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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part - 4


Hello!

Excuse me. . What did she say her name was... oh no ! I didn't even ask her name. ...

Ummm... Miss. Angel! Look this is not funny. .come out now!

Strange enough she didn't come out that day. . Nor I could find any traces of her. . I thought to ask someone. . But dropped the idea next moment! What would I say I met a girl the other day spent the whole day with her n she vanished! As she was some angel! Now I didn't want my reputation be at stake. . So I thought it would be better if I forget her as a beautiful dream. ..

It's been few months from my adventures birthday I met with this amazing woman Naina! She's someone whom we say beauty with brain! I hired her as my PA .. she was too good in her work smart n intelligent!

The special quality of her was her smile. . Sometimes I felt she could be some model or something else. . But then it's not my place to decide that. ..

These days I've become too much dependent on her. .. now I had to send her on a business tour which I couldn't avoid.

I better get back to home it's getting cloudy out side. .. Wonder why this sudden change in wether that too in mid summer!



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Not far from there among the shadows of woods..n creepy silence..I stood with a grin plastered across my face. ...

Look what I've done. ..I've managed to gain his trust that too just in few months. .. n u thought I wasn't good enough for him.. did you see he finds me beautiful!

I told you I was best for the job.. but no u choose her.. look she couldn't even get a space in his memories but me I'm managing his life...

Greedy, cunning, witch! That's what u called me right now look... I won !...

Naina won!



It suddenly started pouring heavily! N I was drenched from head to toe. . But I didn't care.. as I was a bit too happy to notice anything . ..

After I return from the trip I'll get married to him n then... I will rule this world!

Yes I know he is the one u choose with mighty power n intelligence. .. u will be giving Him the choice to decide. ...

N I will overshadow His decision(I thought smiling wickedly)

Now I have a flight to catch in morning! I can't disappointment him now can I...I said to my self making a innocent face..laughing wickedly!


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It's been just a day she left for the trip I came to know how efficient employee she is.. she definitely deserves a hike in her pay!

After the strom yesterday it seemed to be a beautiful night today with stars glittering n a shining moon..

As I turned back there was this sharp light making me almost blind!

What's with u n the lights!

Oh ..sorry!.. we angels come with some special effects can't help!

She looked so cute with her baby face..n in her white floral dress!

N thaks for calling me cute...

Oh so u can even read my mind! Great. . Let's sit n talk. .

Y is he sounding so casual!

No questions???

Nop!

So can I stay with you. ..

Ok.. no problem there are many in this house one more I won't mind .. I shrugged

Oh ! she sounded dissapointed.. for some reason I didn't like her sad face..

K , now what will I call you. ...

I don't know! Babaji calls me Misthi. . N rest angel!

I'll call u Geet!

Geet! Y ??

Hmmm ... coz I like that name!

Ok! She smiled a full one. . Which lit up my whole room!

Geet!

Hmm..

I knew u find me handsome

To which she widened her eyes looking shocked! N blushed hard..

Even I can read ur mind angel!

Take my next room ! Even though u r an angel we can't stay in one room right!

Ok!

From that day my life was completely event full! Now it was not easy to digest the fact that I'm living with an angel is it!

She would come running to me for every single thing she found amazing!

Like yesterday I asked her if she can get me coffee. .she was so much excited she came running tome with my coffee saying there was no need to use magic! coffee was done by pressing one button!

Now what can I say! But today I found her all gloomy. . On asking she said every one left! There was no one at home... N she was getting bored...

That's when I realised the whole mansion was empty! Only few servents were there engrossed in there work. . Now how did they leave. .. n y suddenly!





To be continued. ...


Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
awesome update
so evil entered in maan's life
and maan is impressed by her too!!!
good that geet came back!!!!!
where his family went now???????
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
Nice part wtever happns our mishty ill win so maan kept d name geet nice nd she sounds like a innocent child waitng 4 d nxt part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
nice update
evil also enter in maan's life
what will happened when angel n evil come face to face
what will be ther naina's reaction when she come face to face with angel mishti means geet
waiting what next
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: -MSKdeewani-

awesome update

so evil entered in maan's life
and maan is impressed by her too!!!
good that geet came back!!!!!
where his family went now???????

Thanks for liking!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: christipie

Nice part wtever happns our mishty ill win so maan kept d name geet nice nd she sounds like a innocent child waitng 4 d nxt part


Thanks for reading! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: aparna3011

nice update

evil also enter in maan's life
what will happened when angel n evil come face to face
what will be ther naina's reaction when she come face to face with angel mishti means geet
waiting what next


Thanks for reading aparna!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So the wicked witch Naintara has entered
Good that our Angel Geet is back in Maan's life
I think Maan's so called family has left thanks to Geet's special effects
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: krndr

So the wicked witch Naintara has entered
Good that our Angel Geet is back in Maan's life
I think Maan's so called family has left thanks to Geet's special effects


Thank U for liking! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
geet kya naina k darr se bhag gayi thi...abb kya hoga jab naina wapas ayegi...

cute update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
Edited by love2_soma - 11 years ago

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