'pari' maaneet ss THREAD 1 updated 16 jan 15

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Asha

@ashakavyam

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#791

Don't know what special is with your writing to make me read and comment and wait eagerly even during my final sem exams

bless you

keep writing

Asha

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nehakapoor7

@nehakapoor7

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#792

Awesome awesome awesome its too good both r in somuch love

thnx for this lovly ss...waiting for next update

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#793

kya timing hai geet ki...nt ko sahi jawab mil gaya...maaja agaya...

superb update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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_Maaneet_

@_Maaneet_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#794

amazing updates

maan came to know about geet's true identity!!!

they are together once again!

why is geet so concerned about locket??????

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Alamelu

@Alamelu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#795

Loved it. Loved the timing of geets appearance in front of nt. but the best part for me is the different characterization of maan and geet in this story. With geet being the strong one and maan the weaker person. Loved the gentleness of geet when dealing with maan and him being himself in front of her and nor being able to see her upset for any reason

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Binish

@mayurmaaneet

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#796

whoaaa lol perfect.. glad geet stepped in just in time to give nt a slap.. lol.. awwwnn geet is back.. cont soon hun.. i mean it muski.

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#797

part - 13

wow lovely emotional heart winching heart tearing update...te way all beautiful moments vanished with in one night oh god my maan ki guilty locking his geet ki heart holding all her feelings was lovely heart tearing..te way geet ki happiness thinking tat now she belongs to my maan but his worry made her blank and cold was lovely winching..te way my maan ki guilty seeing his geet was lovely emotional...te way he kept cheque after they lovely moment breaking his geet more..buddhu maan wat u did u lost ur soul..te way they way back,but now only silent remains between them was emotional..te way my maan felt some thing pricking him ..te geet asking abt his promise and he agreeing,will he go behind her..i think geet leaving my maan carrying his seed inside her?..i love te update so much

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Dilsay

@Dilsay

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#798

good morning Muski ...
Ajj ka wada hay lol
waiting for the update

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HeytzMaaneet

@HeytzMaaneet

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#799

Part 13

Poor Maan was in so much pain 🥺

But also lucky he has someone who can calm his restless soul with her mere touch!

Maaneet became one😳

but Maan ruined their moment by blurting out rubbish in his frustration

Yeh saare Maan bolne se pehle sochte kyun nahi😕

Geet hurt😭

Maaneet part ways but hope Maan fulfills his promise😊

Awesome update Muskan

😃

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#800

part -14

wow lovely emotional update..te way my maan struggling to bring his business up and to fulfill his promise and mainly to get her back was lovely emotional..te way my maan caeressing te locket and sam taunting geet which he didt like was lovely..so geet returned everything to my maan was emotional bechari wat she is doing with her broken heart...te way maan got loan and back to his life enjoying but still lost in his geet was lovely ..i love te update so much