MG ff Uljhe Rishtey----kahanni ek unkhili kali ki part 16,17 on128,139 - Page 23

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Posted: 11 years ago
guess you guys have gone
tomorrow then
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome interesting story loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
first guest
than visit to village
and than net problem
mahi just 😭 and 🤢
sorry for late update
Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
teaser


maan in room , baby room just caressing image of baby

why god why you give me such punishment first you saw me dream and snatch my dream like this why he just cried out mera baby kaha hai god kaha hai

Mujhe yunhi karke khwabon se juda

Jaane kahan chup ke baitha hai khuda

Jaanu na main kab hua khud se gumshuda

Kaise jiyun ruh bhi mujhse hai juda

Kyun meri rahein mujhse puche ghar kahan hai

Kyun mujhse aake dastak puche dar kahan hai

Rahein aisi jinki manjil hi nahin

Dhundho mujhe ab main rehta hun wahin

Dil hai kahin aur dhadkan hai kahin

Sansein hai magar kyun zinda main nahin

one girl age 18 who is have problem that how she give her exam fee , hostel fee her food now facing such tuffan which may be destroy Geet life yes Geet an orphan who don't have anybody in life now just standing in verge of lost life why ...

Rait bani haathon se yun beh gayi

Takdir meri beekhri har jagah

Kaise likhun phir se nayi dastan

Gham ki siyahi dikhti hai kahan

Aahein jo chuni hain meri thi raza

Rehta hoon kyun phir khud se hi khafa

Aisi bhi hui thi mujhse kya khata

Tune jo mujhe di jinay ki saza

she just mummer why god main to independent hona chati thi

phir ab kon vishwas karega I am geet handa 18 year virgin girl caring baby baby who will trust me , hostel wale to muje yaha rahene bhi nahi denge ku aisa kiya apane mere sath ku

Banday tere maathe pe hain jo khinchay

Bas chand lakiron jitna hai jahaan

Aansu mere mujhko mita te hain rahe

Rab ko hukm na mit ta hai yahan

Raahein aisi jinki manzil hi nahin

Dhundho mujhe ab main rehta huin wahin

Dil hai kahin aur dhadkan hai kahin

Saansien hai magar kyun zinda main nahin

Kyun main jaagun aur woh sapne bol raha hai

Kyun mera rab yun aankhien khole so raha hai

Kyun main jaagun


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Posted: 11 years ago
interesting teaser! update soon. Poor Geet! thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice teaser so geet is orphan

jaldi update dedo iska aur fate ka
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice teaser plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
poor maan
lost his baby
and poor geet all on her own
and in such trouble
what happens now
lets see
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

poor maan
lost his baby
and poor geet all on her own
and in such trouble
what happens now
lets see




at last you look on line
baaki sab to offline dikh rahe hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
just got back from work
and then read teasers

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