~GUROOR~maaneet SS pt11 last pt pg69/76 apr24

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honeygrape

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Posted: 11 years ago

#491

awwwsome story...but diii please dont stop it here...there s sooo much more to read

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-Lehar-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#492

oh it's ended...
atlast maan came to know about geet condition through dev and he became numb with the info
he went to her room and showed his love for her
geet got cured within two months with the help of her love besides her
everyone saw new maan in these days
he is feeling proud to see his happy family...
thanks for the wonderful story of maaneet

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Desigirls12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#493

part - 11

wow lovely emotional heart tearing, tearful update..te way my maan ki frustration thinking were he lagged, but dev ki words , If this is what she wanted, why would she leave her parents & come with you in the first place?, made him realize wat he did to his jaan till now, no sory wat he didt do.. te way my maan seeing his geet and crying in pain to see her , was lovely emotional..te way geet rushing to washroom seeing my maan thinking she is not worth to face him making his heart to shattered , was lovely heart tearing..yes he loved her and she too but didt showed tats only,want to give her everything , in tat he forget to show his presenece was lovely heart tearing..te way my maan crying and rano slapping who was standing like lifeless soul and te way whole scene making my maan to broke was lovely heart tearing.. bechari geet thinking he wont accept her even though she know how much my maan loves her was lovely emotional.. i love te update so much..

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#494

last part

wow lovely emotional touching update...te way my maan came to know wat his geet went thru coz of his absenec , and were he pushed her, making him to drown in his guilty seeing his geet was lovely emotional heart tearing..te way geet trying to hide from him thinking he will hate her, but his one word I LOVE U made her to break all her walls and hugged him was lovely emotional touching, tearful scenes..te way how painful but he have to get his geet back hiding his guilty and taking care of her was lovely emotional.. geet got my maan her love all for herself, now my maan know wat he have to give his geet not gifts or jewels but himself was lovely emotional.. wat ever te way my maan ki hesitation but his jaan know wat my maan need so she came back to him, tis morning cant be more beautiful rather than any day, waking up with his love in his arms was lovely emotional touching..te way both drowning in their passion and touching each other soul was lovely emotional..te way my maan broking down in front of his geet saying why she didt talk to him or hold wen he is not there, why she didt complaning to him was lovely emotional touching.. tis my maaneet ki love no words need nor they action.. they silent is enough for them to break they wall...maan if u cant take care of his geet than one can take care, she is urs my maan ki geet...te way my maan admiring his geet his baby's mom who beared all his tauntrums and now stood in front fof him was lovely emotional.. i love te update so much..

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Desigirls12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#495

wow thank u so much muski for giving a very lovely emotional heart touching ss.. its was beautiful poem which made me to crave for tis again and again.. really i dont know were u get like tis idea to crush my heart with my maaneet scenes.. i will miss my maaneet in tis.. tis ss will stay in my heart forever.. thanku once again for giving me a lovely feel thru tis..love u...

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aali

@18mypride

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Posted: 11 years ago

#496

u made me crazy... Omg what a beautiful story.

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tabby999

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Posted: 11 years ago

#497

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Shruthe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#498

Awww,,,,, It was FAB..

I just dunno how to put in words... i had felt different emotions at different points in the story..

I was actually pissed with maan being so ignorant.. but then when Geet got into her addiction, though it was a slip, i felt that she should have fought for him instead of succumbing herself to drugs..

he did love her, just that didnt realize what was happening.. he just got lost in his work and failed to notice the pain in her.. when he just saw it, something came up and he just couldnt fathom much.. that was the part i really was irritated with maan..

but then his confusion, restlessness in the last part was completely heart wrenching.. you love some one and when u dont seem to know an ounce of what is happening with that person when u have thought that you were doing all things just for her is earth shattering.. i absolutely loved the way you had put that...

But then this part... It was just fab...

through out we saw the love she held for him in her doings.. the way she tried to smile for him in pain.. the way she masked her condition..

But this part, u had just beautifully explained his love and emotions for her.. no wonder she went bonkers at media for flashing crap news against him...

I absolutely loved every part of the update.. i read this one atleast four five times..

We all saw a maan whom she knew deep down and whom we didnt know...

He married her coz he couldnt see her crying the whole night coz of her dad.. he detested them coz they made her cry.. he loved her that much, but just that he got lost in his own work.. his repentance and feeling shame for making things worst for her was so emotional...

"He insisted, pulling her still closer. Her eyes welled when they met his. She was amazed to see only love. He didn't flinch. He didn't look away. He looked at her like he admired her. He nodded"

These lines were beautiful... so much of love and emotions and the assurance... i was like awww on reading this...

He did try to rectify his mistakes by helping her to come out of it and being there for her...

and the last lines... where in he confesses her about the whole thing... about how much she means to him and especially the part wherein he was scared of failing in taking care of her.. that was Beautiful...

I never thought i will actually love this maan too.. though his fault were not intentional, i was irritated at some point coz he actually didnt realize the fakeness in her.. but then again, you just made me love him by the way you had portrayed the character and the flow of the story...

Thanks muskan for this awesome SS... Am so looking forward for more of your fictions..