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pixelflower620

@pixelflower620

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Posted: 11 years ago

#151

superb update
loved d J maaneet
geet is trying to tk steps towards him but due to his inner guilt hes pushing her away ...his inner guilt of destroying her isn't letting him come close to her nd love her ...loved d way hw she consoled him nd is now up wid a new determination ...maan shd tell her d truth ...nd leave to her wht she does
do cont soon

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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

#152

so many hints about what maan did to geet - how much he hurt and destroyed her - but why

but then she is the only when who can releive his pain

both were jealous seeing the other

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Desire6

@Desire6

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Posted: 11 years ago

#153

Oh pls..updt ...next part...soon...pleAaazssszee.
Dat was one awesome updt..
Maan loves her madly.. bt his past is not letting him to mov forward...i wish..ek baar maan apn gunah geet ke saamne confess kar le...atleast his mind ll b at peace..

loved d way geet held to him...promising not to leave him n b wit his side always...
dats wat maan needed now...
such an intense updt wit some jealousy.. romance..Dance..emotions...
eveythin penned so beautifully...
i lovd d updt..
so pehle hi bol diyA next part jaldi...plsss...
ll b waitin

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Love2read

@Love2read

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Posted: 11 years ago

#154

awesome update...

maan is repenting for the his mistake...

geet is unaware of what is troubling maan...

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SGuru

@CuteTommy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#155

It's so wonderful...

maan again getting jealous is something so nice to see...

n the nightmare n his guiltiness... only he ca overcome with the help of Geet... if she is ready to...

Maan's state is so pathetic.. first doing a mistake n repenting on it with guilt... not able to convey r confess it openly n also not able to forget it...

waiting for the next part ...

Edited by CuteTommy - 11 years ago

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#156

I loved their dance , their bonding , their unsaid words , sheer relief having each other even though temporarily . Maan suffers from nightmares of his guilt and Geet comforts him , beautiful yet ironical . Loved the update👏

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Maangeetlove7

@Maangeetlove7

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Posted: 11 years ago

#157

Maan's thought about arman was freaking helarious! Poor arman doesn't even know what maan thinks of him! Simi's futile trying! Their bonding is too freaking cute! Love how they understand each other without talking! Awe she was there to comfort him! Love the amazing update!!

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SweetestPari

@SweetestPari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#158

Awesome update..

Luved it :-)

Maaneet jealous for each other

n later danced too :-)

Tats gud :-)

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maneetarsh

@maneetarsh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#159

Lovely update, maan knows about geet where as geet is still unaware of the fact. I hope geet will understand maan and stands by him after she knows the truth