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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 12

Geet- fir main apni dhun me chalne lagi aur pass hi khade icecream stall se icecream lekar stand ki
taraf badne lagi tabi ek car zor se aayi aur road ka
sara pani mujpar dal diya. Meri sari dress aur
icecream kichad mein puri tarah se karab ho gaye
the. Main kuch seconds ke liye shock ho gayi bt
maine jaldi hi recover kiya aur uss car ke pass gayi to red light ki wajah se waha par ruki hui thi.
Maine bhi soch liya tha uss insaan ko nai chodugi
jisne meri aisi halat ki hai
PRA - kya woh car maan sir ki thi?
Geet laughed by listening dis and said -ye koi romantic film ki story nai h ki ladka aise ladki ki zindgi mein entry karega.
FLASHBACK
Geet went to that car which stop at signal n knock its window.
Geet - Oh hello dekhkar gadhi nai chala sakte. Bhagwan ne aakhen di hai toh uska use kyn nai karte.
Car window roll down and there r some teenager boyz were dere in car. One of them said - sorry humne dekha nai road par pani nai dekha.
Geet - dekha nai tumare sorry se meri dress tekh nai hoga.
Another said - look miss we said sorry okey. Dont make a fuss. Now let us go.
A lady frm the crowd said - sorry bolne se inka dress tekh ho jayega. Maa-baap ne itni tamiz nai sikhayi ki dusaro se kaise baat karte hai?

FLASHBACK END

Geet - main toh bus unn ladko ko unki galati ka ehsaas dilana chahati thi par waha toh tariff jam ho gaya.
PRA - toh aap sir se kaise mili?
Geet - woh bhi ek kahani hi hai jo meri jindgi ka saach ban gayi.

FLASHBACK

Geet ko tab pata chalta hai ki road par tarific jam lag gaya hai aur kafi cars jam clear hone ka wait kar rahi hai.
On the other side a man in his mid twenty waiting in his car to clear the mess on road. He is getting late 4 his meeting. He came out of his car to see wat is the problem.
Here geet also try to sort out the jam. The crowd is not getting calm down.
A man frm crowd - inne toh police mein de dena chahiye.
Geet - nai bhai sahab inse itni badi galti nai hui jo inne aise saja mile. Main toh bus inhe inki galti ka ehsaas dilana chahti thi.
Man - galti ka ehsaas dilana chahti toh unhe aise bech sadak par rok kar yaha tamasa nai karti. Dusaro ko isse kitni taklif ho rahi ye nai pata tume.
Geet - ye koi tamasa nai hai aur muje pata hai isliye hi main ye crowd ko kam karne ki koshish kar rahi hu.
Man - koshish hi nai karni padti agar tu ye galti ehsaas ka drama hi nai karti. Tumne khudko mother teresa samaj rakha h kya.
Geet - oye helo mr
Man(with proud) - Maan singh khurana.
Geet - ha ha jo bhi tumara naam hai main kya hu main baad mein bataugi abhi muje ye jam clear karwana hai. Aur aap log thanku yaha kadhe hone ke liye par iski koi jarurat nai h. Aur tum sub aage se gadhi dhyaan se chalana ab jao yahase.
Kuch hi deer mein sara jam clear ho gaya.
Geet to maan - dekha sub tekh kar diya maine dusaro ko sunane se phele soch liya karo.
Maan - iss tarfic ki wajah se mera kitna time waste hua h tume pata bhi hai.
Geet - tum kya kahi ke raja maharaja ho jo aise bol rahe ho aur ab tum yaha kyn kadhe ho ab time waste nai ho raha.
Maan - ja hi raha hu aur pray karuga tumse fir kabi mera samna na ho.
Geet - same to u.

FLASHBACK END

Geet - hume kya pata tha woh hamari jindgi ke kuch mitthe pal ban jayege.


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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
Chahat!
Sirf ek hi meeting. ... bus
Waiting for the next!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Chahat!

Sirf ek hi meeting. ... bus
Waiting for the next!



I knw ek meeting thi bt nxt update mein unke kafi scene h.
Will update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Teaser

Maan - tum firse mere samne aa gayi. Muje toh lag raha hai ki tu mera peicha kar rahi ho. Phele road par fir mall mein aur ab yaha.

Geet - haww. Aap apne aap ko india ka prime minister samajte ho kya jo secetary ki tarah aapke piche ghumu. Aap itne lucky nai ki geet handa aapke piche ghume.

Pinky(whisper to geet) - Geet bas karo ye hamare boss hai. Aur jo tum inke piche ghume ki baat kar rahi ho woh tume hi karna hai kynki job tume inki secetary ki mili hai.

Geet (shocked) - nai ye sach nai ho sakta
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Yaha hum update ka wait kar rahe h!
Aur app teaser dete h!
Not fair. ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Yaha hum update ka wait kar rahe h!

Aur app teaser dete h!
Not fair. ..



Sorry dear bt i will update tomorrow
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
very nice teaser
waiting for update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: aparna3011

very nice teaser

waiting for update



Thanxs dear.
Will update very soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: maansee

can i get the pm dear



Sure dear. I will send u pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Part 13


Geet - hume kya pata tha woh hamari jindgi ke kuch mitthe pal ban jayege.
PRA - Ye pal mitthe ab lag rahe h phele toh world war 3 jaise sound ho rahe hai.
Geet - Ha muje toh unki baate sochkar hi gussa aajata tha par ab unhi batao par pyar aata hai.
Geet - Dekho baato baato mein tym ka pata hi nai chala aur office hour katam bhi ho gaye. Tume ghar jane mein late hoga. Main drop kar du.
PRA - Nai mam thanku bt main chali jaugi. Aapko bhi late hoga jane mein. Bye mam see u soon.
Geet - Bye dear.

On the way to home in the car geet again lost in their past meeting.

FLASHBACK

Geet is roaming in the mall with her sister Heer to select a dress for Heer collage party.
Geet - Heer plz yaar koi toh dress pasand kar pichle 2 ghanto se tu ek bhi dress pasand nai kar rahi hai.
Heer - Di plz muje aise mat bolo mere clge mein party hai toh muje toh best dikhna hai after all main heer handa jo hu. But problem ye hai ki party ka theme indian hai. Agar westren hota toh muje koi prob nai hoti but ab main bhut confuse hu.
Geet - Ha ha tum hi toh miss universe ho jo sub tumhe hi dekhege kyn hai na.
Heer - Di aap jao aur kuch aur dekhlo aap muje bhi confuse kar rahe ho. Jao aap mall mein ghumlo.
Geet - Ha ha ja rahi hu miss universe tu apni dress khud pasand karle.
Geet is roaming in the mall and then she saw a beautiful red colour saree in showpeice in a shop. She entre in the shop and went to salesperson.
Geet - Excuseme can u show me that saree.
SP -Sure mam plz dis way plz.
Geet like that saree very much and tell the salesperson to pack it. She paid the amount and start to see the other stuffs of the show. When she came to take her packet the salesperson told her dat by some mistake her packet is exchange with someone who in hurry take her dress. She ask the look of the person to search him. And they gave her discription of dat person.
After searching the person geet get hold on dat person talking on phone holding the packet of same shop. She went to him she was facing his back and said
Geet - excuse me aap galti se meri dress ka packet lekar aa gaye h aur apna packet wahi par chod diya.
The person turn toward her and both same tym said - tum/aap
Maan - Not again tum firse mere samne aa gayi.
Geet - Muje bhi koi shock nai hai aapke samne aane ka. Aapki wajah se muje yaha aana pada.
Maan - Meri wajah se aur woh kaise? Maine toh nai kaha tha mere piche aao.
Geet - Aap jo itna akad ke chalte hai na uski wajah se aap mere dress ka packet le aaye. Phele dekhna toh chahiye tha ki apna samaan hai ya kisi aur ka ya fir aapne jankar hi ye dress badla hai kynki apko ye pasand aaya ho apni gf ke liye aur maine isse le liya toh apne socha kyn na exchange ke bahane ye le lu. Kyn yahi baat haina?
Maan - WHAT? Tum kahna chahti ho ki maine ye exchange jaisi cheap trick ek dress ke liye ki. Oh miss oversmart give break to ur mind. Agar main chahu toh is pure mall ki dresses agle 5 min mein karid sakta hu samji. Aur ye lo apna dress mera itna bhi low taste nai.
Withthat maan headed toward exit from there. And geet keep cursing him 4 spoiling her mood. After some tym heer join geet and both headed to home.

After few interviews geet get job in KC as a secetary of company MD. The atmosphere of KC is quiet interesting 4 geet. She made few frds there and pinky is one of them. Geet didn't get the chance to meet her boss because he went london for a deal and today after one week her boss is returning. She is arrangeing files in reception and chating with pinky. After arranging files she start moving backward and talking to pinky and suddenly she collide with someone and falling. She close her eyes in fear to hit the hard floor bt after few second she felt strong arm on her waist and a strong muscule smell. She instantly open her eyes and got shock of her life.
Maan is holding her and looking at her with intense eyes. When pinky ask geet is she ok then they came to senses & straighten themself and maan said
Maan - tum firse mere samne aa gayi. Muje toh lag raha hai ki tu mera peicha kar rahi ho. Phele road par fir mall mein aur ab yaha.
Geet - haww. Aap apne aap ko india ka prime minister samajte ho kya jo secetary ki tarah aapke piche ghumu. Aap itne lucky nai ki geet handa aapke piche ghume.
Pinky(whisper to geet) - Geet bas karo ye hamare boss hai. Aur jo tum inke piche ghume ki baat kar rahi ho woh tume hi karna hai kynki job tume inki secetary ki mili hai.
Geet (shocked) - nai ye sach nai ho sakta. Aap MK hai par aap ka naam toh maan hai.

Dats all 4 today hope u all will like it. Plz hit the like button and comment ur views on it
Edited by chahat59 - 11 years ago

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