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sanum23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#241

past of maan and msk

geet maan safe til now

but wat wil happen next

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uma

@umamaaneet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#242

iam commenting late as was in my granny's place...through phone login error is comming 😭

but now iam back

coming to update it has all flavours dear love,pain,bad,good,desire everything 👏

aww maan's innocence was snatched away 4 him

so maan went to USA!!!!!!!!!!

dev,annie love maan alot!!!!!!!!!!! 😛

maaneet part was so cute and ☺️

u just rock dear!!!!!!!!! 👍🏼 ⭐️

precap hmm intresting

do cont soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Uma...

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Ashdevil

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Posted: 11 years ago

#243

Nice update...
Loved maneet moment...
Maan in so much pain...

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Deepa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#244

part 64
nice part...
so indeed they were doing wrong...
but his grandpa realized it later...
and Maan is trying to set it right...
that Vikram and his father damn them...
cont soon dear...

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maya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#245

Mission Impossible : The Don N The Diva

Part 65

Vikram was so excited as he stood before the big house which he missed for a long time, his house, his world, but after his dad's death, he was under his underground world all alone, under the water in a sub marine away from the world, though he got everything he need there, he missed something called freedom, the fear of death by MSK keep him hidden all alone, even if he comes out, he comes to India at night to his farmhouse in the jungle and would go back before anyone could see him,

Vikram walked in to his big house which was neat and clean and had an royal look, his servants were standing before him, "prepare the royal meals" he said looking at them and they nodded and went away, he was happy that his servants was good in maintaining his house even though he was not checking it often, Vikram went and stood before his dad's big picture, "Papa, I had finally done what you said, I killed Maan Khurana, who took your life and made me live under the water all these years,"

"now no one can stop your son, papa, I will rule the world, I will take all the riches and no one can stop me, I will kill all who help that MSK and his family and take away his world, I will make this world mine, Papa, I will be the king now, king of dons, tonight will change everything papa, everything is gonna set in place" Vikram said as he looked at the his dad's picture and then went to his room, "My room" Vikram jumped up as an little kid, then he sat on his favorite couch and relaxed himself,

Vikram took his mobile and called up Breej, "Hello" Breej's rough voice came up, "Breej, it's Vikram" Vikram's voice was beaming up, "Vikram, tell me" Breej said in his usual way, "Breej, I am so happy, so happy, you don't know, after a long time, I am in my house, breathing without any fear, thank buddy, it's all because of you, if you haven't killed MSK, this wouldn't have happened, I owe you a lot Breej, I owe you a lot" Vikram said feeling so happy,

"Yes, you owe me a lot, I accept that" Breej said, "Breej, don't forget to come to the party tonight please, and I will also call DCP sir and tell him, please" Vikram said, "and I need a small help" Vikram said slowly, "Now what" Breej asked, "Oh Breej, some of my underworld friend are international criminals as you know, and they are coming by ship as it has less formalities but still take care of the sea guards na, please, I will just send the list" Vikram requested, "Great, saying that you are going to be the king, but doesn't even have the capacity to bring in your guys" Breej said with a big grin,

"Breej, just now stepped foot in Delhi right, but in few months look how I bring this whole country under my feet," Vikram said with an pride, "Ok, let's see" Breej said, "Breej, you will help na" Vikram asked doubtfully, "ok, ok, will do," Breej said irritated and Vikram thanked him, "Breej, please at 8.00 at my farm house, you must come," Vikram requested and cut the call,

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It was 8.00 pm when Breej walked in with DCP onto Vikram's farm house, "Welcome, welcome" Vikram smiled big seeing DCP and Breej, "Congrats Vikram," DCP said as they walked in, Vikram hugged DCP and welcomed him and when he came to hug Breej, Breej moved away, and extended his hand, and Vikram shook his hands, "You don't trust me still Breej" Vikram asked with a smile, "yes, and I will advise this to you too, don't trust me" Breej said, and Vikram laughed out loud,

"Breej Thanks for bringing my friends without any problem, they said you helped them a lot to cross the securities" Vikram said, "It's ok" Breej said and walked in followed by Vikram, Breej looked around to see a lots of people mostly girls, dancing and drinking and enjoying, "Looks like the party is going in a full fun" Breej said as he looked around, "yes, yes, you too stop being strict and start enjoying, loosen up, you have lots to enjoy" Vikram said and signed a girl to take care of Breej,

Then two girls came over and stood near Breej, "Hey handsome" a girl said as she touched his face, and Breej caught her hand, "if you want your life, get out" Breej said in a scary way scaring the girls and those girls went away, "Breej, you are just, ok leave it, let's have some drink" Vikram said as he turned towards his waiter there, "when will this party get over" Breej asked irritated, "in a few minutes, will have some party then they will announce my title and then we will have dinner and some fun, and then party is over," Breej said,

"Dinner and again fun" Breej asked, "yes, why do you think these girls are here, just for dancing," Vikram said and started laughing, "all my international friends love Indian girl, and it's my duty to keep my guests happy right, let them enjoy," Vikram said with a big grin and Breej turned away, "Breej you are too good you know, being an good person is not good, see, that MSK also was very good, but now see, he is dead and I am alive" Vikram said laughing up, and went away to meet some guys, Breej looked at Vikram, "Yes Vikram, you are alive, just because" Breej said laughing up.

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The party was full on and Vikram was hosting his guests, but he suddenly stopped still, he can't believe his own eyes, he saw those two powerful eyes which was killer scary, the face which made him remember his death, "MSK" Vikram said as he stood there frozen in the middle, and those eyes was targeting at him, and those lips had an devilish grin, "Ahh" Vikram freaked out as when he felt an hand on his shoulder and looked around, "Breej" Vikram said, and Breej saw his face sweating high,

"What happened" Breej asked, "MSK" Vikram said slowly, "MSK" Breej asked puzzled, "yes, yes, there" Vikram turned and showed him up, and Breej too looked up at where Vikram was pointing his fingers, "That guy looks like MSK" Breej asked seeing an guy dancing there with the girls, "No, No, not him, I saw MSK, but he is gone," Vikram said , "Wait" Breej said and went inside the crowd where they were dancing and looked around and come back,

"Saw him" Vikram asked scared, "I don't see MSK, but I see something else, Guilt, you killed him, and thus, you mind's guilt feeling is killing you in return" Breej said, "No, No, I, I " Vikram trembled up, "Hey, don't spoil your own party, do one thing, finish the party soon, and get this over soon, you will be free" Breej advised and Vikram nodded and looked at the DJ there and signed him to end it up soon,

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Duniya main logon ne phir apane dil thaame
Aaya hoon lekar main phir kitne hungame

Phir maine socha hai main jitun sab hare
Darwaaze khool jaaye gir jaaye dewaarein
Mujhse takara paya hai kaun
Mujhko pehchaanlo main hoon don

Duniya mujhe jo bhi kahe iss ki mujhe parwah hai kya
Mujhko ko toh hai yeh dekhna jitne ki hai raah kya
Jo mujhko rokana chaahe unko hai kya yeh pata

Don ko pakadna mushkil hi nahin namumkin hai

MSK.. MSK... MSK is back,,.. the crowed murmured,,

Duniya phir jitne aya kaun don don
Mujhko pehchaanlo main hoon don

The whole place turned silent, as the song stopped and Maan walked slowly and saw the stage and the chair kept their symbolizing the high power, the chair in which Vikram was above to sit, symbolically representing the takeover of the king ship, Maan slowly walked up to the chair and sat in it, in his royal majestic pose, the crowd was still in shock, and Vikram was looking at Maan as if he saw an ghost,

Maan looked at Vikram who was standing there with his drink in his hand, his face white as his blood frozen up in shock, "Hello Vikram, welcome back" Maan's roaring voice disturbed the silence there, Maan then grinned up and turned to the people in front of him, "My Apologies, hope I am not too late for the party" Maan said addressing the crowd, "Mr.Vikram," An African guy in gray suit stood up,

"What is this, you said MSK is dead, and now, he is all alive, what are you trying to do" he yelled up at Vikram, "Yes, do we look like fools," another American got up, "MSK, so sorry, we believed his words, our sincere apologies" An Chinese guy came up, "but we all had a gut feeling that you would be alive, after all you are MSK, the King of Kings, who can destroy you," An guy jumped up, "Mr.Vikram what have you do," an Guy hover on him, "No, No, No one will say anything to him" Maan stopped them, "you just enjoy the dinner now, please" Maan said and everyone turned to the dinner

Vikram still didn't move a bit, in a minute Breej and DCP came and stood near Vikram, "How the hell this happened" DCP asked and his voice pulled back Vikram to sense, "Breej, I told you MSK is here" Vikram said between his teeth, "Of course, MSK is here, so," Breej said casually, "Breej, how can you be this casual, now my life is ended, these guys will never trust me" Vikram said tensed up,

"Why should you need these guys trust" Breej asked with no tension, "Because these are the guys who rule the underworld, these are the guys who is involved in all black market deal in the world, now I broke my trust before everyone here, the total gang of dons, now I am doomed," Vikram said tensed and turned around and walked away, and Breej and DCP followed him, "relax Vikram" Breej said, "Relax, relax, my life is doomed, why did you say that MSK is dead, I trusted you guys and" Vikram yelled up as he stood inside his bed room,

"Vikram trust us, we gave all the information's we got," DCP said, "then how" Vikram yelled up, then Vikram sat down on his bed not knowing what to do, "I need to get out of here first before Maan could kill me" Vikram jumped up suddenly, "Stop freaking out, look, I am here, DCP sir is here, just kill Maan before he kills you, and also I don't think Maan will kill you before these many people here" Breej said and Vikram looked puzzled,

"Now just go out, who know, you might be surprised" Breej said coolly, "Surprised" Vikram asked and Breej nodded, "Breej what are you saying," DCP asked confused, "First go out" Breej said and Vikram nodded and opened his bed room door and stepped out and Breej and DCP followed him, "what the hell happened here" Vikram shouted high as he saw room before him, all his guests where on the floor, laid on their stomach,

"Hey Vikram" Maan's voice made him even more scared, "What have you done," Vikram yelled up, "what, oh, this, they are not dead, just fainted, will kill them later" Maan said coolly, "are you mad, these guys are more powerful than you think and how are you planning to run the don ship killing everyone from all the countries" Vikram yelled up as he rushed towards Maan, "Relax," Maan said and held Vikram's shoulders, his friendly act scared Vikram even more, his heart was beating as if it would bust out, "why should I run the Don ship, I am a king, not a don" Maan said and looked at the guys fainted on the floor,

"I always wanted to killed everyone of these guys, but can't get everyone together, but thanks Vikram, for bring everyone here, just under my feet" Maan said smiling at Vikram, "Breej, do something" DCP said who was standing there frozen up, "sure, sure" Breej said and took the gun and kept on DCP's head, "Breej, what are you doing" DCP yelled up, "Breej" Vikram shouted up in shock as he saw Breej, "What the hell are you doing, Breej" Vikram and DCP yelled,

"Na, Not Breej, Not Breej, it's Ranveer Singh Handa," his voice echoed up, "What" DCP and Vikram looked at him in shock, "Ranveer" DCP asked puzzled, "yes, Yaraa, come here" Breej called Maan and Maan came near him and held Breej close putting his hands around his shoulders, "Yes, My Yaraa" Maan said with a grin, "what the hell is happening here" DCP yelled up, "Looks like DCP sir is confused, tell them clearly Breej" Maan said, and Breej nodded up, and moved DCP and Vikram into the bed room at the gun point and locked the door behind him,

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"Actually, DCP sir you remember, I was admitted in the hospital by Maan and I told you I escaped from there," Breej started up, "actually Vikram's guys when locked me inside the go down thinking me as Maan, and fired up, it fired my memories too, my memories which I lost before with a similar incident, and when I was in the hospital, my memories came flashing up but was not so clear and confusing, so I went away to my home from there,"

"As I went to my home, I asked my mom the truth, am I their original son, and then she told me the truth, "that she had a son named Breej who died in a accident a few days ago before they found me, in their Kashmir hiking trip and they actually finished his ritual in Kashmir itself, and no one knew about it in their circle and was returning to Delhi, but as my mom's family was in Hosharpur, they came to inform them about the bad happening, but on the way they found me caught in the fire somehow,"

"and so my dad Ranjit Singh, jumped in to the fire to save me, and he was successful too, but he was so harmed in saving me and lost his life in the hospital but before he died, he asked my mom to raise me up as Breej and as many of them doesn't know that Breej is death, my mom too accepted and also my face was damaged due to the fire accident and by plastic surgery, my face was changed exactly as Breej's face and then the fate too played her own way, and I lost my past memories, my mom was happy about that and she made me believe that I am Breej, her son and I too was convinced seeing her love and affection for me,"

"She had used my doctor and was giving tablets to keep my memories down, but what to do, fate played again, my past came before me, yes DCP, yes, My past came as MSK, Maan, even thought he was introduced to me as an wrong person, my enemy, but whenever I see his picture, I felt an attraction, I thought it was my vengeance towards him but no, it was our friendship, and it got strong by Geet, My Geet, My Sister, My Little Princess," Breej said as his tears raised up,

"What" DCP said out loud, "Yes DCP, Geet is my sister, Geet Singh Handa, my sister, whom I lost before, that's why I was feeling so much concern and care towards her, that's why her tears pained me," Breej said and paused for a moment, "and then I went to my doctor and said what happened and asked for a treatment to get back my complete memory and as my past memory was already triggered and so just by an simple hypnotism process, I got all my memories back,"

"and as I got my memories, I was pained, I really thought Maan was bad as I myself witnessed his auctions and I was so pained and angered, but Geet, she was in love with Maan, as always, so I wanted to save my sister from Maan and from ghost agency, and also prove you and Vikram guilty and put you guys in jail" Breej said, "that's why I acted as I am into you, so I can collect the information about you and Vikram and also use you to get back my sister and punish Maan, and it was all going well as I planned"

"but finally at the right time, I found Maan is not as I thought, he was still my good, truth loving, right full person," Breej said with a smile, "my Maan, is same as always, who always stood up with the truth" Breej said looking at his friend with a pride, "Truthful, rightful, MSK, you are Mad, he is the Worst of all," Vikram yelled up, "Oh really, you will know everything soon," Breej said with a smile, and suddenly Maan's mobile rang up,

"It's time" Maan said and Breej nodded, "lets' go out" Breej said and Maan and Breej pulled Vikram and DCP outside the room and again Vikram screamed out, "where, where the hell is my guest, where are they, what have you done to them" Vikram yelled out looking at his vacant hall, and looked at Maan scared, "what have you done, Maan this is serious, you will get yourself killed, if you do something to them, and you will also get me killed" Vikram shouted out loud,

"Don't worry Vikram, I will not let anyone kill you, remember, I am the one who is suppose to kill you" Maan said with a grin which stopped Vikram's heart for a second, "and the guys, the dons, who is been destroying the world for their own welfare, is safe, where there really had to be in, in the hell" Maan said, "what the hell are you trying to do" Vikram shouted up confused to the hell now,
"Let me explain you" an bold voice came up and Vikram and DCP looked up and their eyes turned wide, "you" they both said together out loud, as their blood dried up immediately..

Precap: All truth to be revealed

Edited by Maya_Maan - 11 years ago

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Maaneet099

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Posted: 11 years ago

#246

wow amazing! maan is back in action and Brij knows who he is! :)

superb update!

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tamannA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#247

awsemm update action pack waiting for whole truth to be revealed

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maanshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#248

superb 👏update

breej got his memory back n with maaneet as expected ...wow😃

waiting for full story

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 11 years ago

#249

hi dear...I am an active reader of all ur stories , but due to civil exams that will be on 3rd aug , I was

busy from 17th to 26th july...hope u will understand...Now I am free again as my preparations finished...I have just finished reading ur pending updates & commented...coming to the update , it was interesting & exciting..😃...by the way if u are planning to update within 1st week of aug, I want u to know that I am planning to format my laptop , so may be for 1-2 days my laptop will be not with me...sorry..

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#250

hi thanks 4 da pm n intense dramatic fab update! Well written! superb song! Awesome pics! MSK is back! wt an entry! Vikram stunned! Breej knws abt his past! DCP Shocked! he is wid Maaneet! update soon!

Edited by khwaishfan - 11 years ago