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Posted: 11 years ago
Part#9



Babaji last time u didn't meet me but next time if u don't give me time. ..

Ok ok peace... but I'm an Angel right then the bride... n Dadi's last wish!

C Babaji if you won't give me time then I'll put my plan into action ... Then don't shout at me that I'm not supposed to do this don't do that ...etc etc. .

GEET!

C your question back woke up dadi. ..

Ok now don't glare Babaji these Khuranas n there glaring. .. y did you bless them with such a unique quality??

GEET!

Dadi please bless me ... Or else ur son is gonna blast the roof today now please log out of that Skype thing!

Maaan!

Geet? Y r u stretching my name so much???

Wo u were yelling so much so I thought even I should do something in return. .. she said smiling sheepishly. .

Ohhkay. . He said controlling his smile

Pack my breakfast ... I won't be having it here n pack one box extra please one of my employee got her self into an accident so I'll be with her. ..

She stays alone n it's hard to manage when u r ill right!

I'll take one of our servants with me... she'll be able to help her. . Then I'll go to office directly!

What happened?

Nothing u seemed worried n were saying she's a girl should I accompany you?? She sounded so innocent. ..

No Misthi y to give her the privilege of nursed by an Angel!

I winked at her n she opened her mouth in a complete O n I left collecting my carrier. .. Smiling widely..

Babaji saw your favourite child went to meet ur fav creation Naina!

Acha Babaji one small doubt ... what is this BLACK MAGIC all about... just asking out of curiosity u know ... now stop glaring me ...

Looks like this glaring thing is quite infectious need to stay away from this Khuranas. ..



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After entering her apartment I asked my maid to put the stuff in the kitchen n bring our breakfast. ..

I setteled myself on the nearby sofa waiting for Naina. ..

She came quickly changing her clothes. .. n sat with me

How are you naina?

Better sir!

Good have ample of rest n feel the best while joining back to work. .. I added with a smile. ..

It's ok sir,I'll be back from tomorrow. ..

No .. u r not coming until u r perfectly fine. .

But no arguments on that Ok.. let me bring something for u..

Don't stress ur self naina. ..I was about to complete when my maid was back with the tray of food...

Naina!

Huh!!

What happened?

Nothing! Ummm ...she...

oh ! She is here to help you for few days. .. as u live alone. . It would be easier to manage. .. Ok then I have a meeting in a hour so need to rush...
Take care ...

She didn't even respond.. Lost in her thoughts. .. It would be hard to manage work... as she's got all the appointments listed. .. Sighing heavily I left to work place. ..



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Dark in the night somewhere past midnight where the whether was too calm like someone pressed the pause button... greenish smoke emerged in the mid of the woods with a evil laugh..


U can't over smart me ... I'm naina I I know how to turn maan's attention towards me did u c how he's ringing me up every few minutes. ..

Silly u ... as u thought I was not right for him...

Just few days from now away from his office n he'll know my importance in his life...

This maid thing won't scare me or shake my plans...

Oh by the way tell your favourite angel she won't be able to see let alone meet him for a while now. ..

Poor her ... was planning against me. ..

Ha ha ha... n her evil laughter echoed into the darkness of the night!

Ask her to get ready for some serious battle as this time she'll be facing The Angel more powerful than her...
More smart n less stupid!

She thinks its all to spread smiles right let me see ... how she preserves this smile on Maan's lips...

Moving her hands in the air she created a pic of maan smiling from the morning. ..

Narrowing her eyes...looking into the deep woods.. she mumbled something under her breath ...

Gift for you Misthi!

she smirked wickedly and her laugh echoed into the silent night. ...





To be continued. ...
Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
what is dis...naina..upto...??
I hope maan is safe..!!
gosh geet is soo..cute...!!!
n yipeee...me first...!!!
anyway..I was waiting for..u r update ..now m off to sleep!! gn sweetie. ...take care!!!
n once again..lovely updates..!!!
Edited by swetaa100 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: swetaa100

what is dis...naina..upto...??
I hope maan is safe..!!
gosh geet is soo..cute...!!!
n yipeee...me first...!!!
anyway..I was waiting for..u r update ..now m off to sleep!! gn sweetie. ...take care!!!
n once again..lovely updates..!!!


Sorry yaar !
I slept off
Have a working day ahead so...
Please don't mind. .😳
N thanks for liking!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aparna3011

thanks for updates

lovely updates

Thank you so much aparna!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part dat naina 😡 i want 2 kill her
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Originally posted by: christipie

Nice part dat naina 😡 i want 2 kill her

Don't worry well plan her murder together😉
thanks for liking!😊
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Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Don't worry well plan her murder together😉
thanks for liking!😊

4 sure gv me d chance 2 kill her tadpa tadpa ke marugi she is playng wit maan nd his mishty
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Posted: 11 years ago

😲
I thought u were not reading it!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part #10




Naina please look into this file once before we proceed with finalising the design n yes check with the finance department if all the margins are up to the mark...

I'll just finish with my call n ask maid to prepare something for dinner hmmm..

I quietly walked to her terrace of her apparent looking at the drak sky around I picked up my cell to ring home n inform I won't be coming for dinner ...

But suddenly the phone slipped from my hands before I could reach it was on the ground floor broken into too many pieces...
Looking at it sighed n the only thought that crossed me was Geet!

It's been a week since I went home I was too busy with work n meetings most of them were out of station so all the travelling was bonus. ..

N on top of it. ..it was Naina, something was wrong with her health n even our maid disappeared suddenly ... so I was always making sure she was alright but something was changing in me I was getting irritated n loosing my cool too very often maybe it's coz of lack of proper rest...

So I took a day off n headed back home...
As I entered I saw few of my relatives sitting in the hall n discussing something... though I was shocked to see them but as usual I thought it would be better to ignore them...
The younger ones came running to me all excited about something n were dragging me towards the hall where all were present ...
That's it I lost my cool n blasted on them...can't they see I was tired n was just back from work. .. Come on n what's so important any way all they need is money n they'll any way get it...

I stromed in to my room... Loosing my tie I laid on my bed... when I heard her voice call me..

Maan ...

Geet!

I'm leaving. ..

Great. ..okay bye.. I snapped getting irritated for no reason

Please choose wisely n I see the time has come. ..Take care maan...

I open my eyes to find her but she wasn't anywhere. ..

Oh! What have I done. ..

I freshn up n went to the dining table to find table full of people waiting for me. .. for me I thought with shock written all over my face...

They were all happy n tried to involve me into some or other discussion. .. after dadi's death this was the first time I felt dadi left me with a huge family!

My family!


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Babaji ... I know u r not happy but as far as I've known that question bank he is strong enough to break the spell he is under... n any naina or geet won't be able to over shadow his decision. .. trust me on it...



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Before the sun rises n the night ends it was the time for The decision. ..

Maan!

Don't open your eyes son...

Listen with all senes aleart n this is no dream of yours n if u feel its a dream or something put ur hand into the fire becide u if u feet the heat y will know its not any dream!


I stretched my hand towards my right n it was burning hot oh hot that hurt! N it's all true..n the pain vanished

Son u r the chosen one we choose you to grant you with all the powers to create n rule... from now on u will be the supreme. ...

N now your choice is either you want live a normal life or the one we are giving u!

Misthi!

Ji Babaji. ..

Picking the pen from her u'll just be Maan Singh Khurana u already are n

Naina!

Yes maan she's also an angel. .

Picking up the sword u will get a new identity. ...

Maan. ...maan...maan... Maan ... that was all I was surround by blocking all my rational thoughts. .. I could recognise that voice it was very much femeliar it was of naina...

I snapped open my eyes n n picked up my pen... it was mine the one dadaji had given me. ..

I felt so happy finding it!

Just then there was a complete evil laughter from behind...

Naina!

Yes maan it's ok if u choose to live a normal life but ...

I know u like me right!

No naina I mean yes I do like u but as a loyal employe that's it...

Now don't make fun out of me maan this can prove to be dangerous for u!

Naina...

N there was a cold wind all around which froze naina to death!

Babaji! What was that ... I didn't do it intentionally. .. I swear. ..

Misthi don't get hyper... its ok its not u its maan who did it!

What!

Yes!

N maan u are free now... yes Misthi eats all kinds of junk food coz she's too much into humans...

Babaji!

Bless u my son...

And all disappeared. .. as if all that was some dream or a fairytale. ..leaving maan alone with his dadaji's pen in his hands


But...but... but...what about Dadi's last wish!😉




To be continued. ..
Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago

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