New SS- JEEVANSATHI | [ON HOLD]

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello all, I m a silent reader of geet forum.After reading so many stories on GF.I got inspired.
I thought to write a story on my favourite maan n geet,so I pen down dis story.
Hope u all like it.


PROLOUGE


A girl is sitting in her room
alone and sad😭. Her family trying to cheer up bt nothing work. She took a dairy
from her table to share her feeling.
Hellodairy,
Mera naam Pratibha hai. Aaj main bht
low feel kar rahi hu.isliye tumse apni feeling share kar rahi hu.Aaj main tume
ek kahani sunati hu mere sabse aur karibi dosto ki jo aaj muje chod kar chale
gaye.
Ye kahani hai maan aur geet ki, unke asim pyar ki. Unhone hi muje zindagi ka matlab sikaya hai.

NOTE: IT IS MY FIRST TIME TO WRITE
SOME.HOPE U ALL LIKE IT. 😊




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<part 1- scroll down

part 2- page 2

[part 3- page 4

part 4 - page 6

part 5 - page 8

part 6 - page 9

part 7 - page 10

part 8 - page 11

part 9 - page 13

part 10 - page 15

part 11 -page 16

part 12 - page 18

part 13 - page 20
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART : 1

Pratibha is telling her feeling to dairy bcoz usse geet ki woh baat yaad aa gayi jisme usne kaha tha ki agar apni feeling kisi ko baya nai kar pao toh usse shabdo ka roop dedena chahiye. Bus yahi nai usse geet maan ke sath bitaye har par yaad aa rahe the.
Unse uski phele mulakat ek mall me hui jo aaj bhi uske hoto par muskurahat lati hai

flashback:
Pratibha apne kuch frds ke sath shoping ke liye delhi ke mall me aayi thi. Uska bilkul mann tha bt uski frds ne insist kiya toh aana pada. 3 gante mall me ghumne ke baad woh log bht thak gaye toh unhone cafe me break lekar ghar jane ka socha.
Suman(pratibha frd): yaar aaj toh bht shoping ho gayi aur main toh takh bhi gayi. 🥱
Yogita(another frd): ha tu toh aise bol rahi h jaisa mount everest chada ho.
Suman:everest toh nai par tere ser jarur chad jaugi.
Pratibha:guys kyn jagda kar rahe ho jao kuch order karo aur mere liye bhi ek cold coffee with vanila icecream lana.
Both her frds move to get some thing to eat n pratibha eyes are on a couple which seems like vry much in love with each other.
Woh ek middle age couple tha.Man in his late 50 and lady in late 40. Pratibha ne unhe garment showroom mein bhi dekha tha jaha woh log shoping kar rahe the. Lady was selecting dress 4 man and the man is geting annoyed with continous changing dreeses.
Now they are also sitting the same cafe. Suman n yogita came with their order n start having bt pratibha is adoring only the couple with a smile on her face.
The couple is MAAN n GEET. Ab geet maan par gussa ho rahi h kynki maan geet ko showroom se jabardasti laye
Geet : maan aap waha se muje kyn lekar aaye abhi tho humne apne liye dress nai liya
Maan: geet tum dress kam mera majak banwa rahi thi.
Geet: haww! maine aapka majak kab banaya?
Maan: aur nai toh kya waha shop par maan ye try karo woh try karo aur uske baad bhi kuch pasand nai.
Geet:ha toh muje phele ache lage par aap par woh jache nai.
Dono apne dhun me hi ghum the ke aas pas ka kuch pata hi nai

Flashback end

Dairy ye thi unse meri pheli mulakat.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Next part me font size bada dena plz!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Next part me font size bada dena plz!


ok dear i will do it next tym
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 2

Cafe encounter ke baad main aksar ye sochti thi ki woh couple kya ab bhi ushi tarah nok jhok karte hoge.Gradution ke baad main job dhund rahi thi tabi maine khurana construction me job ke liye apply kiya aur kuch dino ke baad muje waha se interview ke liye call aaya.Uss din main bht khush thi kynki woh mera phela job tha aur woh bhi uss company ke MD ke PA ka. Main interview ke liye time se phele pahuch gayi toh dekha waha toh ladkiya model type lag rahi thi bt jab woh sab interview room se nikalte wakt itne rude comment kar rahi thi.Unko dekh kar main bhi dar gayi.Last girl which came out with tears in her eyes.Next turn mera tha.

Main andar gayi toh MD ki back meri taraf thi tho main unka face nai dekh payi.Waha par baithe company ke main accountant mr. adi ne mujse ques kiye.

Adi-miss pratibha aap ki qualifications toh ache hai bt koi experince nai hai

ME-sir, there is always a first time.Its my first interview n without doing work how can i get experince.

Adi-how can u be sure dat we will give u the job.

I again repied with politeness-sir, main nai janti ke aap muje appoint karege ya nai bt main iss wajah se try karna nai chod sakti.

Mere reply ke baad MD ne apna face turn kiya toh main shock ho gayi.He is non other den MAAN.

Tabhi mere muh se shock me nikla -AAP.😲😲

Maan raise his one eyebrow in question manner n i immediately said a sorry and turned silent.

Adi-miss pratibha can u wait outside we will tell our dicision in an hour.

I smile at dem and left the room.

meanwhile geet enter in office with maan lunchbox and enter his cabin.After lunch break Adi gave me my appointment letter and apolise to other.

That day i got 2 shock, 1st dat i got job in my 1st interview and 2nd was i am going to work with maan jine maine cafe me dekha.😊😲

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: love2_soma

nice update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...



thanxs😊
will update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update...
loved it...
the way prathibha explaning the story is intresting...unique idea..
loves the way she gone through the interview with good confidence...
thank u very much for such lovely
updates...
waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...
continue soon plz...
congrats for ur first ff...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hmm
Acha tha...
Do u by any chance use cell to update??

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