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Posted: 10 years ago

FIRST OF ALL, I AM SO SORRY FOR SUCH DELAY. I GOT SO CAUGHT UP IN MY STUDIES & SOME FAMILY PROBLEM THAT I COULDN'T EVEN REPLY TO PMS. SO I AM REALLY VERY SORRY. AND THANK YOU SO MUCH GUYS FOR KEEPING YOUR PATIENCE & WAITING FOR THIS.BUT I AM BACK NOW & WILL BE UPDATING FREQUENTLY IF YOU GUYS WANT. SO HERE GORES THE UPDATE AND PLEASE READ THE NOTE BELOW.




PART 6. GUILTY




"Refill.." Maan shouted again. The bartender looked at him in shock. He has lost the number of times this man has taken shots. He looked helplessly at two persons who were standing with this heavily drunken man. Maan waited for his refill for some time. But his patience broke in some seconds. He threw the glass on he floor smashing it in small pieces screaming " u son of a b****, how many days I have to wait for my drink??" The bartender looked at this dangerous man & gulped his saliva. He made the drink quickly & served Maan as soon as possible. Maan gulped the drink as fast as possible. The burning sensation in his throat soothed him. But it did not soothe his bleeding heart.

Geet's crying face was still haunting his memories. As soon as Geet's word sank in his brain, he at once contacted his mom to know the truth.

Flashback

Maan was continuously dialing his mom's number for past half an hour but she wasn't picking up the phone. His patience was giving up. He had no idea why her mother said such a big lie to Geet. He knew his mother didn't approve of Geet as a Khurana bahu because of her carefree nature. But that's the thing attracted him to her. She was a individual who didn't care what the world thinks about her. She leads her life the way she does, the same way he does. Both of the respects their family & carries their tradition in a significant way but they never let their family name shadow their individuality. Maan has adored this aspect of Geet. But his mother was a total against of this behavior. For her, the Khurana bahu must know the limits of life & must lead her life in them. In her words, Geet was a spoilt brat & will never respect the traditions of their family. He can never take care of this household like the other bahus.

Maan has tried to make her understand about Geet & her life. He many times asked for a chance for Geet, has tried to show the achievements she got, but she never heard a thing he said. Even Geet has tried to please his mother. But his mother was adamant n her decision. At one time Geet stopped coming to his home too.But it was like all his mother can see in Geet was negativity. But still he had a faith that his mother will never go against his happiness. She knows how much his son loves his Geet. He always prayed that she will one day understand the true love of her own son & give Geet a chance. But may be he was wrong.

Maan got frustrated & then dialed his home's landline number.

Nakul "hello..."

Maan"hello, kaka. Main Maan. Mom kaha hay..???"

Nakul "oh, maan baba. Madam yehi pe hay..main bulau??"

Maan"hmm"

Pammi" hello,maan. How r u beta???"

Maan drew a deep breath to keep his calm. He knew he has to keep his cool. Otherwise he can't know anything.

Maan"I m good mom.ap thik ho?? I tried your cell but u didn't pick up"

Pammi "han. Who main niche thi, phon upar tha. Kuch kam hain beta???"

Maan" han who mom. I met Geet here."

Pammi voice turned cold saying " toh??? Waise who waha kya kar rahi hay???"

Maan tried to keep his voice cool saying" that's not the concern mom. U know that I never beat around the bush. I say things in a straight manner. So tell me the truth mom did u say that I went on a holiday with someone else???"

Pammi "now you'll question ur own mother on some outsiders saying??

Maan"she is not an outsider mom. She is my everything.."

Maan didn't hear anything from the other side for some time. He drew a deep breath saying "pls mom, no argument. Just...just say the truth. When u knew k main project k liye abroad gaya tha. So did u...??" Maan didn't have the ability to finish it.

Pammi"han bola maine... Kya kar loge tum??"

Maan gulped his saliva whispering merely saying "kyun mom...??"

Pammi didn't have in her to control her rage anymore. She was trying her heart n soul to get that girl out of her son's life. After so many days when she became successful that girl had to come again to spoil her plan.

Pammi shouted in anger saying "han bola maine... k tum meri hone wali bahu k sath bahar gaye the. Jab mera salon ka sapna k pura ho raha tha to kya main uska faida nahi uthati. Who tumse dur ho rahi thi. So I did what I thought was right. I got your account hacked to stop her mails, got your previous phone off to stop her from reaching you. But us besharam ladki ko dekho, itna kuch karne k bad bhi she had the guts to come home. To mujhe jo thik laga who maine bol dia. Itna kuch karne k bad bhi usne tumhara picha nehi chora, waha thak pohoch gayi"

Maan couldn't say anything anymore. He was shocked will be an understatement. He just whispered saying "who nahi mom, apka beta uske piche aya hay...".

He just cut the phone sliding down on the outside wall of the disc. He couldn't shout on his own mom nor he can forgive her. But in all this if any person has suffered the most it was his mishty. Only if he had faith that may be his mishty was suffering as much he was. First time in their life, it was she who came forward, it was her who came to mend their relationship. But in return what she got, humiliation, grief, pain. Maan closed his eyes giving ability to the tears to escape his burning eyes. then he went back in the disc to reduce his pain.

Flashback ends

Adi looked at Maan in shock. It wasn't the person he knew, it wasn't the person he was friend too. He knew the Maan who never touched alcohol because Geet hated it.hell, he never even touched champaign. And this man was drinking like a pro. He knew it had to do with Geet.

Adi came out of his thoughts when he saw Maan trying to get up from the chair. But stumbling in his way. Adi & Rahul rushed to his side to help him.

Adi"Maan bohot hogaya. Ab wapas hotel chale..."

Maan shook his head in ngative saying"nehi, mujhe uska pas jana hai..."

Rahul looked at Maan in shock saying " u must be kidding maan. Tum hosh me nehi ho. It's 3 am. Is waqt we can't go anywhere."

Maan pushed both of them stumling & screaming "maine kaha na. I have to meet her. Warna main use humesha ke liye kho dunga."

Maan stumbled his way outside the disc & adi & rahul ran behind him.

Geet was looking outside through the window. She came back to her cottage sending a quick message to Pinky that she wasn't feeling well. When Pinky called her back she had made up story about food poisoning & Pinky had believed it. All her time spend here was drowned in crying & weeping thinking about her encounter with Maan. How could he disappear like that, like she didn't matter to him in any way. Wasn't he was the one who said that he loved her like anything & everything. So where did the love disappeared suddenly?? Didn't he feel the need to sort things??

Geet's thoughts broke with a sudden knock on door. She looked at the time & frowned thinking "is waqt kaun hoga?? " she looked back at Pinky who was sleeping peacefully due to heavy drinking. The knock grew louder & she went towards the door. She saw through the peephole to make sure it wasn't any psycho but the scene made her speechless. She opened the door in a swift & looked ahead in shock.




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Edited by Tarina.R.Totini - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
oh wonderful part dear...so maan came to know about what his mother done with there lives...
continue soon dear...dont keep us waiting so long...
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 da emotional fab update! Maan calls n confronts his mom! In anger she admits wt she did n tells wt she did! Maan shattered! Feeling 4 Maan! His mom hurt him! Maan drunk! Adi worried abt him! Geet thinks abt wt happened! Rahul n Adi follows Maan! Geet stunned seeing the person at the door! update soon! well written.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yes! The truth is out!

I hate Maan's mother. That was just evil.

I do feel for Maan but he is not completely faultless. How could he let so much time go before reaching out to Geet. And also this time he reached out cause Geet happened to be there.

What if Maan and Geet did not end up going to the same place and had not met.

How long was Maan planning on letting his ego get in the way?

Looking forward to Geet learning the truth now.

Thank you for the update and hope all is well now!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Its all done by maan mother emotionally update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Pammi is a meanie 😡 she made Geet believe all lies and that's why misunderstanding cropped between Maaneet 🥺 awesome update 👏 loved it
thank you for updating❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice
maan come to know the truth as his mother accept that what she had done to keep geet away from him by hearing it maan shattered very badly
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Posted: 10 years ago
Waise u did not write the past that y maan and geet broke up ?
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh!
Tho ab maan ki baari to make things right!
Good going👍🏼
Waiting for the next!
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
so maan's mother was behind maaneet's break up

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