. She was happy that the dish was at least edible, and why wouldn't it be? After loading it with the most expensive and fancy ingredients, exclusively fetched from one of the most posh markets of the city, even grass as a main ingredient would turn edible. She didn't bother to either garnish it or cherish the non-existent beauty of the dish. She was famished and she started to gobble it all. She sat on the floor of her room eating the dish without analysing it much, when her eyes fell on the flowers lying at the corner of the floor. As much as she tried to remove the conversation they had a few weeks later she ended everything from her side, she couldn't. He confronted her for the first and last time and she didn't bother to answer any of them. All that mattered at that point for her was to go away from everything that upset her and weakened her.

You always get to decide each and everything about our relationship Geet. How is that even fair? The fact is that more than being disappointed with me, you want to run, run away from anything that tied you and demanded any kind of explanation from you and all of your actions.

She kept the bowl aside and sat ideally on the floor.

The night after hurling insults at her father and being totally broken by everything that had happened in the last few days, she for the first time experienced gut wrenching fear. The night when one of the father's enemies decided to get even with her father, she was the one most affected by everything that followed. For the first time ever, she saw a gun pointed at her father followed by threats to finish and destroy him. That night, her father was rushed to a hospital due to a panic attack and the numerous amounts of calls by her to Maan's house were left unresponded. She spent the whole night baffled and scared.

Much to her disappointment, if there was anything that crossed her mind, it was the number of times her bond with Maan weakened at the time of misery and her helplessness.

It was nobody's fault but the series of events that were weaved together, one after the other left her with utmost dismay. Everything around instilled maximum possible cynicism in her. Maan was right; she ended the relationship with Maan not because he didn't lend her unconditional support. After everything they shared, it was evident that her lie wasn't something that would go down easily with anybody who trusted her. If there was immense disappointment, it was from both the sides.

Geet did want to run away, from what, she didn't know, from the immense disappointment she had faced, disappointed by herself, who never could gather efforts to tell the truth and disappointed by him for every time he backed out, when all she needed was him.

It was a vicious circle which trapped their relation and neither was Geet strong and sorted out to solve and make things better nor was Maan mature enough to take responsibility and deal with all the things that went wrong between them.

She sat ideally on the floor and stared into nothingness, it was her tendency to victimise herself at times. That's what she did when she saw Maan at the hospital. All the memories came rushing back and she conveniently put blame on Maan's actions for their broken relationship whereas she had been aware of the truth throughout. She wondered what Maan had to say after all these years.

She shrugged off her thoughts and decided to concentrate on the almost dried up Mexican dish. She stirred her spoon in the bowl and suddenly found it in-edible. She dropped the idea of feeding herself when she decided to call her friend and grab something from the restaurant. She saw the message on her mobile and stood still for a while. How the hell did Maan get her number? Did he turn a stalker in all these years? It didn't sound like an impossible thing though. Maan wanted to meet her, for once. Geet kept staring at the message for a while. She didn't want to get into something she left behind years ago. She put her phone aside and changed her plans once again. She decided to make something simpler for herself to eat instead of going out.

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She splashed water over her face and nervously looked at herself in the mirror. She checked the last sent message in her mobile. To either get over him or truly move on, all she needed to do was provide freedom to her thoughts. All she knew was, things were now changed along with their priorities. The two people who fell in love with each other once upon a time were changed people with probably extremely different notions of happily ever afters contradictory to the similar notions they had, years ago. He probably knew that as well, if not, she would let him know.

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Note : Next page/Pg 7

Edited by -Crayon- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
'' the end '' !??

Okk ...i was expecting lil more
Lol
Coz i'm confused
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
Add me too in the confusion list... It just ended... But there was no closure, nothing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ye end kaise hoga ..yaha maan geet dono hi galat he aur dono hi ek dusre se bahut pyar karte he ..but ye to geet ka ego bhi show kar raha he k geet jaanti he k wo bhi galat thi usene sara blame maan pe daal diya jabki wo khid maan ko chod k aai .aur maan bhi hurt tha may b geet maan ki jagah hoti to ese hi react karti jese maan ne kiya
They should patch up now
Maan wanted to meet geet but yaha geet hi nahi mil rahi maan se

Plz give happy ending warna ye incomplete lagega
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
You are not ending it there right? You probably meant 'end of chapter'?

I like how Geet revealed more about the emotions of that time and now I can see that it was not only Maan's fault but also Geet's as she ran instead of facing everyone.

I want to see what happens when Geet and Maan come face to face. I want to know what is Maan thinking.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Is this the end? I hope not...it will be good to have an confrontation, maybe a closure for both if not renewal but will it be weird to say that if this is the end I still find sense to it.
she ran away and he didn't pursue but both of them had changed now.Hope they confront. Old wounds always hurt especially if kept untreated and we have to face them no matter how difficult that may sound...😊

do write at least one more chapter giving them a chance to confront
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Note:

Hello folks!
First of all, A big hug to you all. 🤗
To be honest, I have ended the story right here, because I thought I wouldn't be able to dedicate much time to it and I had to write this part to make things clear that their parting ways was either nobody's fault or a fault of both.
I hardly write anything that gets people emotionally invested or involved, by that I get the freedom to end stuff however I want. But I realized this is different.
I see quite a people who have spent the effort and taken out time to express everything they felt and it would be unfair from my side if I leave everybody clueless.
So this will have one more part that will hopefully pull everybody(inc. me) out of confusion. 😆
Love you all!
Thanks for expressing the pleasure or displeasure with the story. It helps me a lot.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update, how this could be the end.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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