THE LOCKET (24) MG FF *** Epilogue pg 120 ** link to new story pg 168

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 11 years ago

#801

splendid end😊...beautifully written!👏 I am so sad tht this has ended! 😭Thanks 4 a fab FF! ⭐️Maaneet have an adorable son! He is the carbon copy of his dad! Geet is expecting! Debv n Tara have 3 kids! Its dad's 75th bday! she is so happy! Love the flashback scenes n of course n hw u incorporated Meet in the story! Despite being married for 4 years the love n passion is still der! Maaneet's princess is born! Maan named her Sur! u r an amazing writer! hope u write something new! Lovely dedication 2 ur family n those close 2 u!

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maansi25

@maansi25

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#802

Never ever read such an epilogue where story has ended so beautifully.

Still we are greedy to read more and more noke jhok of our handsome hunk and his Giit along with all the lot mainly Devtara.

The love, care and devotion is not seen in many.

And last but not the least meeting the writers team of India forum in the train and our super jealous and possessive jhalli Giit

Gonna Miss it so veryyy veryyy muuuch

Please give us a second season

Waiting

I forgot to add thanks for all the Pms and blog links you send to me so I was able to capture such a wonderful piece of writing.I love your writing please suggest me some more to rejoice.

Edited by maansi25 - 11 years ago

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bina_a

@bina_a

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Posted: 11 years ago

#803

cont... along with the main leads i loved our CID dadi, the most understanding darji, the fighter Maithili, the babli pinky and the lover boy Adi i loved all of them and above all i love the writer Avi for the beautiful " The Locket" :-). i want to thank you for all the pm's that you sent Avi. you're an awesome writer. Thank you once again for writing The Locket :) :)

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libros

@libros

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#804

Feeling so sad that the story has come to an end... 😭 ...the locket was the first story that I ever commented for it was so beautiful...its always gonna be special...the thud maan and bambi geet...awesome...I'm so gonna miss it...you maintained a beautiful balance for all the characters and their stories be it together or individually...the flow the expression of the story was such that you could feel that everything is just right in front of you...loved those never ending two minutes...the awesome and very apt pictures and songs...the lovely and awesome banners by Lakshmi and those gorgeous vms by Priya...
Gonna miss it big time...
Enjoy your vacation...
Please do come back with another awesome sa story please...
🤗

PS: comment on epilogue updated on page 121

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Susegad

@Susegad

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#805

From, 21st March 2013 to 13 June 2014 -what an epic journey this has been Avi.

A beautiful story, amazing characters, romance, suspense, laughter, lessons learnt, beautiful music, this story had it all.

I have laughed out loud, had my heart set to pounding and had tears in my eyes. There have been awww...moments and uhhh... moments. But there has never even been a single dull moment in this wonderful tale.

I have not yet been able to read the whole thing, but every part that I have read has intrigued me, touched me and brought a smile to my face.

Thanks for being a part of this forum and for giving us such a beautiful and amazing piece of writing.

You are one of the most consistent writer's that I have ever seen on the forum.

Come what may, you were always constant with your updates, day after day, week, after week and month after month. I really do salute you for that Avi.👏

That takes a certain kind of discipline that not all us have. So hats off to you.

I am so very glad that you did not quit writing this one Avi. Look how far we have all come together coz of this one story.

Thanks once again Avi, for being a part of this forum and for giving us such a wonderful gift as,"The Locket"😳

Love you.🤗

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Ratna

@--Ratna--

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#806

Avi 🤗...made a small comment on page 120...will post a more detailed one later...busy day😕...but could not stop myself from reading the epi 😳...cant say this enough for giving us such an awesome story ...thank you so much Avi 🤗

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#807

never had i read such a beautiful epilogue.

there was a time when destiny test their love but now they both or say everyone are living their life in a bliss...😳😳

shocked to see dev being father of 3 children & the 4th one is on their way... please koi roko isse

maaneet honeymoon is a dream of every girl👏

Sur... i love this name

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kjn12

@kjn12

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#808

Thank you avi for introducing such a magnificent locket story.. 😃
I cant pin point and say which 1 I liked.. Each part you posted has a freshness and unique feel.. 😊
Epilogue was so beautiful... final part mey be u have included all the characters... 😊
Truly speaking we all appreciate your efforts in giving such a wonderful gift in the name of locket.. 👏 😳 😊

OVERALL YOU HAVE DONE A SPLENDID JOB.. 👏 👏

Will be eagerly waiting for your new story.. 😊

God bless you avi!!!!

😃