MG~ SS~The Torment-Thread- 9~ UPDATED Pt 69/ Pg 130 / 24th Apr ....... - Page 90

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites

heyy babbie ..kesa raha din??


😆 superb...
Mona..

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Posted: 11 years ago
hi di;s chavi BB mona sona mauaa n all
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi all
Am online for while
Now on way back home
Will go offline soon
But thought to say hi
Damn traffic jams

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

Hi all

Am online for while
Now on way back home
Will go offline soon
But thought to say hi
Damn traffic jams


hi chavi 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Bye allsee ya again soon
If I get home on time
Offline for now
Thought to let you know

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Posted: 11 years ago
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For banner credit goes to my dear Priya...🤗

Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.





Part - 69


All wr in meeting nd discussed all d points then Dadima . Geet nd Manish went to meet labors ,, they heard their views ,, discussed with them for long on some points then came on a middle path after some negotiation ,, then they called d manager nd d civil engg ,, they had face to face talk nd cleared all their issues ,, Dadima assured d labors to fulfill all their recommended demands ,, Geet talked to them in a very professional way nd told them that she will visit d site twice a week to keep a check on manager nd supervisor,, Manish was surprised seeing GS's confidence nd Dadima's support for her ,, there was not any negative sign of that office incident in her behavior ,, Manish , Dadima nd Geet wr suspecting supervisor for this clash nd decided to talk to Maan regarding this later ,, he must be change . Geet advised Manish to set a person behind that civil engg to get news regarding him .

Dadima nd Manish talked to police persons ,, they too moved back ,, Dadima , Manish nd manager wr surprised that how media persons came there on this small issue ,, they came to talk reporters nd informed them that d dispute was sort out ,, that was a minor MU nd everything is fine now ,,

After settle down everything Dadima , Geet nd Manish came back ,, Dadima nd Geet reached lil late at KV ,, both wr very tired ,, took their meal nd slept , though Maan call them as usual time but Dadima didn't say anything to him *** next 2 days wr holidays but both d ladies decided to stay at home ,, last week was tiring for both ,, Geet saw many dishes in BF nd specially d yellow Halwa Prasad ,, she was curious why these things in d morning ? then Dadima came in an off white saree with yellow border .

Geet: Dadima aaj kuch special hei kya? Yellow halwa ,, yellow saree ,, yellow flowers in house .

Dadima smiled nd gave her packet ,, Geet thanked nd opened that ,, there was a yellow suit for her,, she gave a questioning look.

Dadima : aree beta , Indian calendar ke according aaj Basant-Panchmi hei aur Saraswati Pooja bhi ,, India mei sab bade acche se manatey hei , lekin hum bas thodai si ritual ker letey hei .

Geet: O,o, to aaj Basant -Panchmi hei ,, esliye ye Kesar Halwa ,, wow!! .

Dadima: aaj ye suit pahno humare liye .

Geet: Of cource , thanks Dadima,, waise aaj mere liye bhi ye din special hei .

Dadima: wo kaise?

Geet: I born on d day of Basant- Panchmi ,, lekin meri date of birth ke according din hamesha match nahi kerta ,, mom to ess din bhi mujhe wish kerti thi ,, wo kahati thi ki ye din jyada auspicious hei * Geet became lil senty remembering her old days.

Dadima came close to her ,, hugged her dearly ,, packed her forehead nd wished her HBday .

Dadima: Rano was right beta don't worry we 'll celebrate our princess's Bday ,, come let's start with d pooja ,, she brought Geet in d temple room ,, N&S followed them ,, all did pooja nd then Dadima insisted Geet to offer Bhog to God nd then distribute to all * all started their day happily ,, Dadima gave a beautiful gold chain with diamond pendant to Geet nd blessed her later both spent time together ,, they caught d business news nd find last day's news there ,, d reporters tried to highlight d site matter which was not so big .

Geet: Dadima , esse kuch prob to nahi hogi na ?

Dadima: nahi, Maan ke aane per ek press conference ker lenge ,, he'll handle that.

Geet: aap nahi ker sakty ?

Dadima: ker sakty hei ,, OK we'll discuss to Manish nd hope Maan wd be here on Sun.

Geet: hmmm ,, jitna jaldi ho accha hei .

Dadima called Manish nd told him to arrange a press conference on Mon ,, Manish informed her that MK's name is almost conform for d award that's why some ppl r trying to stain KC's name in jealousy * Dadima told him not to inform MK regarding this issue.

At night Maan called Dadima nd told her to come on skype ,, Dadima opened her laptop nd contact him soon Maan was on screen ,, it was day time in India nd Dadima was shocked seeing d BG,, it seems that he was in HP ,, Geet was sitting lil away from lappy.

Maan: Dadima where is Geet ? plzz call her I have something for her .

Dadima: she is here beta , but Dadima was fearing about Geet's reaction,, she turned d lappy towards Geet saying ,, Geet beta , Maan wants to talk to u.

Geet adjusted d screen ,, Maan was there ,, both passed a smile wishing Hi to each other ,, she felt a churn in her tummy seeing him after a week .

Maan: Geet ,, I'm showing u something ,,plzz try to concentrate nd don't over react ,, I'm rotting d camera nd plzz try to get d view OK .

He rotated his ipad nd zoomed ,, there wr some fields nd then a road where some students/girls wr coming ,, Geet got some familiar surroundings nd than a face ,, she gasped nd shuddered ,, Rajji * tears rolled down from her eyes ,, Rajji was going to school with her friends ,, Geet recognized those girls also , but next moments she started fearing ,, Maan was looking at Geet 's pic on side ,, he saw her tears .

Maan: Geet , rona nahi ,, tumhe rulane ke liye maine ye sab nahi kiya ,, plzz.

Geet spoke in a cracky voice : Maan , tum wahan HP mei ho .

Maan: haan mai kal nyt mei kisi kam sa aaya tha ,, tum dekho pahale , hum baad mei baat karenge .

Geet: tum HP ku gaye, kisi ko doubt ho gaya to ? plzz wapas aa jao.

Maan: Geet trust me ,, kuch nahi hoga , I'm alert nd Adi is with me ,, daro nahi .

Geet: kisi ko shaq ho gaya to ?

Maan: maine kaha na , kuch nahi hoga ,, tum ye dekho ,, bas .

Geet became lil relaxed ,, she saw a smiling Rajji going to school , geet was seeing her after that fateful day .

Geet: Maan plzz save this in ur ipad for me nd plzz be careful .

Maan: sure Geet .

He saved that nd after few min he turned d pad ,, now it was Maan on screen.

Maan: Geet , I'm going to Khurana Haweli ,, there I 'll talk to u .

Geet: Maan mujhe dar lag raha hei ,, plzz tum wapas aa jao ,, kisi ko pata chal gaya to ?

Maan: Geet mujhe tumhe kuch sacchai batani hei ,, aur plzz daro matt ,, calm down ,, mai thodi der mei phone kerta hoon.

Dadima was listening all this nd she pressed Geet's hand assuring her ,, Geet looked at her dreaded.


Precap --- Geet's Bday gift from Maan ...




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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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