Mission Impossible:The Don n The Diva part 70 pg 70 thread 3

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Deepa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

part 63
awesome dear...
finally Maan and Geet are safe...
where are they?
and Adi knows about this...
Maan is so attached to the family...
they gave him a new life...
cont soon dear...

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minelove24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

awsme update,so maan ka past revealed waiting for next

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Posted: 11 years ago

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(sorry for the delay guys, struck up with some up planned situation, sorry)

Mission Impossible : The Don N The Diva

Part 64

"Then sign up my boy, sign up as Maan Singh Khurana" and so Maan too did the same, but he doesn't know that he is life changed forever with these sign, "Maan, I am grateful to you, I am sorry," he said as Rajveer's eyes tears up and he went away leaving Maan puzzled, then Maan was back to his new found family, and in one week, when everyone was sitting on the dining table Rajveer came up with a smile, "Maan, Good news, your admission had been confirmed in Harvard's" Rajveer said, "Harvard's" Dadi maa asked shocked,

"yes," Rajveer said and Maan looked at Dadi who was shocked as he was not that familiar with the name as he haven't heard it before, "but why, I mean there are so many colleges in India, and why Harvard's, why USA" Dadi maa asked, "Savitri, don't you want the best for our Maan" Rajveer asked, "Where is Harvard's?" Dev asked before Maan, "In America," Rajveer said shocking all, "Your Maan Bhai is going to America and he will stay there for five years and finish his studies and come back" Rajveer said,

"Five years, no, no, I can't stay away from Maan Bhai for five years, please Dada ji," Dev pleaded up, "Me too want my Maan bhai" Annie jumped in, "Children's, it's for his good, won't you want your Maan bhai to be the best of all," Rajveer asked, "he is already the best" Annie said turning upset, "yes, but as you go to school, Maan bhai too need to go to school and finish his studies na, hmmm, please now understand, just five years and he will be with you again" Rajveer explained and they nodded an yes, thought they weren't happy,

And in a week followed Maan was send to USA, "Maan learn everything, good, and bad, how not to be and how to be, learn all the tactics of business, I will be waiting for your return" Rajveer said before Maan moved to US, and it took more than five years to complete his studies, every day Maan would get calls from Dadi maa, Dev and Annie, there wasn't an single day there was without their call, and Maan would send gifts from there and Dev and Annie would send gifts to him, there bond got only strong by the distance,

Finally the Maan's studies completed and he came back to India with Harvard's business degree he turned more smart and he turned silent and hard just to keep away distractions from him, he went to gym and he learned kick boxing n martial art classes and he won many titles too, he turn strong, more powerful and more brilliant, after his return it was party in Khurana Mansion, for more than one week, the party never stopped for Dev and Annie, they never changed thought they both grow up so well in these five years,

And on one fine day, Rajveer called Maan, and took him with him to introduce into his business world, Maan was amazed with the amount of business Rajveer was handling but Maan was quick in grasping everything, and after that two months Maan was the one handling the business and Rajveer was so impressed, Rajveer introduced Maan as his first grandson and when questioned about where he had been these many days, he said that he was being in USA with his extended family and just then came back from US to take over the business,

It was easy for everyone to believe it as Maan was never seen before in Delhi with Rajveer and he was so dramatically changed physically, that even someone from his own village will not identify him, Maan didn't say anything but accepted what Rajveer said, after two months of Maan taking over the business, Rajveer called Maan to his room on one calm night, "Dada" Maan entered in, "Maan" Rajveer looked tensed, "Dada, what happened, you look tensed, are you ok," Maan asked worried,

"Maan, please close the door behind" he said and Maan to closed the door behind him and Maan too did as he said, "Maan, today I am going to ask you something big, will you do it for me," Rajveer asked slowly, "Dada, I had already told you I will do anything for you, you gave me this life so I can even give this life for you" Maan said, and Rajveer stood and held Maan's shoulders, "Maan, I want you to live long but I am going to give an curse to hold on," Rajveer said,

"Curse, what kind of curse," Maan asked, "That will make your life like a living hell, that will make you live in fear every minute, that will make you feel like screaming and run away from the world, the way I am living in this world," Rajveer said and Maan was so confused, "Maan, I am not a good person," Rajveer said and started saying everything, his whole underground works and world, that was an big shock to Maan, "Maan, this world is not fair, not good" Rajveer said, "Dada, Dada, this is all so wrong" Maan freaked out, "I mean, drugs, weapons, Dada"

"I know Maan, I know, My dad started this, and he enjoyed the power and introduced me too in to this world, at first I loved the power it gave me, it is until I met your Dadi maa, then I had a son, and when I found my own son turned into an drug addict, it killed me, then I realized what I am doing, I am killing life's for my welfare," Rajveer said crying up, "and one day, I took away my son and my daughter-in-law's life, it's because of me, I am the reason Maan, I kept them away from my world, no one in our family doesn't know this, but my rivals thought my son will take over my position and so they killed them,"

"Maan, I killed my son, I made those two kids ache for their mom and dad, it was my sin, though I opened lots of trusts now and helping everyone just to reduce my sins" Rajveer said broken down and falling on his knees, "Dada, Dada please, why don't you throw this all away and leave this world forever" Maan asked holding Rajveer, "Maan, this world only has one way, once you entered in you can't go out, without killing yourself and your family," Rajveer said, "now I am scared Maan, what if something happens to Dev or Annie" Rajveer asked,

"No, No Dada, nothing will happen to them until I am alive" Maan said, "can you Maan, can you take this curse on your head, can you keep Dev and Annie and your Dadi maa safe, can you" Rajveer asked, "I will" Maan said without thinking for a second, "I will take up the curse and I will cure it too, I will end what your dad had started dada," Maan said in his determined tone, "how," he asked, "somehow, somehow" Maan said, "Maan," Rajveer looked at the brave man standing before him, "Maan, you are my blessing, you are the answer to my prayers, but I will not compel you Maan, you have all the rights to choose the other way and leave from here, and in some corner I want you to do that, I love you like my own and I am scared for you" Rajveer said,

"Dada where will I leave, this is my family, I will not leave them, and you know I won't go, I can't go knowing that my family is in danger, that little girl turned my sister the moment she wiped my tears, Dev is ready to do anything as he trusts I will protect him and Dadi maa, her love, why should she go fasting when I was not well, why should she love me like this, and for this love, I will do anything" Maan said and Rajveer hugged Maan up, "Maan, I am speechless, I am speechless" he said, "Dada, you don't worry, I will do find an way" Maan said and he got all the files and details from Rajveer about his dark world, his clients and everything, and went away

Next day Morning Maan went to Rajveer, "Dada, I need one week alone, so I am going out into a new hideout, please don't disturb me for one week," Maan said and Rajveer didn't say anything and let Maan do as he liked and after one week Maan came back before Rajveer with a big smile, "Dada I am ready, I will take up all that you want to give me," Maan said and Rajveer saw an glow and confident and determination, "tomorrow I will arrange for the big announcement" Rajveer said,

And the next day there was an big party and then Maan was introduced to the world as Khurana's next hire and all the properties in Maan's name, it was an notice, an announcement to the underworld too, their new entry, and then after that Maan took up the underworld business too and then one day he found Adi, actually saved Adi from the clutches of another underworld Don and from then Adi was his loyal side, as soon as he took up the charge, Maan captured two mega deals surprising everyone, and thus the underworld found their new king in him, it was only 15 days and Maan created an great impression and earned his name, "MSK" he was no longer called as Maan, it was Mr.Khurana or MSK,

Rajveer was so happy, "Maan, it's been only 15 days and you took away the worlds by storm, I am happy Maan, even if I had to die now, I will be happy" Rajveer said, "Dada please" Maan held him up, and when they have to go, "Maan, today I will travel with you," Rajveer said and Maan nodded and Rajveer asked his driver to take the car away as he is going with Maan, and he took the drive, "Dada I will drive" Maan said, "no Maan, I feel like I need to drive" Rajveer said, and then Maan too accepted,

As they were driving, Rajveer's mobile beep up and he took up and it was an message and he read it and his face changed up, and looked at Maan keeping the mobile in his pocket, "What Happened Dada" Maan asked, "nothing Maan, nothing, Maan I love you my son, and I will always be with you, take care of our family," Rajveer said, "Dada why are you saying this now" Maan asked puzzled, "oh, just felt like saying, Maan now a day's our rivals are getting stronger, you need to make high protection, be careful and be calculative" Rajveer said,

"Dada" Maan felt an tension, "Maan, listen to me, I want you to jump from the car now" Rajveer said slowly, "what, Dada" Maan asked tensed, "there is a bomb in this car, the moment I take my leg from the accelerator, or slow down the car the bomb will go off," he said, "Dada" Maan freaked out, "Maan relax, relax, just jump off" Rajveer said, "what, no, I would, I mean, you come here, I will," Maan said, "Maan, you don't understand, Maan I can't make an minor move" Rajveer said , "let's try" Maan begged, "I can't take chances, Rathore is so powerful, be careful with Vikram and his father Rathore, Maan, take care of the family"

Maan was totally off, he was frozen, "Maan, come on, this was kept for you, thank god, I came in this, Maan you need to live, it's god's wise, come on jump" Rajveer said causally, "No, Dada, no, No Dada" Maan begged, "Maan, for our family, I need you to do this, only you can save everyone, think of Dev, Annie, Dadi maa, please" Rajveer said, "don't give up on emotions Maan, be strong, if you die, I will turn weak, and he will kill me and Dev, and the Annie and Dadi maa, if I die, only I will die, if you die, whole Khurana's will be destroyed" Rajveer said,

"Maan," he said as he took his hands from the steering wheel and held Maan's face and pulled him close and kissed on his forehead, "Maan, jump" Rajveer begged, "I command you to jump, come on, think of Dev, Annie, and Dadi maa, turn your heart into stone and jump" Rajveer said and Maan looked at him with his eyes filling up, "Dada" Maan said, "Maan, I don't have time Maan" Rajveer said, Maan knew whatever Rajveer said was true, and he closed his eyes and opened the door and looked at Rajveer, who smiled at him and jumped on the road,

Maan rolled on the road and finally stopped up and looked above as he saw Rajveer driving away, Maan got up and started running up, "Dada" he cried up as he run up and after a few minutes, Maan heard an huge blast, "Dada" he cried up, kneeled on the empty highway road and hit the road with his fist, anger on his own helplessness, "Dada," Maan cried out loud,

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"Maan," Geet woke him up, as she felt something cold on her lap, Maan got up from her lap and looked up, his eyes was tear filled, "Maan, what happened," Geet freaked out, "Thinking of my Dada" Maan said crying high, "I am sorry Maan," Geet said as her eyes filled up seeing Maan's pain, "Vikram, I was aiming all my life to find him and kill him up with my hands" Maan said as his eyes turned red in anger,

"I already taught an lesson to his dad, I made him die the same way that he killed my Dada, but he made Vikram to run away before I could find him, but I am happy that I made Vikram to live an underground life from then, but now the time had finally come to face that Vikram, to take my revenge," Maan said as he raised from the couch and Geet too stood up, "on the last day of my Dada, I wasn't able to do anything, and it's still killing me, but not anymore," Maan said and Geet held his arms,

"Maan, please, please calm down," Geet said, "Everything will end soon, and there will be no revenge, no pain, no worries, no burden, until then please relax Maan, please" Geet said, "But Geet every second that's passing makes me feel more anger, every pass moment is making my Dadi maa sick, my Dev burn in worries, my Annie in tears, I need to end these all, I need to end it now, I can't bear the thought of putting my family into this trouble,"

"Though I try my best to keep myself happy, cheer up thinking about the future, the present still is haunting me every second, I," Maan said closing his eyes, Geet saw this and she knew what Maan was going through, Geet had done everything to keep his mind away from the family thoughts but as soon as Maan came to know about that Vikram's arrival to India, Maan was not east to control, Geet however she tried, Maan used to get anger with a small thought about Vikram,

And Geet always knew what to do when he gets hurt like this, when his heart burns in anger, Geet went before him and saw Maan's hard face and closed eyes and his hands fisted up, Geet slowly hugged him and tighten her hold and slowly pressed her lips on his strong chest, making Maan react immediately and Maan opened his eyes and looked at Geet, who still was pressing her lips on his chest, he felt wired as it was not like a normal kiss, "Geet," Maan said his voice turning soft, "hmm," Geet said without taking away her lips from the place,

"What are you doing," Maan asked, Geet slowly took her lips away and looked up at Maan who was starring at her with his wide eyes, "Try to suck the pain out of your heart" Geet said with her love shining eyes making Maan grin up immediately, "but why are you doing it wrongly" Maan asked making Geet puzzled, "wrongly, how" Geet asked, "yes, my heart beats inside you right, then how will you take the pain from here" Maan said looking at his chest,

"But I can help you, I can take my pains away myself," Maan said and Geet pulled from him and looked at him with her wide eyes opening big as an naughty grin appeared on Maan's lips and his eyes went down her neck, "Maan" Geet pulled from him and blushed up like hell, "come on Geet, let me take suck away the pains from my heart" Maan said in his husky voice making Geet shiver up and Geet stepped back, "Shameless" Geet said as she walked back, "Shameless? Wow, Geet, when you do it, it's nothing and when I say it, it's shameless, where's the logic, come on Geet," Maan said as he moved forward with his eyes turning more naughty,

"Maan, no," Geet said as she started running from him and Maan started to chase her, "Geet", "You can't catch me" Geet shouted up, "let me see that" Maan said as he rushed up, they ran around inside the house for a few minutes and finally Geet got trapped inside the bathroom, and Maan rushed behind her and locked the door behind him, "Wrong place, now you are trapped" Maan said with a victory grin and Geet made her baby face and stood there up,

Maan went near her, "oh, my Choti Rani turned angry, and burning up" Maan said and Geet looked away, Maan saw that Geet was standing under the shower head, "how to cool my baby now" Maan spoke as he walked to the shower knob and turn it on, "Maan" Geet screamed as she felt the cold water pouring on her, Maan started laughing up seeing Geet, Geet then pulled Maan to with her and made him wet and smiled up,

Maan looked at Geet with his wide eyes shining up who was laughing at him and pushed her up holding her waist with his both hands to pin her to the wall behind, Geet turned silent by Maan's sudden move and looked at Maan's desire filled eyes and his wet hair was hanging in his forehead and the water drops was sticking on his face making him the most desirable thing on earth, Geet slowly touched his hard face and caressed it slowly and making Maan pressed his hands more on her waist and Maan bend down and slowly took Geet's lusty lips for an passionate kiss,

Geet's heart was melting in his kiss, but her mind was scared for what will happen tomorrow, it can go either way, she can only believe and hope and wish but don't know anything for sure, all she want was Maan to be safe and happy, Tomorrow will end everything, and she wanted it to be good, and make Maan Happy forever,

Precap: Vikram's blasting party, the awaited Tomorrow (Thursday)

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tamannA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#224

awsemm update waiting for some action packed update

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-Gemini-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#225

nice part
finally maan past revealed
precap...eagerly waiting

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APARNA TAMBE

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Posted: 11 years ago

#226

very nice update

speechless after reading maan's past

lovely moments of maaneet

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jayshu17

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Posted: 11 years ago

#227

Fantastic update!!!Loved Maaneet lovely moments😳 loved it so much❤️

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jasika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#228

amazing update
love it
waiting for next update

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payal.gupta177

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Posted: 11 years ago

#229

A very intense and gripping story...loved the update ..

Maan was being forced into the shoes of his Dada..Hope to see how Maan comes out of this menace safe and sound ,,awesome..!!! waiting for next..😊

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MystiqueDew

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Posted: 11 years ago

#230

Awesome .. I'm looking forward for the fireworks to start.

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