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annirogc

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

its totally amazing story..just then read all the parts.. beautifully written updates.. loved it..

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abi_niki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

Nice FF... Awesome writing...⭐️

Especially in the part 72 or 73 "Fight for yourself" words is a remarkable one...

Maan - Sweety - Geet bond was very nicely potraited by you...

My suggestion: if possible try to publish this story in a magazine...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

Part 1

So Maan and Geet are married and Geet is pregnant.
Geet wants to abort Maan's child
Interesting.

Part 2

Maan and Geet loved each other during their college days.
But why do they hate each other so much?
What did Geet do??

Part 3

So Maan thinks that Geet cheated him.
But Geet is innocent. Hope the misunderstanding gets cleared soon.
Awesome part

Part 4

Maaneet nhok-jhok was cute. Annie is so rude.
But the present is so painful. I hope everything gets cleared soon.

Part 5

Even Geet's parents and brother hate her 😭
But I'm happy that she did not abort the baby.

Part 6

Who the hell did that with Geet??😡
And her parents didn't even listen to her.
Maan also doesn't believe her.
Poor Geet😭

Part 7

So the Khuranas don't know anything about that incident.
Maan is behaving very rudely with Geet. I'm hating him.
I hope he realizes his mistake before its too late.

Part 8

Maan 😡. He'll repent big time when he gets to know the truth.
I don't want Geet to forgive him that easily.

Part 9

Why does everyone hate Geet so much??
How can they believe that Geet can do all that??
Feeling really bad for Geet.
I hope the truth comes out soon.
I can't see her suffer anymore.

Part 10

Finally Geet stood upto Maan eventhough it was for her child.
I hope Maan gets to know the truth before Geet leaves the house.

Wonderful updates😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#224

Part 11

I hate Annie.
And I'm happy that atleast Dadi believed Geet.
I think Dadi will get to know the truth.

Part 12

OMG Annie did all this??
I want her to get more slaps from Arjun.
I'm glad Dadi heard the conversation.
I hope nothing happens to Geet.

Part 13

Dadi and Adi should find Geet soon.
I can't see Geet suffering anymore.

Part 14

Finally Dadi found Geet.
Geet's condition is critical.
I'm sure Geet is alive.
Dadi is definitely lying.

Part 15

Finally the truth is out.
Annie deserves worse than these slaps.
I want to see Maan suffer in guilt now.
Also want to know if Geet is safe or not?

Part 16

This Annie is so shameless.
Urghh I want her to beg for mercy from Geet.
So Maan confessed how he tortured Geet.
I want Geet to be fine.

Part 17

Omg!!!! This Annie is so disgusting.
I hate her to the core.
Everyone knows the truth now and Maan is very guilty.

Part 18

I'm loving Dadi and Vicky.
And nothing to say about Annie.

Part 19

Finally Maaneet met.
Poor Geet.

Part 20

Maaneet in so much pain.
I can't see them like this.

Loved the story till now

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Part 21

Geet is still under depression.
It is so heartwrenching to see Geet like this.
I hope she becomes normal soon.

Part 22

WTH is Maan doing?
This is becoming more and more complicated day by day.

Part 23

Geet loves Maan so much.
So Maan knew that Geet is alive.
And Maan has sent the divorce papers.
But I know Maan will come back.

Part 24

Yipee Maan is back.
Now I want everything to be fine.

Part 25

I think Maan should forget the past and move on.
I know its difficult but atleast for Geet's sake he should stop feeling guilty.
Geet has suffered enough now she deserves some happiness.

Part 26

And my sherni Geet is back.
You go girl.
Haha loving the jealous Maan.

Part 27

Geet is planning to make Maan more jealous.
Poor Dev. He is scared of Maan but Geet is not ready to listen.

Part 28

Omg Just loved the update.
Maan obviously can't see Geet with anyone else.
Lage raho Geet.

Part 29

Maan is very stubborn.
And now he knows the truth.
I'm scared about his anger.

Part 30

Oh... When I thought everything was going to be alright we are again back at the same point.
I hope Maan understands her atleast now.

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#226

Part 31

I'm happy that the accident brought Maaneet together.
I don't want anymore tears.
I want them to be happy now.

Part 32

Geet slapped Maan? Good.
Atleast now he'll stop being stubborn.
Yay Maaneet back in KM.

Part 33

So cute!!!
Geet tricks them with the recipe.
Poor Maan and Vicky.
Nice to see them all loving Geet so much.

Part 34

They went for a picnic.
Geet is angry seeing the girls flirt with Maan and Vicky.
Maan & Vicky threw Geet in cold water.
Very cute update!!

Part 35

One whole update on Maaneet.
It was very passionate.
Even I want Maaneet baby soon.

Part 36

Aww Vicky teasing Geet and she is shy.
How cute.
Who the hell is that woman?
Is it Sameera or Annie?

Part 37

Ewww Sameera is disgusting.
The way she is touching Maan , that too in front of her husband.
Good that Vicky gave it back to her.
Who is this Pari??

Part 38

So Sameera has trapped Mr.Narang too.
What else can we expect from her?
Pari is so sweet.
I want to kill that Sameera.
She is so pathetic.
I hope Maan's plan works.
Lovely Maaneet moments.

Part 39

My hate for Sameera is increasing day by day.
Happy to see Geet's reunion with her family.
Love Maaneet.

Part 40

Loved cute nhok-jhok between Maaneet.
Maan's plan is working.
Sameera is confessing her crime.

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Part 41

Sameera did so many crimes.
For a second I thought she shot Geet.
Thank god Sameera is dead.
Vicky is scared that Pari loves someone else.

Part 42

Passionate update.
Haha Pari is teasing Geet.
Omg Geet is pregnant again. I'm so happy.

Part 43

So Maan knows that Geet is pregnant and wants to surprise her.
Loved the Maaneet scenes as usual.
Everyone in the family are happy.

Part 44

Vicky arranged a pooja for Maaneet and their baby.
Its so sweet.
I just love Vicky & Geet's relation.
So Pari also loves Vicky.
Nice.

Part 45

Maan and Vicky's over protectiveness is irritating Geet.
Nice to see the whole family taking care of Geet.
Omg this time I don't want anything to happen to Geet or the baby.
Maan is not ready to let Geet stay in Handa mansion.

Part 46

Maan is missing his Geet so much that he called 50 times in a day.
Me thinking that is not too much. :P
And this Vicky na he doesn't want to propose Pari.
Lol the whole Khurana khandan reached Handa mansion.

Part 47

Poor Maan. He is so scared of Geet's health.
Maaneet and Pari's moments were nice.

Part 48

Finally Vicky proposed Pari.
Omg Maaneet fighting.
Geet doesn't know about her health which is making Maan worry about her.
I hope everything gets sorted out.
Both are right in their place.

Part 49

Maan slapped Geet.
Maan should understand that the whole family is there to look after Geet.
Finally Maaneet made up.

Part 50

Geet asking for chocolate cake at 12 a.m and Vicky fulfilling her wish.
So sweet.
Oh god Geet's and baby life in danger again.
I'm so scared.

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Part 51

Maan is very angry.
I can understand Maan's fears but keeping Geet captive will not help.
Can't he see that he himself is destroying his relationship with Geet.

Part 52

Feeling terrible for Geet.
I don't know what to say.
Annie should rot in hell.
Will Geet be able to come out of this?

Part 53

Thank god Geet & the baby are better now.
Now who is back? Is it Annie.
I don't want anything to happen to Geet or the baby this time.
So Vicky & Pari are getting married.
Now what is hidden from Maaneet , Vicky & Pari?

Part 54

I'm really getting scared now.
Geet got scared that Maan left her again.
Hope both Geet & the baby are fine.

Part 55

So Geet gave birth to a boy.
Relieved that Geet & the baby are safe.
Happy to see Maan free from his guilt.
Awww the family moment with Armaan is so cute.

Part 56

Armaan is finally in KM.
Vicky & Yash fighting for the baby is very cute.
Maan teasing Geet and Armaan never leaves Geet.

Part 57

I'm loving Maaneet moments with Armaan.
Vicky is so concerned about Armaan.
Haha Vicky & Yash fighting for Armaan again.

Part 58

Who is this Jairaj?
I think he is Shekar's brother.
What past is Yash hiding from Maan & Vicky?
So many questions.
Sweet Maaneet moments.

Part 59

Maan wants to hide himself and Armaan from Vicky.
I just love the bond between Maaneet & Amy.
Enjoying the family moments.
Did Jairaj love Naina?
And is Sameera his daughter?
I'm so confused.

Part 60

As usual loved Maaneet & Amy.
Maan planning a surprise for Geet on her birthday.
Happy to see the family enjoying.

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Part 61

Loved Vicky & Pari scene.
Amy slapped Maan and then kissed him. So cute.
Oh god Pari saw Annie.
Why the hell is she back now.

Part 62

Now what happened to Geet?
I'm getting scared.
Maan has gone mad. He is blaming Amy for Geet's pain.
Who is Rajveer now? And Annie deserved to be slapped.
She has not changed one bit.

Part 63

Thank god Geet is fine.
I'm glad Maan made up for Amy.
Omg who took Amy? And he is torturing that poor kid.
Maan should really control his anger.
I hope Maan finds Amy as soon as possible.

Part 64

Phew Amy is out of danger.
But will he be normal like before?
I hope Maan kills that person with his hands.

Part 65

Maan is missing.
Thank god Maan came back and now everything is alright between Maaneet.
Even Amy is fine.

Part 66

Maaneet & Amy are so cute.
Amy wants all attention to himself.
I'm confused as to how many ppl are planning against Khuranas.

Part 67

So Pari is Jairaj's daughter.
And her mom Simran is Yash's sister.
So Yash's dad had married Simran's mom.
And Shekar is Jairaj's brother.
Everything is so confusing.
I wish Maan kills that Jairaj.

Part 68

Geet worried seeing Maan's condition.
So Vicky wants to know the truth.
Maan manofying Geet.

Part 69

Dadi knows the truth. She feels betrayed.
Dadi is right in her place.
Geet also heard everything.
I hope she manages to console Dadi.

Part 70

Even I don't want Dadi to hate Pari.
Maan shouted on Amy again.
Maan should have not left Jairaj.
I'm feeling bad for Pari.
Its not her mistake. I hope Dadi realizes it soon.

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Part 71

I'm sad to see Pari broken like this.
Good that Maan is torturing Jairaj.
Maan is so shameless but I love him.
Looks like Annie is back.
I hope Geet recovers soon.

Part 72

This is so painful.
First Geet and Simran and Pari.
Pari should not have heard it.
Also she had a miscarriage.
Hope she is out of danger.

Part 73

Who called Maan?
Prem is back.
I've lost count of the number of enemies Khuranas have.
Prem had kidnapped Geet and he loved her :O
And Geet is telling all this now.
But Maan should not be so harsh on Geet.

Part 74

Lol Maaneet & Amy are all nautankis.
Chalo atleast Maaneet made up.
Good to see that Pari is fine and Dadi realized her mistake.
But still everything is not fine.

Part 75

Sweet Maaneet moments.
Is Prem Jairaj's son?
Maan met with a accident.
Oh god everyone are landing in hospital one after the other.

Part 76

So I was right Prem is Jairaj's son.
Geet is too much.
How can she do that to Amy.
I dunno why is Geet speaking all that nonsense.

Part 77

Geet & Maan both are hurt & they both are hurting each other.
Wish everything was fine between them.
And I'm really hating Vicky now.
I hope Vicky's plan succeeds.

Part 78

This Ranveer is disgusting. Yuck.
Anyways happy that Raj/Ranveer is dead.
Poor Amy is suffering because of Maaneet fights.

Part 79

Maan is planning against Rajveer and Jairaj.
Good that they both were sent to jail.
Its so sad to see Geet in depression.

Part 80

Sameera was Jairaj's daughter & he had sold her too :O
Finally Jairaj is dead.
So Annie is gonna be back.