THE LOCKET (24) MG FF *** Epilogue pg 120 ** link to new story pg 168

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Deelight

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Posted: 11 years ago

#791

Thanks a looot for such a lovely update... njoyed this FF very much...😊
haaa sooo many kids..😲
Dev n Tara were they actually plannin a rainbow family😆
n m sure as hell wuld be missin this FF v mch 😭!!
awesomly written👏👏

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abinaya.m

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Posted: 11 years ago

#792

Hey Avi

What an ending!!!!! Beautiful simply wonderful way to end such a Love story. I hope you write more of such beautiful stories. Can't believe I won't be getting pms from u anymore and I don't have to wait for the next chapter to come. Anyway all the best to u

Abinaya

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#793

hai avi...

keep smiling like this always😃

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APARNA TAMBE

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Posted: 11 years ago

#794

lovely story with beautiful end

you give equal weightage to each n every character in this story n discribe it with such a depth each n every incident so while reading it give feel that it is happening infront of your eyes.

looking forward for next such powerful story

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#795

Originally posted by: BDayGal-11Jan
RES 😡

haiye red face 😆 pyaar ki nishani 😆

ab kyun naraaz hai mujh par?

koi na, I still lub u🤗

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#796

Originally posted by: singh24

avi ..🤗

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Hi Babbie.. am fine.. 😃

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#797

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

hai avi...

keep smiling like this always😃

Hi Lakshmi

Aisse smile karugi toh Jeej bhaag jayege😆

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#798

updated my comment .. first spot

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#799

Originally posted by: dqno1

Hi Lakshmi

Aisse smile karugi toh Jeej bhaag jayege😆

koina... smile ke baad neeche waala pic ka demo de dena... khush ho jaayenge😉

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bina_a

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Posted: 11 years ago

#800

hi Avi... a beautiful story is come to an end today. You mentioned not to post teary icon or say we're sad... but howz it possible avi I'm ofcourse sad I'm gonna miss reading The Locket. Now what do i like the most in story there are many that i love... i loved maaneet's silent love during their college life. i loved Dev-Tara fire work. Kabir n Megha's track was awesome. chand-poonam n sujal-kashish's beautiful love story... I'm gonna continue in the next post I'm on phone so can't type too much..