[Novel Length] Office Rendezvous Chapter 25/26/27 - P 73/74/80

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Veil

I didn't remember laughing like this in a long time. This is one amazing comment. I think I will get it framed😆

Thank you so much🤗

But let me clarify that these below lines are from the original Agneepath poem and not mine! 😆

"Tu na thakega kabhi, tu na thamega kabhi, tu na mudega kabhi

kar shapath, kar shapath, kar shapath!"

If you know that and still find the rest funny then a big 🤗

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spoorthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Totally Filmey loved her way of dealing with things!

Waiting for the next!

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

splendid update! well written! Maan introduces himself in a filmy way! Geet's inner thoughts well portrayed!

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ramarora

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

your story is so hilarious and refreshing. i am loving it
.keep it up.😊

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Madhuri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

part 6 - wow...superb part...so entertaining dear...

poor geet ...so much frustrated at her home with her HAIRY Harry... and then at Curcus whiteworm...

loved the way you used agneepath & AB's dialogues..

Edited by Madhuri53 - 11 years ago

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crazydream

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Amazing update

Poor Geet... Frustrated everywhere... At home n at White worm.
Hairy Harry is troubling n teasing her. Loved brother sister fight. Geet jealous of his life style, she can't get that. The office which was alluring once she was small is giving her head ache n not to forget stomach ache.

It was better to choose home than office. First the boring work n then an encounter with the subtle guy again... Ufff Geet will be gonna mad soon.
The way you choose AB's dialog was mind-blowing. Geet making Maan listen to caller tune. N then her reaction was funny.

"Rishte me toh hum colleague lagte Hai, Naam Hai Maan Khurana " Lol... Hehe. Loved it. It was superb
Maan ne apna introduction toh diya. N his style was awesome.