MG(SS)~Bezuba~ #4...NEXT THREAD ADDED - Page 15

that was an awesome one osheen...
I loved the party sequence.. his jealousy on seeing arjun and hers coz of simmy hitting on maan was absolutely awesome.. he is trying hard to sustain his control.,, but nothing seem to be in his will anymore... and more over now geet has decided to win him over at any cost...so its gonna be worst for him to stay put..
and the hotel part.. the way geet tried to be all naughty in sleeping in his room was fab.. he just cudnt do anything.. rofl..
and his nightmare part. . that was the best written part of this update...
he has done a sin,, a crime.. I just cant forgive him for that.. but this was one such update that I actually was able to empathise with him.. he did things in hurry for revenge.. nothing can change the fact that he did something worst, but he is suffering like hell.. its haunting him.. and if it was just the sin before, now its his love.. he loves her so much, but he cant have her .. he knows she will leave the day all truth comes out..
he is in a big mess.. heis having it all in himself and dying in guilt each day... though geet is stubborn now to stand by him, whay will happen when she comes to know the truth..
now thay she loves maan so much, the knowledge of him bein her rapist will shake her existence...

I cant wait for the next update...

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beautiful update dolly..
i just loved it sooo much.
the party was super awesome.
it was wonderful to see them being little jealous...
and then that dance..
who would know this MSK could be so polite and so curt to his lady love
but the best part for me was that dream and geet comforting him.
he knows what he did was wrong and he is repenting.
thats why he is so broken.
he ruined a girl and that very girl came to his rescue.. a light in the darknes of his life
geet holding him tight was such a bliss to read.. she has accepted him in every possible way
she loves him so dearly that she would do anything to keep him safe
but his guilt... i wonder whr will it take him. he wants her..he loves her..he lusts her... and he indeed loves her like hell but then the baggage of past is not letting him break free.
the best thing he can do now is just tell her the truth..and that will be the end of his repentance.
wht she decides will be her choice but for him to live in peace..he has to take that extreme step and let go.
i so cant wait for the next update.
jaldi jaldi updt karnaaa😉

Maan jealous!
geet jealous!
waiting for maan to reveal the truth to geet
geet wont leave him!!!!

Yaar how can you do this.. i was so much waiting for the truth.. and you.. grrr.. i hate you..

Oops.. Maan so much angry and jealous tat he got drunk though a bit but he did.. and poor simi.. she was all throwing herself on him but he was all lost in his wifey.. finally he got and grabbed her into his arms... the slow dance proved how much he wanted her but alas he was right karma does come searching and now its all over...

the room one was cute where geet said she wants to sleep with him and poor boy was so scared but agreed and finally the damn dream... she was like wat he was asking.. and just not listening to him she pulled him into her wanting to soothe and calm down not knowing tat he was the one who destroyed her.. the one who ruined her is the one who once saved her coz he was responsible for her destruction.. eagerly waiting for next

They r getting closer.
Loving it.
Maan is coming out of inhibition.
Waiting for next update.

Maan can't see Geet with Armaan and Geet hates Simi... Geet trying to smooth Maan's pain

Loved it thanks for the update di🤗

Awesome dear
Simply lv it
Awww wht he saw

nice part