THE LOCKET (24) MG FF *** Epilogue pg 120 ** link to new story pg 168 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Susegad

Ahem Ahem!!!

Congratulations!!😃

One question.
Mayyo ne first page pe apne smiley reserve kiya hai.
Do you suppose she has reserved it for a detailed, analytical, long wordy comment for the latest chapter?😆




avi .. if so do tell me... ek hottoie update ke saath hottie waala comment bhi pad loongi😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: JeevanaP

haan ... idli ki saath sambar aur chutney bhi tho hoti hai😆


😃 mai bilkul sahi demand ker rahi hun na jeev...😆😉,,,
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

mein kaun hoon ... kahaan hoo😆

😡
Chaddo
mein sab delete kar du?
mujhe sab milke tease kar rahi ho..😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: singh24


😆😆 mai avi ka hi chipka dungi...
agar esne baaki ke nahi diye to..😆😉



kyu tumhaara anubhav share nahi karegi hamaare saath ... ITHNA HOT hian kya??😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: dqno1

👏
kya analysis hai
😡
ab HM bhi aisse likhti hu..😆 start mein Switzerland gaye
wapis delhi aa gaye 😆

lo mere do line likhne par Aunty's meri keechaiye kar rahe hai...
pura detail likh diya tho aapka chapter 99 hojayega 😆
mere liye do line kafi hai...par dusro ko in detail dena... okay...
don't worry line todke hi sahi hum agge hi milenge aapko 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: dqno1

😡
Chaddo
mein sab delete kar du?
mujhe sab milke tease kar rahi ho..😭



aleee teary icons se tujhe hi nahi mujhe bhi prob hain... nazuk dil hain mera

comment likh rahi hoon

wait karo... aaj for a change, comment abhi de rahi hoon ... 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



kyu tumhaara anubhav share nahi karegi hamaare saath ... ITHNA HOT hian kya??😆😆😆


😆😆 abhi dal matt badal.. demand ker avi se...😉
TT ka aane to de..😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: dqno1

uska analysis pm main bol diya usne😆

pillow ke andar mooh chupa ke😆


I can perfectly visualize it.😆
But believe me the tortoise is peeking out at regular intervals to read and blush and then goes back into the pillow again.😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



avi .. if so do tell me... ek hottoie update ke saath hottie waala comment bhi pad loongi😆

Mari ko proof karne ke liye dete bhi sharm aa rahi thi mujhe
ek taraf sab besharam
aur doosri taraf wo bholi naari😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
congrats on new thread
maar daala ji
uff that was hot
the way he got rid of her solah sringaar
and the fireworks that followed
haiyye kya baat hai
aur and location of farmhouse best too
koi naa ho milon tak
sirf maneet hi maneet
awww she sat waiting for him
and boy was she nervous
but then if our maan thud wont be able to ease her who will
he is chalu cheez for sure
waise am guessing this is just the beginning of their SR
just prelude of things to come right
hai naa
uff the way he seduced her
and the way she flamed his passion
sure had me in flames for sure
haiyyo rabba that was sizzling for sure
the mist awaited day is finally upon us
and boy did it give tantalising sneak peek to their passion
without being vulgar of course
when he said touch me giit
haiyye i was thinking geet nahin toh main aau maan
but of course geet beat me to it
and they are finally one
god their love got its destination
and its a beautiful start
cheers for pm
just as you promised
maan control gaya tel lene
and about time too
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago

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