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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting start, waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kabslocks

interesting start, waiting for next part


Thank U! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hay pep!
If u r following Dadi's last Wish! Then do check the next given!😃

N for this one will give the first part tomorrow. ... if time permits that is. ...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part#1



Being a hot country the temperature was too hot people around were relaxing around the pool ... some just wandering around...

The silence around was getting scary in the suit room were few people were discussing their deal just few minutes ago... it not difficult to guess that certain someone was not very happy with the deal!

N it was not something which will end good...

But to our surprise he just smiled a small one though n left with his guards...

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Next day

In middle of some desert ...

Someone was lying almost lifeless after being badly beaten up...

Just then a helicopter landed nearby n a person stepped down drinking his coke...

M.K please ... this is the last time ... I will agree to whatever your conditions are... n u can take the diamonds ...

I don't like people showing me attitude... Kill him!


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Geet!

Geet!

Babaji where did she go?? Here I'm back after one whole week n look at her ... y did you give me such a unromantic wife??

Normally in such situations when husband's return from the trip wife's are all around them looking to there needs asking them to rest...n most importantly welcoming them with warm hug... n giving a nice missed you kiss..

wow ! It feels so nice imagining Misthi doing all such things but where is she...

Oh I forgot her most favorite place my study! As it has a huge library attached to it... n my Misthi loves reading. ..

There she is looking like a portrait. .. all lost in her book with glasses almost at the tip of her nose... few strands if her falling on her face.. rest tied up in a loose plat. ..she didn't even look up!

Geet!

Hmm. .

I'm back. ..

Hmmm...

Ok! I'll go n fresh n up!

Y is she acting strange there's definitely something cooking up in her mind...

OMG were are my clothes?

NAKUL !

Don't shout! All ur stuff has been shifted to terrace bedroom. . As u didn't have any problem staying away for 7 days u will not have any further also... now if u excuse me ... I'm quite sleepy... n I have college tomorrow so...

But Misthi!

(Bang!)

What just happened my Misthi just shut the door on my face!

Now I've to sleep all alone... n I won't get to meet her tomorrow as she has college...

It's a beautiful night same as the one I saw her for the first time!

My car was struck in the middle of the road n my guards weren't able to find any other transport. .. That's when I saw her walking across the road!

She saw my guards n asked if she could be of any help. ... I was standing in the dark so I guess she didn't notice me... she looked into the car n did something. .. n suddenly it started!

As she came out of the bonnet n talked to the driver n left. ... I didn't even know how to react!

N kept staring at her retiring figure. ...

From that day I never let any of my driver touch that car... I thought smiling at my memory. .. when I felt a slight weight on my shoulder!

Misthi! I called her pulling her more towards me. ..

I'll listen to your nonsense tomorrow maan im sleepy! N I want the complete story of this deal. .. I love listening to your adventures u know that right?

Ok! But for now sleep...




To be continued. ...



Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for liking! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part#2

First Official meeting!(past)

Thank you so much babaji! U seem to love making my life difficult! Now that the seminar is over where will I get a taxi from n that too in in such a hour...

Ok at least I'll have my dinner. ... till the cab comes. ...

God I'm hallucinating again. .. its MSK! Maybe he's here for some meeting. .. he looks so hot in black n his style. ... oh shit he saw me...

We were discussing some drug deal when I felt someone looking at me... oh it's her does she know me? Of course she would know ... still she's drooling over me... gosh she looks so cute in her glasses. .. Now where is she going. ...

I saw her walk through the back door ... now she's nowhere ... hmmm.. got u !

Hay ! Gorgeous. .. y r u running. .. let's talk for a while ...I'm not a bad company you know!

I said putting my hand on her waist. .. n giving it a squeeze. ..

SLAP!!

Next second my eyes widened. .. n my hand reached to my cheek ...I pouted looking at her. ..

Don't u dare pull such cheep tricks on me...

But u were drooling over me...

So...

Do u have a boyfriend?

What?? It's useless to even talk to you. ..

She just walked of that too after slapping me.. The Maan Singh Khurana! But y? In all the movies they something similar to what I said right! N the girl plays along. .. N she slapped me...

I think my dialogue was wrong someware. .. I guess I'm too much drunk ... y can I c her in front of me?

I walked back to the restaurant as I forgot my books. .. just then I noticed a little crowd near the bar... to my curiosity as I leaned over n saw it was him... Babaji what's wrong with him... N where are his damn guards?

Now enough of the drama get up quitely .. n come with me...

Babaji he looks so cute ... come on geet concentrate. ... as I walked out of the restaurant I found his guards roaming around searching for him...

If u all r done with your walk pull the car we need to move out of this place now!

I heard him shout at them... n they immediately rushed n within seconds there was a car in front of me. .

I asked him to sit n sat becide him ... I knew he was drunk n it was not safe to let him go alone. ... Now Babaji I'm worried about the safety of a stranger who's a underworld Don!

The guards helped him towards his room n left... he wasn't leaving me.. so I sat by the floor n slept!



Next morning

I woke up with the severe headache. . Only to notice someone sleeping on the floor. . N I was holding her hand. ..
I rubbed my eyes n saw it was her! Oh so my dialogue worked.. I thought Grinning foolishly!

I saw her stirring out of sleep n looking at me... n I was ready with my line. ..

Hay gorgeous! So how did you like my Room? I said winking at her...

N next second she grabbed the water jug n emptied it on my head n stormed out.. banging the door shut!

Babaji?!



To be continued. ...

Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Maan got slap 4m geet well if u tel d dialouge 2 geet 4 sure u ill get slap nd geet is so cute she didnt leave maan alone nd mrng maan got nice shower 4m geet lovely update waitng 4 d nxt part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Cute fights
Loving a don gngto b interstng
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: christipie

Maan got slap 4m geet well if u tel d dialouge 2 geet 4 sure u ill get slap nd geet is so cute she didnt leave maan alone nd mrng maan got nice shower 4m geet lovely update waitng 4 d nxt part


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: divydecember

Cute fights
Loving a don gngto b interstng

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