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Posted: 11 years ago

#1051

Originally posted by: paponecon
Chapter 94
Poor shasha...bt u r best in making pairs...hope that u will bring someone for shasha...n ye lo u brought best one for her...ankur...like him so mch...he is really funny bt gentleman...

surprising package...geets english song...

Chapter 95
njoyed so mch teasing session for maan...poor boy...pyar ka mara.. all th siblings of maan..kya kahu...ur all characters each n every one...this time anni-arjun...thy r also best in their places...haha luaghed whn tara ignored dev sms...she knows dev too well n really she is perfect for dev...

ye ladkiya itni stupid kyun hoti hai..thodisi pyar me hi kaise melt hop jati hain..saab vul jati hai...bt ys their this characteristics hi make a pair best...njoyed all th gifts...mujhe apni ek friend ki shadi par hum saab girl ki taraf se dia gift yaad aagayi...

Chapter 96
again created a wonderful pair...sujal kashish...n best part is...i m nw eagerly waiting to c their chemistry here...lvd kashish do n die confession...

Mrs. Krishnan...another beautiful character...tagore's poem...alws bestest his ny kind of writings...u know what he wrote every poems every songs every novel 1 n 50 years ago bt somehow kavi na kavi kuch na kuch line hamari kuch feelings aur life k sath mili hi jati hai...ye sirf hamarai sath nehi..every bangali alws agree wth this..he wrote everyones feelings..kahi na kahi...

Hope that now i will get part 97...😒

Thanks for such nice words. Glad you liked my version of dus kahaniyan..😆

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1052

Originally posted by: setvij
I like the update. Actually am not sure what to comment...since I generally enjoy the flow the story is taking ...so everytime i end up writing the same thing...that i like the update and nothing else..

even if you write the same thing, it still pleases me 😃 Thanks

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1053

Originally posted by: paponecon
97

pinky is really best...so intense th moments btwn sujal-kashish..espcly hug...so funny whn maan was on ladder n nakul wish..mujhe to lagata besharam maan aur b forbidden area me haldi lagayega

😆 Maan ki besharmi pe itna bharosa 😆

Thanks

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SonalikaSingh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1054

baap re, maan and dev's drinking drama. they r really twins !😛😛

i also hv twin sisters and they r always at the same length.

pehli baar dekha, ladko ne apni girls ke liye itni mehnat ki, warna boys are always trying to flirt !😃😃😃

maans acting and our bambi geet...what a disastrous combo.. beautifully written

maan babu ke achhe din aane wale hai ... all those lingeries and nighties😆😆😆

and not to forget our hitler bua😕

waiting to read more... avi that was a good one

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1055

Originally posted by: SonalikaSingh
baap re, maan and dev's drinking drama. they r really twins !😛😛
i also hv twin sisters and they r always at the same length.

pehli baar dekha, ladko ne apni girls ke liye itni mehnat ki, warna boys are always trying to flirt !😃😃😃

maans acting and our bambi geet...what a disastrous combo.. beautifully written

maan babu ke achhe din aane wale hai ... all those lingeries and nighties😆😆😆

and not to forget our hitler bua😕

waiting to read more... avi that was a good one

links sent. Thanks Sonalika.. I am glad you are able to catch up😃

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SonalikaSingh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1056

that was one super update.geets ruthna n boys getting to appease her was so sweet. the way dev sang for tara was so heart warming. Our ma'am baby said that tagore poem with all his heart. Both couples waiting for that marriage n that superb gundi team which is making the whole romance sizzling

Good work avi

Chapter 96

A special gift for all the mothers. Hope you enjoy this update everyone.

I will be cleaning out the buddy list since I only have about 75 readers left according to my likes. If you are still reading, do drop a comment.

NEW READERS: please see the note on page 1.

http://www.dailymotion.com/video/x1tpoqz_photo-slideshow-1_music

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gNeWsYbOCEY[/YOUTUBE]

Thanks Mari for proofing all my work

Thanks to Lakshmi for the banner

Song by John Denver

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Video credit to PRIYA

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SonalikaSingh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1057

avi, this was spectacular

this new brewing romance of sujal n kashish is a bonus. In just 2 chapters n minimum words, it has been given such a nice n explicit form.

Haldi was beautiful n pre- haldi was even more better😛

Maanert waiting for becoming officially one.now maan will defo make geet read the book from library

Keep up good work avi

Links are being sent to those who have commented regularly and on the last chapter.

Please PM me for access only if you have commented and sent me a buddy request.

So many of newbie and groupbie messages are not going through because your mailbox is full. Please delete some messages before sending me a PM.

NOTE: FOR THOSE STARTING THIS STORY LATE, I do expect a comment at least for every thread or so if not for each chapter. You may PM me if you are not able to post the comment. There are romantic parts further on which are password protected. I will not be giving passwords if I don't find comments from you.

SILENT READERS, please skip this story.

Please don't ask if you have not done your part.

A/N: 3 more updates to reach 100 and end the story. Thanks for all your support.

VM[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bv_s7XVtsZI[/YOUTUBE]

Thanks Mari for proofing

Thanks Lakshmi for this superb banner

Song from the movie Heroine

Video credit to the uploader

NOTE: I need your help with the wedding invitation. I am severely crunched for time.

If any of you has pictures of a smiling Maan and Geet together and also of Dev and Tara together that I can use for the wedding invitation; PLEASE PM them to me or post here.

The couple should be standing close together so that Lakshmi can put both on one banner.

Thank you in advance.🤗

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SonalikaSingh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1058

story of sujal n kashish developed in minimum words is just splendid

Haldi was beautiful n pre haldi was even more beautiful

gundi team on full day guarding

Maanert just a day apart.now maan will surely make geet read the book😆

Can't wait to read more

Good work avi

- not proofed yet -

A/N: Please see page 1 for special thanks for the banners and VMs.

Blog update. Please press like and comment so I know you are still reading the story. Thanks

Links are being sent to those who have commented regularly and on the last chapter.

Please PM me for access only if you have commented and sent me a buddy request.

So many of newbie and groupbie messages are not going through because your mailbox is full. Please delete some messages before sending me a PM.

SILENT READERS, please skip this story.

Please don't ask if you have not done your part.

A/N: 3 more updates to reach 100 and end the story. Thanks for all your support.

VM[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bv_s7XVtsZI[/YOUTUBE]

Thanks Mari for proofing

Thanks Lakshmi for this superb banner

Song from the movie Heroine

Video credit to the uploader

NOTE: I need your help with the wedding invitation. I am severely crunched for time.

If any of you has pictures of a smiling Maan and Geet together and also of Dev and Tara together that I can use for the wedding invitation; PLEASE PM them to me or post here.

The couple should be standing close together so that Lakshmi can put both on one banner.

Thank you in advance.🤗

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SonalikaSingh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1059

avi the geet - darji part was heartwarming. it will strike a chord of a every girls and fathers heart

and

the sujal kashish part was mindblowing. an angry young man and a beautiful bambi caught up in a situation of family ...akin to a good yash chopra movie.

very beautifully sketched out and written avi, good job

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Onir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1060

Chapter 95: THUD!!!! 😳☺️

Last chapter you gave closure to Sasha's feelings for Maan. And now in this one you gave her a new path to look forward to. This is what I like a lot about your story, is that there is hope for happiness for everyone... shows the type of person you're, that you can never see anyone unhappy or going through anything unpleasant. 😃

AA here are quite sweet and smart couple ... fit for each other. Dono couples ko phasa ke khud aaram karne chale gaye ... 😆 Avi apna role AA ko de diya??? 😉

Dev-Tara cuties ... love them for their unique chemistry.

Maan- Geet ... love them for the way they're ... just can't help but go all dreamy