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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 96: 😃
Finally you did bring a Kashish for Sujal... as I said earlier you can't seem to leave anyone unhappy, everyone is sure to find love. ❤️ Loved their pull-push. Seems interesting.

Mrs. Krishnan. Loved the emotions you depicted in her monologue. So apt and gave a glimpse into the soft persona that she holds within her tough exterior. A mother will always be a mother... Loved how with each para you showed the difference that she noted between her and Poonam... yet never faltered in her duty but gave blessing to a child she brought up form within the depths of her heart. 👏

Kittu made her appearance here... good one ...and her swooning i could so imagine 😆

Dev's song... This is one of my all time favourites... And Dev singing it for Naina was awesome. I have some very sweet and cherished memories with this song 😳

Maan's poem ... me 😳 just no words... this one's a treasure. 👍🏼


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Posted: 11 years ago
loll avi m sure dadima's charecter is inspired frm u urself
u left not a person single... so here u introduced sasha - ankur
n this is the thing i liked the most in ur story...
u giv importance to every person n settling everyone wth their love n giving happy ending in true sense
n coming to the update.. its jst beyond amazing...
loved each n every bits of it 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: snehaan

loll avi m sure dadima's charecter is inspired frm u urself
u left not a person single... so here u introduced sasha - ankur
n this is the thing i liked the most in ur story...
u giv importance to every person n settling everyone wth their love n giving happy ending in true sense
n coming to the update.. its jst beyond amazing...
loved each n every bits of it 😆

😆 very close.. Daadima is inspired by my late mother. She was amazingly strong yet the most fun person ever.
Thanks Sneha
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow so here comes the dream wedding of the twin brothers with their respective love
loved the poen so much that maan said to geet
so here u set the 6th couple in the story.. n the turn in their life is awesome 😆
bechara nakul ko kitna tang kerta h maan babu ne
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 97: Hayee loved Kashish and her last attempt. Sujal has no way out now... I like this khurafati dimag of yours Avi. 👏😆
Nakul finally gets some respite ... at least now he knows why Maan used to transform into two different persons and make him bali ka bakra 🤣


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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 98: 😃
Loved how you linked each and every father-child bond in this chapter... each wrapped in different wrappings of bonding yet all filled with love 👏

Chandan-Tara and the way he watches her sleep for the last time, all of this watched by Poonam. Megha and her cute ways of being the binding thread of this Thakur family was lovely.

Darji and Geet and the whole scene there was so beautifully portrayed. Just loved it ... won't even try and add any words to describe it cause wouldn't be able to match the feelings there.

Sujal 😆 Becahara phas gaya... First your ultimate target was Maan and now Sujal 😉 Majja aa gaya 😆 Loved Kashish's sherni avatar, Indeed she needed to speak up for her own good as well as for him. 👏

VM uncle and his Upma 😆 Pinky Is ishmart... and I guess she's taking full advantage of this chance to help her bhai.

Just couldn't help but laugh out loud reading the last scene ... Manisha and the creature song 🤣

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Poor Maan, god i felt so bad for him for getting caught so badly by his Annie dii. She literally embarrassed Maaneet with her teasings. He was openly declaring his love n wishes without knowing who had actually replied to his msg n the phone call was hilarious. Annie teasing Geet on the every ready comment had me in split.

If boys dint wanted to have a bachelor party among themselves then why plan it in the first place? Seeing their grumpy faces n scowling at each other was funny. But nice way to trick Maan first n then with his help trick Geet. Accha badla liya Maan se for ruining their personal entertainment of seeing girls gaming session. But then Maan was no less too, he went along with the planning even after having girls crash their bachelor party n danced with Shayanti n yeh Geet bhi Maan ki possessiveness ki aatma andar leke aayi thi shayad that is why couldnt see even see Shayanti eyeing him n jealousy bhool ke did a nautanki of dancing with him n once all were gone was back to her sherni mode. But these Khurana brothers took advantage of her innocence, fooled her n Maan got all the chance he wanted. Accha hai Dev ka bhi, pehle khud bhai ko phansao aur phir khud bachao bhi. But the whole Shehanshah wale types dialogues were super hilarious n Bambi Geet dint even thought that if Maan was really drunk he would be smelling of any. Ek kiss and light bulb off madam ka. But all this dramebaazi ended on a very romantic n touching way for Maaneet with Geet agreeing for Maan's demand.

Happy to see Shasha having got someone like Ankur n now waiting for Pari n Teji too.

And the last part was full of naughty Maan with his shamelessness at its best.










Kashish name itself brought so many images of Sujal-Kashish from KTH. That was one show i had loved so much but again Ekta mata had ruined it till it sucks n stinks. Anyways i wont blame Sujal for ignoring Kashish's advances n blocking her n gaurding himself and later outrightly denying her feelings. He was called a failure n a loser before by his own wife n then she divorced him n married a businessmen which would shatter anyone. He had given 100% in his marriage n still couldnt get his wife to love him back even after fulfilling her every wishes. He is attracted towards Kashish but his fears wont let him allow to accept her n i really feel bad for both of them. Hopefully Sujal will be able to trust someone again n be able to love someone once again giving a chance to live a life happily.

Krishnan's POV was needed, i thought she was rude to Megha but after knowing her pov i really felt for her. The rules dint allow her to shower her love on Megha which she always wanted n wished to. Megha still being like a daughter to her she had to give her away to her rightful mother officially by signing off the papers. Again she was alone missing Megha's childhood but right then another child was at her door who needed her n may be gave her another reason to continue.

Haayee i loved this Geet Handa the sherni in action. Loved her punishment to Dev and enjoyed seeing Dev trying to manaofy his chotu n dragging Maan into the punishment ka session. Maan's famous pout was also ignore by his Geet n now it would be great to see him speaking something out loud in front of all for his Geet, haayee the thought itself sounds so romantic.

Kittu as in Kittupratz? LOL I actualy dint realized this before as you had used Kittumausi but anyways for the first time Dev's charm dint impress someone n he had to use some Mahesh babu.

Awww these Khurana men are heck romantic. Loved reading Dev-Tara moment which came after such a long long time. His Song was really beautiful n touching n so was Maan's. There was a dreamy look on my face while reading this whole part.









Oh god a typical pretence of being a couple n i guess Pinky did chance pe dance. Since she knows Kashish has feelings for her brother she took best of the opportunity. And his yes for that hug it clearly says he likes her but is just fears to take a chance with life now or else why would he even bother agreeing with her? She was anyways leaving n she dint forve him, he agreed to her getting his defenses down. And that VM is super annoying.

OMG the whole marriage planning describtion was awesome. It now really looks like some hot shot are going to be getting married, but haayee mera dil toh was stuck at Maan care when he had specially got her favorite spicy sandwiches n gol gappe in the menu for dinner. His care n love for her just amazes me every time. But the moment he told her to lose the game which were to be happening in banquet hall i was like thats so not done, khud nahi haarega even if he himself was in hurry. Good Geet replied him to lose n was in her fighting spirit, like kismei kitna hai dum types. Dadima ko partner in her crime mil rahe hai.

Even after reading their romance for so many times in this FF the effect is still the same with update i read. I cannot ever get tired of Maaneet n their sweet romance specially when they are head over heels in love with each other. Maan getting Nakul at his side was funny but Nakul the loyal servant agreed cos he dint wanted to go to HP n his wife, hilarious. Maan coming to Geet's room through ladder just to enjoy the pre marital romance and put haldi on her n steal mishty moments with her were really too romantic, uppar se his teasing n shameless comments would made anyone go red. But literally getting bournvita for heights sacchi.








I so loved Thakur family moments. Chandan not being a biological father of Tara had given her that love when her own mother ignored her cos the events in her life. He performed both her mother n father role in Tara's life n today when she would be going he came to have his little moments with her. And Megha is such a child gosh, her naughtiness has brought the laugh in Thakur family n no one could stay gloomy when she is around. Loved seeing Poonam as full fledged wife, caring for his health.

And i love Kashish, good she finally put her foot down refusing to take his insult anymore n make him bend out in front of her if he needs her. Good going,just cos someone is putting up with your taunts n insults doesnt mean you do it again n again n show them down. VM seem to really like Kashish love when he calls her bahu, hahaha. Finally gaadi aage badh rahi hai for Sujal n Kashish ki n he has given away his feelings in that one hug and even his tubelight had bulbed too late realizing Kashish is not Kamya. Not everyone in the world could be like Kamya n he needed to change that POV of his which Kashish's mother helped him a bit with. He need more saaf safayi of his brain n mind n sure he will realize his feelings for Kashish too.

Darji-Geet moments were too emotional, had my eyes wet. They were the only ones for each other all their life. Darji played every role for her so that she wouldnt miss anything in life n she light up his world with her blabbering, giggles, taking care of him. Seeing them so emotional today n Darji seeking for her forgiveness for where ever he lacked just made me upset. Geet would be going into new house where everyone loves her dearly n she would be having her own family but Darji would be alone again with no gudiya in his house to do anything for him. More than Geet m feeling for him today.

LOL @ Dev n his enthusiam.

LMAO @ Maan's message and he seems just too eager n that is making me laugh like hell now n roaring for Nakul but getting Manisha at his service with longing looks was just hilarious but Manisha's song just put me off the bed. My jaws are aching with the laughing i did.






-Sanjana!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Maaneet ki story hai... padhni hai... Password de do
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Posted: 11 years ago


part 96----

wonderful update...

loved the way Dev is playful and pouting , demanding justice...Hamari maangein poori karo...

thanx for pm and pw...

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Posted: 11 years ago


part 97---

aww Maan wanted Geet to loose the game so he can hurry towards his SR room...itni jaldi but Geet ne saari umeed par paani fer diya...
Nakul is threatened by Maan to give info of bridal room...

Maan climbed ladder to meet Geet...

their Haldi reminded me of GHSP Haldi ceremony but that GHSP Maan was some shareef but this story Maan has become so shameless...kahan to jubaan nahin khulti thi ab dekho to kitna besharm ho gaya hai...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...


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