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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: shah10

Amazing update
Poor partibha


thank u dear 4 liking it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 10

Tabhi waha maan aa jate hai aur kahte hai - geet maine tumhe jo file di thi who tekh ho gayi.

Geet - ji maan ho gayi.

Me - sir muje aapke sign inn file par chahiye.

Maan - ok mere cabin mein le aao

Me - mam hum fir baat karege abhi sir aapka wait kar rahe hoge.

Geet - tum jab chaho mujse koi bhi baat kar sakti ho par main ye kahna chahugi ki tum jab bhi apni feeling kisi ke sath share nai kar pao toh use dairy mein likh liya karo taki tume kuch relief mile apne grief se.

Me - pata nai kyn par aapse main jab bhi milti hu toh mera akelapan kam hone lagta hai.

Geet - muje khush hai ki main tumare kuch kaam aa saki.

Me - ab chale mam sir kahi gusaa na ho jaye.

Geet - gusaa toh unki naak par baitha rahta hai kabhi jata hi nai par chalo fir bhi chate hai.

IN MAAN CABIN

Maan - pratibha mr. shah ke sath jo hamari kal meeting hai uski prepration ho gayi

Me - sir mr. shah ke p.a. ka phone aaya tha unne kisi kaam se Canada jana pada unhone ye meeting next month rahne ke liye request ki hai.

Maan - ye meeting phele hi do baar postpone ho chuki hai agar unn logo ka fir phone aaye toh mana kar dena. Jin logo ko time ki value nai khurana construction unke sath kaam nai karta.

Me - ji sir, anything else

Maan - no dats it,now u may leave.

From the time geet came in maan cabin,geet is silent and when maan call her 3 times she doesn't respond to his call n he get tense for her.He came to couch and shake her by her shoulder and geet came out of her thought and said

Geet - kya hua maan?

Maan - main bhi yahi janana chahata hu ki kya hua tum kaha gum ho main kabse bula raha hu tume.

Geet - main kuch khass nai bus aise hi kuch purani yaado ke bare mein soch rahi thi

Maan - kya yaad kar rahi thi hamare romance ke bare mein

geet - maan aapko na har time badmasi sujti hai

maan - jab itni khubsurat biwi ho toh bande ko aur kuch sujta hi nai

geet - aacha aur jo aap sara in kaam mein dube rahte hai jab kya ho jata hai tab apni biwi ki yaad nai aati.

Maan - nai geet tumara khayal toh muje hamesha rahta hai par kaam bhi mera ek atut junoon hai.

Geet - muje pata hai aur main aapke iss junoon ko bhut pasand karti hu

Cabin door knock and adi - tanya came inside

Adi - sir kal ki jo mr. khanna ke sath meeting hai usski final discussion karle bcoz early morning meeting hai.

Maan - ya hav a sit and geet tum ghar jao main thodi deer mein aata hu.

Geet - tekh hai bye

After sharing my emotion with geet dat day I m feeling very light dat day. Geet ke aane se meri life mein jo change aane lage the muje hi samaj nai aa rahe the. Ab main office mein bhut khush rahne lagi thi. Pinki ,adi , sameer , Natasha se mein thodi baate karne lagi thi bt main unne apne ya apni family ke bare meinkuch share nai kar pati aur who itne ache the ki who log muje insist bhi nai karde the batane ke liye.

Maan sir ko mr. khanna ki project ke shimla jana pada aur geet mam ek din office aayi kuch file lekar jo adi sir ko chahiye thi aur maan sir ke ghar par thi.

Geet - ye lijeye adi sir yahi files maangi thi na aapne.

Adi - ha geet yahi thi chalo mein chalta hu muje ye files study karni hai

Geet - ok adi sir

With dat geet move to my cabin and knock the door

Geet - can I come

Me - arre mam aap plz aayena aap knock kyn kar rahi hai.

Geet - disturb toh nai kiya maine tume

Me - nai mam main toh free thi sir nai hai toh kaam slow chal raha hai.

Geet - agar tum chalo toh hum apni aduri baat puri karte hai

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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice update
pratibha is accepting change in her after meeting with geet

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Posted: 11 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: aparna3011

very nice update

pratibha is accepting change in her after meeting with geet


thank u
n ya she is changing 4 good
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
NOTE :

Sorry girls for not updating the next chapter. I am suffering from high fever and throat infection so I am not able to post nxt chapter bcoz i want to do some changes in it.
But i promise to post it as soon as possible
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: chahat59

NOTE :

Sorry girls for not updating the next chapter. I am suffering from high fever and throat infection so I am not able to post nxt chapter bcoz i want to do some changes in it.
But i promise to post it as soon as possible



no problem
get well soon first
then update
take ur own time
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: chahat59

NOTE :

Sorry girls for not updating the next chapter. I am suffering from high fever and throat infection so I am not able to post nxt chapter bcoz i want to do some changes in it.
But i promise to post it as soon as possible

take care of yourself and than update. no hurry.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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NOTE:
THANXS GUYS FOR UR SUPPORT NOW I AM FEELING BETTER SO I AM UPDATING NEW CHAPTER TOMORROW HOPE U ALL LIKE IT
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sorry 4 late update firstly i was suffering from fever then my exam bt now onwards i will update regularly and From now onwards i will refer Pratibha as PRA.


PART-11

Geet - agar tum chaho toh hum apni adhuri baat puri kar sakte hai.
Geet - tume ye ajeeb lag raha hoga but tumse baate karke mujme kabi kabi apni jalak nazar aati hai par maan ka pyar milne ke baad zindgi ke mayine hi badal gaye.
PRA - subki zindgi mein pyar ho ye jaruri nai.
Geet - matlab?
PRA -kuch nai mam bus aise hi.

By that time rain started and geet get exited by see the and said
Geet - barish aur iss month mein. Aare wah aaj toh maza aa gaya. Tume barish pasand hai kya? muje toh bhut pasand hai aur subse jyada barish mein bhigna aur icecream khana.
PRA - ha mam muje barish pasand hai bachpan se hi aur bhigne ke sath sath mein toh bhut khel thi barish mein football apne bhaiyo ke sath
Geet - ab nai khelti kya? Barish dekhkar muje woh din yaad aata hai jab main maan se phele baar mili thi.
Me - aap sir se pheli baar barish me bhigte hue mili thi?
Geet - ha
PRA - ek baat puachu aapko bura toh nai lagega
Geet - puacho
PRA - aap sir se pheli baar kaise mili?
Geet - maan se meri pheli mulakat?
PRA - sorry aapko bura laga ho toh.
Geet - nai bus main unn yaado me chali gayi. Maan aur main phele baar barish mein hi mile the. Uss din ko sochti hu toh muje aaj bhi haasi aa jati h.
PRA - Kyon??
Geet- uss din hum dono pheli baar bacho ki tarah jagad rahe the. Hua yu maine apna MBA katam kar liya tha aur job ke liye apply kar rahi thi. Muje ek company se interview call aaya aur main gayi interview ke liye bt waha ki management acha nai tha ajeeb ajeeb sawal kar rahe the toh main waha se chali gayi aur bhar taxi stand tak jane lagi tabi barish suru ho gayi aur mere mood jo karab tha woh acha hone laga.
PRA- fir kya hua?
Geet- fir main apni dhun me chalne lagi aur pass hi khade icecream stall se icecream lekar stand ki taraf badne lagi tabi ek car zor se aayi aur road ka sara pani mujpar dal diya. Meri sari dress aur icecream kichad mein puri tarah se karab ho gaye the. Main kuch seconds ke liye shock ho gayi bt maine jaldi hi recover kiya aur uss car ke pass gayi to red light ki wajah se waha par ruki hui thi. Maine bhi soch liya tha uss insaan ko nai chodugi jisne meri aisi halat ki hai
PRA - kya woh car maan sir ki thi?
Edited by chahat59 - 11 years ago

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