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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

part 29
awesome dear...
lovely...
finally Maan loves Geet...
hes so J and possessive...
but why isnt he introducing her to the world?
cont soon dear...

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priya

@priya111111

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#172

dono ki jealousy factor bahar aagayi hai and baap re kitna possessive hai yeh dono

chalo ab dono ek doosre ke saath share tho kiya apne feelings how both were feeling that other ignored them. but sach tho alag hi tha.

now geet seen maan having his night mares and she wants to be his support but after knowing the truth what will be the reaction.

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#173

superb update party was awesome...both J seeing each other with someone...their dance was light...geet slep in maan's room and that too close to him...maan knows that he did was wrong thats why he is getting disturbed like this...

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#174

part 29 - lovely part...man & geet both were jealous

that simi was really fool not getting hint from him but glad that she finally understood

geet was shocked to see him so valunerable, afraid, in distress...

geet decided to be with him

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-Lehar-

@-Lehar-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#175

nice part
loved it
maan feeling jealous seeing geet with armaan
and geet is feeling jealous seeing maan with other girl
maan and geet danced togther he felt alive with geet being in his arms
geet wanted to sleep in maan's room and she made some bahana and slept in his bed...poor maan she slept really close to him he had to control himself..
in sleep geet liestend some noice and she woke up and saw maan pain stricked face...
maan dont want to show his helplesness to any one but for the first time geet saw how much anguished he is...geet comforted him by made him sleep in her lap...she decided she will sleep in his room for now onwards and try to ease his pain

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Noshin_Diya

@Noshin_Diya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#176

superb 👏👏👏
i enjoyed the whole update ... oho mia biwi both feeling jealous 😆 poor them neither come closer nor control their hear n maan's desire is surely gonna kill him yaar when he is gonna break the shell ... he is dying in his guilt , he is so afraid eagerly waiting to know what sin he did...
simi grrr😡😡😡 so irritating she was trying to throw herself on maan ... maan - geet dancing awww that portion was soo cute geet was cutely complaining he didn't pay attention to her Armaan is going to face a bad time i guess our MSK is damn irritated on him 😆 ... geet planned to sleep with him that part was funny & lovely 👍🏼
Maan's nightmare 😭 he is in so much pain but always suppress that . He didn't want geet to see him in this condition but geet calmed his with so much love n care hope her love n care will diminish his pain & he will open up more

eagerly waiting for next part jaldi jaldi update karna 😊

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Aditi.kesari

@Aditi.kesari

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#177

very beautifully written. Keep it up.

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#178

hope he confesses his crime soon...

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shubhi_s

@shubhi_s

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#179

lovely update
maaneet jealous
maaneet romantic dance
geet one kiss calmed maan
geet being stubborn to sleep with maan
poor maan
maan having nightmare
geet very much concerned for maan
hope maan soon tell her the truth
pls update soon

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#180

wow lovely emotional cute touching update..te way my maaneet in party and feeling j seeing each with some one was lovely cute..te way my maan want to hold his geet in his arms and want to announce to tis world she is his only his was lovely touching..te way geet fuming seeing my maan with sam and my maan too and he pulling her to dance and pouring his gussa and geet felt relife and cooling him by kissing his heart was lovely cute touching...te way geet ki nautanki to sleep with him making my maan to roll his eyes and cuming close to gh him was lovely cute..te way my maan controlling himself and thinking how she will react wen he say te truth was lovely emotional.. te way my maan ki nightmare and geet soothing him, even though dont want her to see him but geet pulling him, making him to lye on her chest trying to sooth his burning heart was lovely touching emotional,..i love tat scenes so much..te way wat ever my maan try but holding her and drowning himself in his geet and geet ki determination to make him open up even though he try to avoid her was lovely emotional..i love te update so much

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