DADI'S LAST WISH !! (completed!) - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hay people!
I know most of you angry! N waiting but what to do. . Dadi ki last wish h hi itni complicated k .. I don't want to hurry n spoil the story😒. .. keeping busy with work these days. . Phir coming late n giving something which even I don't find the head n tail of it not done na!😆

Mujhe pata h like last time if I would have asked u all tho mujhe mana karde te next story start karne se like last time!😃

So only chupke se I started "Story of my lost Heart!" Ho sake tho give it a try!😉

N ha if I get off tomorrow I'll definitely give atleast 2 parts of this pakka promise😳
Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ok dont stress much
take ur time n then update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Take ur tym and update dear.
I knw how it feeling bcoz i am also vry busy with some prob dats why idont hav enough tym to update my story
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Posted: 11 years ago
take your time and update whenever you have time.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part -5

She was avoiding a eye contact with me which increased my doubts ...narrowing my eyes at her

Geet! don't even try running ... now tell me where every one went?

umm... the youngsters went to hostel as they wanted to be with there friends, the old ones to some kind of pilgrimage, ur aunt went to her village as there was some emergency, few back to there village as they didn't want to leave there house unattended, few coz they were missing there hometown!

she completed in one breath huffing ! n breathing deeply.. i handed her a glass asking her to have it! after she was composed she looked at me innocently

Now tell me, what did you do ?

I... I just helped them!

N how exactly??

Maan we'll continue with our KBC tommorrow ok! lets have some food now!

Miss.Angel no escaping !

Ok!
she said pouting..

umm those oldies were cribbing of climbing so many stairs to reach there room so i helped them climb

exactly how?


like this.. saying so she snapped her fingers n i was near my room!

Geet!

Now I was back to her no guessing she snapped her fingers again ..

And...

And those kids were cribbing about hot weather so i arranged for a cold shower

i widened my eyes hearing her this time i was careful enough not to ask how!

And those ladies were yelling regarding there messy room...


And...

Enough.... i cant control anymore n i burst out laughing imagining there faces... i don't even remember when i laughed last so much...

umm... Maaan..

yes,

wo... no one else can see me until i wish to show myself she said meekly

what!

no wonder everyone left.. they must be thinking there is some kind of ghost or something ! n to see the positive side of it i won't be annoyed with there constant complatints n never ending demands..

Next day i had Naina back!



It was so much relief at work to have her back with her constant smile n the positive energy she carried with her ... initialy i thought i was good at business but with her presence i found it was not as she was best with her planning my day with whom to meet n whom not i felt at ease ..

she says it becomes necessery not to show up at few events.. It acts positive showing how busy ur n how tough it is to meet you .. at some point i agree to her... it at least keeps me away from unnecessary gossips..

I have to go to a business party tomorrow night! Naina said she already sent my costume to mansion i just have to try it on n tell if it needs any alterations n it will be altered n deliverd by morning !

As i reached home I saw Geet doing something with the shirt wait it was the new shirt which i was supossed to was to the party!

Geeet!

I roared on her scaring her to death but i was least bothered I was way too much angry to notice anything!

how dare she touch my stuff! Naina must have gone through so much pain to select this one for me n she!


To be continued...



p.s: do tell me if u can find the pictures inserted in it, as i couldn't find them in previous updates when logged in from pc😳
Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful update
why maan angry on geet for touching shirt
did he feel some thing for naina

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Posted: 11 years ago
yes naina's picture is there in the update dear


geet cutely told what she did with everyone and maan laughing for the first time

yeh kya maan gussa on geet thinking she spoiled the shirt😲😲😲ab kya hoga


i just came throught this story its really different and interesting
Edited by priya111111 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update!!!!!!
maan's all relative went away...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
sonam ko kyun naina chudail banaya...woh toh sweet hai na...but naina is bad...

kya khel khela geet...maaza agaya...

superb update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was what I had expected Geet surely scared Maan's sticky Family members
that was awesome

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