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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

i am really sorry for the delay guys. but i am caught up bad in EID celebrations. i am trying my best to post as soon as possible.May be i will be able to update by tomorrow.


and all my friends...


EID MUBARAK...


I know it's late but still...😛

till then enjoy the teaser...




TEASER



Geet froze in place sensing him. Maan moved both of them towards the less crowded side of the dance floor. He said in a husky voice saying "Geet..." Geet closed her eyes feeling the moment. Was it wrong to feel peace for some moments, was it wrong to feel loved for some moments, was it wrong to be able to breath properly after such long time.

Maan chuckled slightly to see his effect on his mishty. He smiled saying "breath geet, m not gonna eat u..." Geet sighed giving into the demands of her heart.
Edited by Tarina.R.Totini - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
hey dear,...😛

iam coming across all stories of writers by their profile...just came across ur story too 😆


read all parts in a one go😊


really awesome and hooking story 👏


keep it up dear ⭐️


lovely teaser too..☺️


uma..🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
very nice ss
pls continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
waiting and happy friendship day
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85


HAPPY FRIENDSHIP GUYSS, LOVE U ALL...😛



PART 05. SOME TRUTH




Both were lost in each other. Trying to figure out what went wrong in their life, what made everything so sour, what made this difference, what caused such longing. Geet's eyes moisten to thinking about the past. She diverted her eyes from him looking to the other side. Maan kept staring at her until she diverted eyes. He sighed walking back to the bar where his friends were laughing without a care.

Geet was trying to control her feelings when Pinky tapped on her shoulder. She looked at her with a smile hiding her tears. Pinky looked at her in concern "kya hua geetu?? U look tense??" Geet smiled trying to divert her attention "are kuch nahi pinks... " Pinky held her hand saying "what are u hiding from me geetu??" Geet held her hands tightly saying "nothing pinks, u know I can never hide anything from you. U know na yeh club wab mujhe nahi bhata... it's just not me." Pinky nodded her head still unsure. She called one waiter saying "u wanna have something ??" Geet dismissed the waiter as soon as he appeared saying "no, m not having anything, so as u." Pinky pouted saying "y...?? we r in a club geetu. Let's enjoy na.." geet moved her head in denial saying " u knw what happens when u drink. U can do anything even kill anyone while u r drunk & m not putting up with that.." Pinky pouted again saying " kya yaar, who bohut pehle ki baat hai. It won't happen. I'l drink a little I promise. " Geet glared at her & was going toshout on her when Yash joined them "whats up ladies?? Having fun ??" He sat beside Pinky & started chatting away.

Maan looked from far seeing her chatting with Pinks & that dickhead. He sipped his drinks while gaping at her. She was smiling but her eyes wandered for him. He smiled looking away. He knew she was in pain as much as he was. But still she won't budge. He looked back at them when he saw pinky trying to take her on the dance floor. She was struggling to get away & was succeeding. When that dickhead & pinky pulled together geet & the next moment she was on the dance floor. Maan also got up moving towards the dance floor ignoring the crowd of girls who were wandering around him.

Adi was watching Maan from a long time. He tried to look where he was watching. He frowned to look at Maan's smiling face. He again tried to look only to get the shock of his life. He was shocked to see Geet here. "how come she is here..??" Then he understood Maan's weird behavior. Now he can live without any tension. He was sure Maan will never let Geet walk away. It will be now or never now. He only can hope that everything becomes good.

Geet tried to move back from the dance floor but Pinky won't let her go. "kya hua.. geetu?? Chal na it's so much fun.." Geet still trying to loose her hold said "nahi Pinks.. I really don't want to...pls " Yash pulled Geet in the middle of the dance floor saying "come on Geet, loosen up...na..." As soon as Yash left Geet's hand, she turned to go back. But she halted in place when a strong pair of arms encircled her waist from behind.

Geet froze in place sensing him. Maan moved both of them towards the less crowded side of the dance floor. He said in a husky voice saying "Geet..." Geet closed her eyes feeling the moment. Was it wrong to feel peace for some moments, was it wrong to feel loved for some moments, was it wrong to be able to breath properly after such long time.

Maan chuckled slightly to see his effect on his mishty. He smiled saying "breath geet, m not gonna eat u..." Geet sighed giving into the demands of her heart. She rested her back fully on Maan. He held her tightly even it was possible. He kissed her earlobes lightly & geet released a breath.

Maan slowly turned her towards himself & hugged her for his dear life. Geet hugged him back getting her life back. They felt each other like there was no tomorrow. They hugged each other forgetting the environment, their differences, their problems. Maan brought his lips close to her shoulder & Geet shuddered feeling his warm breath on her skin. Maan kissed her shoulder blade & kept kissing her until he reached the base of her neck. Geet in response held his shoulder tightly. Maan gave a wet kiss on her neck pulse while geet moved her hands in his hairs. Maan bit her on the side of her neck & gave small kisses to soothe the pain. He moved back & looked at her flushed face. She was looking like a cherry to be precise. He smiled & lightly kissed on her forehead & both of her eyes.

Geet slowly opened her eyes to see all the world's love in Maan's eyes. She smiled & kissed Maan's nose. Maan just brought her close saying "kyun jaan.. y r u doing this to us??" That brought back all the memories to Geet & she looked painfully at him. She stepped back & ran towards the exit of the club. Maan ran his hand in his hair frustrated. He ran towards geet. He knew it was now or never.

Geet was startled with a sudden pull on her wrist. She was pulled back & collided with Maan's chest. She looked up only to see Maan's eyes which was filled with rage right now. "why can u just let go off your ego just for once??" Geet glared at him & snapped her hand from him "me... what m I doing..?? hamesha tumhe meri hi galti kyun lagti hai..." "so what do u think k maeri galti ti, after whatever happened between us, I am still here trying to make everything ok..but u.." Geet looked at him in tears wiping them angrily "so u think I don't want everything to be like before. If u think that there is nothing to talk." She again started going but was again blocked by Maan's pull on her wrist. "don't u dare walk out from this.." Maan glared at her while Geet tried to loose his hold. "let me go maan...pls." "no..not until, we sort things out. Every time I put up with your ego. But enough is enough." Geet looked at Maan painfully shaking in tears "then let me go na maan, if I create so much trouble." Maan held her even tightly almost digging is nails in her flesh. "don't u dare give me that attitude geet, don't u dare..."

That broke all Geet's patience & she pushed Maan with all her might. Maan stumbled back with the sudden force &looked at her in shock. Geet held Maan's collar saying"what the hell do u mean maan. Jo bhi hua uske piche sari galti meri hai??? I know I was responsible too. But don't u dare put all the blame on me. I told u not to invite her in the party phir bhi tumne meri baat na suni.Phir bhi job hi hua uske bad I tried to contact with u par tum to jaise gayab hogaye. Tumhara phone try kia, tumhe kitne mail bheje but u never replied. Yaha thak main tumhare office thak gayi but nobody knew where were u. tumhe meri koi parwa nehi thi kya maan. Main zinda bhi hu ya main maar gayi. U just left. Itna gussa maan, itni berukhi who bhi apni mishty se. kyun maan??" Geet cried her hear out & Maan looked at her in shock. He asked in a broken voice still trying to absorb the truth "u tried to contact me.." Geet painfully smiled at him saying "kyun ??? u don't believe me?? To jake apna email account khol k dekho. Dekho tumhri pagal Geet ne kya kya kia.." Maan looked at her in shock when Geet pulled away from him trying to compose herself. "phir pata hai maine kya kia maan, I went to your house. Sab kuch bhul k main waha gayi. Mujhe laga mera maan uski mishti se gussa hai main mana longi. Par mujhe kya pata thaw waaha mujhe jo pata chalega usse main jitegi mar jayungi." Geet stumbled back crying bitterly. Maan went ahead to reach her but she took a few steps back. "janteho kya pata chala, hat u went on a holiday with that b***h. jiski waja se sab kuch hua tum usiki sath..." Geet muffled her cry unable to complete her sentence. Maan at her shock. He didn't know any of this. He tried to say some thing but his voice didn't support him. He never knew she suffered so much. He looked back at her but she looked away wiping her tears. She tried to stable herself. She had to finish this to get rid of this feeling, to get rid of this pain. She gathered herself saying "I still didn't believe that k mera maan yeh kar sakta hai...but when ur mom said k..."Maan snapped his eyes at her while she looked back at him in pain.

She couldn't stand there any more. She ran back towards the parking lot while Maan looked towards her retreating figure in pain.

Edited by Tarina.R.Totini - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
awesome teaser
waiting for the update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Awesome update...thanxs for the pm...continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Waiting to know maan's side of the story, how can h3 win his misty back from this poinT
krati5 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ohhh k... this time maan is going to beat himself
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow lovely emotional touching outburst update..te way wat ever they try but my maaneet craving for each other was lovely emotional..te way my maan holding his geet and both hugging and soothing they wounded hearts drowning in each other was lovely emotional touching..really i love tat scenes..te way geet running away and my maan want to end all they pain and geet ki outburst shocking my maan thnking his geet went so much was lovely emotional..so some one played culprit..i love te update so much

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