Milestone SS on Maan's Memory Loss Track Epilogue/Pg 85 Dt 18/03/'15

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metromasti

@metromasti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#281

awesome update Heytal. beautifully written 😊 feeling ki watching geet through your writing .
waiting for next 😉

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suni_104

@suni_104

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Posted: 10 years ago

#282

Superb update
Well written
Maan do not want do anything to dev
Thanks for pm

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monika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#283

Superb lovely parts aamazing well described all situations love it

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tamannA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#284

awsemm geet narration quite fab maan counter attack awsem maan made right decision about dev

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sanum23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#285

nice ud

maan can't forgive dev

wat he did

its not mistake but sin

fr daadi sake he tongue ties

dev hears wat maannsaid

he free fr Nt clutch

but not frm inner remorse

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Maaneet099

@Maaneet099

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Posted: 10 years ago

#286

loved it to bits! I would have loved if something similar happened in the show. I really wanted Maan to sit down and listen to the beautiful moments they shared. You have done it very nicely Heytu!

Can't wait to read more :D

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

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Posted: 10 years ago

#287

Awesome part..
Geet narrated past moments to Maan and Maan high on emotions..

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fict

@fict

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Posted: 10 years ago

#288

Nice updates. Maan came to know everything through Geet. Liked the way Geet narrated their story along with the slides.

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#289

maan sahi hai apne jagah per...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#290

update was so long & it took me a lot of time to read but i did it.

It was fab. maan was listening to each & every word of geet about the life he had forget. After listening to geet, maan realize what actually he lost is his life's priceless memories which he had woven with geet. Although he forget all of them but geet is there with him.

Concerning the Dev's matter, it's true that maan had treated each of his sibling like a father when he himself was in dire in need of a father. Like a parent, he can read his sibling really well & like a father he is highly disappointed & hurt with Dev's doings. So it is difficult for him to forget Dev & Dev didn't mind maan's words coz he knows he had let his brother down. All Dev want is to make maan proud on him & i believe he will do it, although it is difficult.

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