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Posted: 11 years ago
geet told rajji how maan propose her lovely movements maaneet arnav j maan heared maaneet engagement nice update
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update...⭐️
please make Arshi meet!!😭
obvio its khushi!!!😔
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsom updt
love flashback
arnavis so much in paain
waiting fr nxt
cont soon
thxn fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
felt so sad for arnav.. poor him.. he loves khushi so much but i don't understand the reason khushi hurts him.. hope arnav gets his love..

thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Kalpana,

sorry for not commenting for so long 😭, the completion of my thesis is truly keeping me busy busy...🤢

You know, initially when you had brought in Annie and we got to know about her real feelings for Arnav, I already wondered whether she was that selfless or not 😒. And I guess her feelings are what made Arnav's plan backfire . If Annie would have been more concerned about Arnav she might have just gone to Khushi and told her what the matter was 😔. Hearing it from her, at least Khushi would have understood what Arnav really felt.

But Khushi is also...I would say confused about her feelings 😕 and then with all the jealousy game I guess she snapped. That is the problem with people who get angry easily, the do first and think later ☢️ (and often regret what they did). I am sure she loved Arnav but doesn't see it and thinking Arnav played with her feeelings she might just believe that she does not love him 😔. I hope Arnav comes to know about Annie's intentions and maybe Khushi, too. That might give her a reason to fight for him instead of against him ⭐️.

And I also hope that Maan's love does not become a reason for Arnav to hate him. It may just be a momentary thing. Maybe Geet
☯️ can help out here. Maan is really sweet to propose to Geet like this and love Rajji and Khushi for demanding a proper engagement ❤️. Maybe that will give ground for another confrontation between Arnav and Khushi. Hmm, I wonder what if Maan finds out when Geet tells him or accidentally spills it? I guess, Maan will help Arnav and try and make Khushi understand. Because of Geet, I doubt he will actually be angry on Arnav. Afterall, he knows him and knows that he isn't a player...

Gosh, these were my thoughts on the chapter and story so far 😳. I will try and comment on DFL sometime comming week. Please bear with me 🤢!
Love
Mina

Edited by Mina420 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Deelight

tat was such a romantic proposal...
loved it..
tooo goood!
but wats with this Khushi? why s she refusin arnav?!

Because she thinks Arnav is the same old arrogant fellow who used to stalk her to win her heart! Slowly it turned into zidd and now she refuses to believe that Arnav has changed and stopped being so arrogant! Plus, Arnav's jealousy plan ruined everything or else, I am sure Khushi would have realised her feelings but by Arnav confessing about the plan while drunk, it ruined the whole situation!
Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: zebali

superb update.

loved it.
maneet confession r beautiful.
arshi OMG OMG.
khushi again rejected the proposal of arnav.
arnav shettred v badly.
song was awesome.
fback with memories r superb.
whose accident happened.
tf pm.

Thank you!
Glad you enjoyed the update so much!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tmowla

superb update...⭐️

please make Arshi meet!!😭
obvio its khushi!!!😔

They will be together soon! Don't worry!😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: crazyforsarun

Ooh la la! Kya update tha! I mean like seriously WOW!


Finally got time to reply your review! Phew! I am replying it almost a month after you posted it! Ridiculous I know! But kya karein! Something or other comes in between me and my reviews!😭 Chalo! Lets get back to my replying you! Eager to reply to this long and awesome review!

Wow Kalpana you have such awesome writing skills! You are very talented!


Thank you!😃

I must say that almost every story that I read that you wrote have ArShi and Maneet in them, and they do make a pretty good combination! All you need to do is just take a jodi like Arshi and Maneet, add some of Kalpana's amazing writing skills and Tada! you've got a whole new wonderful, masaledaar FF to read!


Now you are making me blush!😳

By the way I love those short stories that you put up at every intro on your new threads I love each and every one of them. It's like you already met the characters and are talking to them in real life.


Glad you enjoyed it so much!

Okay so now to the chappy:

Maan gave Geet the responsibility of arranging Khurana Construction's Anniversary party. He already calls her hi future wife mentally I know that everyone knows that like ArShi and Geet but not his clients and guests. Geet did a pretty good ob arranging the party. Way to go Geet you made Maan Singh Khurana proud of you!

Finally Maan realizes that his sister is beginning to fall in love with Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada aka chota Dhak Dhak (for me he will aways be bada Dhak Dhak 😆)So he already believes that our Laad Governor is erfect for his sister but Khushi doesn't know that and Maan wants her to find that out by herself.


Haaye! Bada ho ya chota ho! He will always give dhak dhak to us, right?

So Maan sees Arnav in the same mood that he saw Khushi in.

LOL he actually thought that both Arnav and Khushi need to be locked in room so that they can solve their problems and then come out and live their lives peacefully. Seriously that is a wonderful idea but we all know that it is not going to work out that way because of Khushi's stubbornness


Glad you found it funny!😆

I really like the way you described how Maan felt when he saw his lady love aka Geet Handa future Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana (according to him and us). Maan finds out that Geet wore a sari on purpoe she she could see him drooling on her. Naughty Geet!😆 She is very well aware of the effect that she has on him. They are so lost in each other that neither of them noticed the staff and guests swooning over Geet.


Really? You liked it? Bahut mehnat se likha tha woh scene! Took pains to make it seem so dreamy!😳

Geet was teasing Maan 😆 Maneet are becoming so naughty! She walks up to him while he is still lost in her and talks to him like he is his employee and he is her boss. Her way of teasing him was first wearing that saari that made him forget his surroundings and just only see her and then talking to him like they are only boss employee(including the winking part). Maan is not going to let her get away with this so easily he is going to get her back for sure.

Awww Khushi is admiring her brother and future bhabi. They look so perfect with each other. (Let me tell you a secret Khushi, I know someone that would make your jodi with him become a superhit jodi it's Arnav but you don't know that yet 😆) So she bumps into Arnav while admiring her bro and future bhabs. So cut Arnav Khushi have a short eyelock when Arnav is trying to bring her back to her balance. Arnav eyes are showing love and longinging for her while Khushi's are showing confusion and uncertainty. But what is the uncertainty for? I understand why there is confusion because she is confused about her feelings for him.


Uncertainty is because she does not understand how to react around Arnav! There was a time when she could just be harsh with him and yet he would follow her but now he does not seem the same Arnav to her!

ArShi are out of their eyelock when they see Maan asking Geet for a dance and she agrees. This lights up some hope in Arnav and he asks Khushi to dance with him to which see refuses leaving Arnav again in pain because she gets jealous thinking that Arnav brought Annie to the party. Argh! Why did Annie have to show up at wrong timing! She seriously is the kabab mei haddi!


Ya! She is a total kabab mein haddi! Annd soon she will bring the biggest problems in MG and AK's life!

Oh so she thinks that Khushi doesn't deserve Arnav. But what she doesn't know is that Arnav can never be hers and that Arnav Khushi are made for each other. No matter how hard she tries to separate or keep them away, it's not going to work because Arnav Khushi are "meant to be".


Exactly! Par iss Annie ko kaun samjhaaye!

I like the dance scene, Maan is getting Geet back for teasing him while dancing with her. (I've never heard of that song before)


Than watch the VM! The song is played in the Sholon Si VM! And the VM is in my Arnav Khushi VM Gallery!

Awww poor baby, Arnav is wondering why Khushi doesn't love him back. (Don't worry Arnie she does but she just hasn't realized it yet) He is so cute, he followed Khushi to the garden know if she's okay or not. It looks like he found out the reason of her tears, she is jealous of Annie. *facepalm* Saara satyanas kardiya by telling her that it was his plan to make her jealous. Yeh Arnav bhi na ghalat time pe ghalat cheez bol deta hai. Oh man! Khushi is angry now...

Par Arnav bhi kya kare he was drunk when he blurted out about his jealousy plan


🤣 I loved your reaction to Arnav's blurting out his plan! Just loved it! Laughing non stop right now!😆

*gasps* Oh my gosh! They just about to kiss until that Annie interrupted😡(Last time during diwali episode Arnav's phone rang when Aman called him but this time Aman wasn't the disturbance it was Annie)


Yes! The great Aman! It was hilarious the way Arnav would call Aman for every single thing!

LOL Maaneet are still busy teasing each other while Arshi on the other side are having problems

Right now Maaneet's love story is going smooth but I don't knw what's coming up in the future
As for right now I can't say the same for Arshi since Khushi hasn't realized and confessed her love yet.
Maaneet kissed!😲 😳 nice scene
Chalo atleast ek toh hua na
Arshi ka abhi incomplete hai


Arshi ka bhi ho jaayega! Just give them few chapters! Then Khushi will confess and she will confess in dhamakedaar style!😉

Grrr that Sasha. She took a picture of Maaneet kissing.😲 What is she cooking up that evil mind of hers. Whatever it is, I hope that Maan Geet will be able to handle the situation.

So Annie heard the whole conversation between Arnav Khushi. Eavesdropping!
She was happy that Khushi told Arnav that she didn't love him but her happiness didn't last long because she saw ArShi's almost kiss.

Who was Annie talking to on the phone? She has become an obsessed lover like Shyam but only female version. She is dangerous. Annie is trying to kill Khushi and make it look like an accident 😲😡.She is wrong again! No matter what she does she can't separate Arshi they are meant to be. I hope that Arnav will find out about her true intentions and save Khushi.


Yes! I am turning Annie into Shyam-like! Arnav wont know anything till the confession happens! And then the storm will arrive!

I hope that Khushi will realize that she loves Arnav soon!

The update was fantastic!
Thanks for the PM!
Update soon! 😃


Khushi will realize once she sees the extent of Arnav's love for her!😃

Thanks for such an awesome review! Enjoyed reading it and replying it!
Thanks once again!😃
Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part maan proposal for marraige was lovely geet so happy with proposal and she said yes khushi and raji was hindustani engagement ceremony and maaneet agreed

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