Series: Twines of the heart [OS 6- P 20]

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KittuPratzz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Is it mere coincidence?? My thoughts and yours clash all the time!!

when Purvi pinged me saying you updated it.. i dont know y..

Marugelara song crossed my mind!!

and here it is..

Ahaana!! Thanks for the update.. and the song!!

Edited by KittuPratzz - 11 years ago

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spoorthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Thanks for the amazing update. ...⭐️

Was waiting for this stories next part so much!

N the keertana it's one of my favourite thanks again!😊

Waiting for the next!

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

i dont have enough words to describe the beauty of the part...mindblowing one...lovvve the way you narrate them...they shared such a lovely relationship in the past...wonder what changed their equation soo much...eager to know more...waiting for more

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KittuPratzz

@KittuPratzz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

You seem very familiar Lady..

you have very good command over Keertana's too

this is not your first FF...

anyway.. Mysterious lady keep entertaining us.. along with Office Rendezvous and your Recipe for Disaster😉

Hopefully i crossed your path 😃

Edited by KittuPratzz - 11 years ago

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

wow!! it was so beautiful...loved it dear...👏

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AshelySpinelli

@TJ_spinelli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Nice update geet rembd her old days wit maan she lovd him bt wt happnd btw which made her 2 nt 2 trust him waitng 4 d nxt part

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ammu5

@ammu5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#117

marugelara o rahagava...wow...took me somewhere...such a beautiful update...jst for idilies geet wld make hm give dat speech...amazing...

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JeweledCrown-

@JeweledCrown-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Engagement over and Geet thinks about her past when they were friends , I loved the past ❤️ she made him say the speech for idlis 😆 . So much has changed or maybe he changed & she distanced herself 🤔 The present too was lovely ... Geet looking at Maan playing with Madhu or holding her hand during the engagement ceremony , but she is unable to accept this with heart or fearing she will get hurt 🤓

Awesome ⭐️ do continue😳

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ramarora

@ramarora

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Posted: 11 years ago

#119

lovely intense update😊
waiting eagerly for more!!!!!!!!

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maanjir

@maanjir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#120

Malli Poo scented rain accompanied by Classical Carnatic music and my soul was dripping in pure bliss.

What an absolute delight reading this story has been.

The melody of the rain vying with the Classical music was a perfect backdrop for the Rasleela between these two.

From the get go, the dance between the two protagonists drew me in. What else can the words that are flowing between these two be called, but a dance of love.

For all the barbs and mocking exchanges between them, inspite of the inevitable North and South prejudices, the attraction between these two is palpable.

"Ela Nee Dayaraadu

Paraaku Jese Vela Samayamu Gaadu"

Even as we evoke the name of the Lord and question his apathetic nature, he continues to push us

down the merited path. It may not be the path of the least struggles, but it is certainly the most rewarding.

And I am waiting to walk down this path along with Geetanjali and Maan. and see the beautiful journey through your eyes.

The amazing attention to small details in this story clearly states the effort that has gone behind it.

I am not here to read another run of the mill story. Obviously I want to know more about this Maan and Geetanjali. I love the snappy interactions between them but it is the environment that you have created around them that holds me captivated.

And for this I would like to give you my sincere thanks.

Thank you Veil for this wonderful story.