~GUROOR~maaneet SS pt11 last pt pg69/76 apr24

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

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Posted: 11 years ago

#511

superb update

finally maan realized his mistake and geet being geet she was back to him

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dancersqueen

@dancersqueen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#512

awesome... maan ne geet ke saath diya...waiting 4 the epilogue...

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mila1

@mila1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#513

WOW lovely but it was short! Maan didnt even consummate their marriage after 5yrs of marriage is he normal😕...he didnt even notice her weight loss or broken health😕...its good they had a fight & Geet left otherwise she would've died probably. I will forgive his a little for trying to make it up later but not fully.

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

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Posted: 11 years ago

#514

Di, pen down an epilogue plsss

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 11 years ago

#515

hi thanks 4 da an amazing fab SS! 👏Superb end! ⭐️All ends all! emotional fab update. Dev tells Maan everything! Maan shattered! He realises wt he did! Maan helps Geet n takes care of her! Maan takes her to rehab! Maaneet talk! Geet was nt pregnant! geet better! A year later she has a baby girl! beautifully written!

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perfectflirt8

@perfectflirt8

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Posted: 11 years ago

#516

Roller coaster cute love story ... Totally loved it ... You can do magic with story irrespective of parts .

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Papon Tabassum

@paponecon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#517

btfly ended...wish tht all same type real life stories get same happiness...lv will make all bd things best...

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#518

sorry for the late comment

first of all thanx for such a fast story...

both r in so much in love with each other... still the distance between them is hard to accept... geet has so much belief in him... gossips about maan didnt affect her a bit... maan didnt care about the knocks for the first time in the last 5 years... kaash pehle hi ignore kar detha😭

the kaash always lingers in our life... kaash hum aisa karthe , waisa karthe...every person have just to try to live in such way that this "kaash" comes least in our life in the future...

maan just immersed in business, even it was for geet, to such an extent that , he though saw the blankness in geet eyes, failed to ask her, failed to know whats bothering her... if he did all this for her, then y he didnt realised that she is not happy?

geet just chose the easiest way... kaash she had chosen a lil difficult way... and chose to fight for her love and ask and make maan know what is lacking in their lives!!!

i loved the part where maan thought about how he had prmised that he wont let her cry, like her dad who made her cry that nigt!! here maan left her craving for him and his love for the last 5 yers...

their last convo ... beauiful... geet was very well wrong to choose drugs but when maan said that how easy it was for him to loose was lovely... but maan had his business and work and the drive to show all that he is succefull now... but for geet, her whole life was limited to maan... his lack made her do that which she herself know is wrong...

beautiful story muski... it was like a roller coaster ride...

their marriage... his succeess... their distance... her addiction... he knowing her truth... her revival ... happy family👏

but abhi bhi bahut hain... they r still living with maans family..how is maans mom behaving with her now?? how they are coping after all this... ek epilogue pilsss

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Desire6

@Desire6

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Posted: 11 years ago

#519

Oh Di was jus goin through ur blog...

nd wat i c...u hav updatd a new story..aur mujhe pata hi nahi chala😭😭😭😭

koi gal nahi...jus read the whole part in one go...it was awesome...
Loved how a story startd wit his guroor...dat one decission nd den his dream to get all back to her...which pushed him to b a workholic and dat loneliness which pushed geet into drugs...nd her turnmoil to be wit him...
I was shocked wen i read dey makin love for 1st time...i was lk..6 years...was he mad...or insane ...
bt den again reading his circumstances...
nd dat hospital part was so touching n wrenching...
bt end 1st i was lk hw d hell he cn blame her for it...bt den again he was rt...ek tarike say...if he was busy..she could have stoped him...or he wouldnt hav gone dis extent to ...make der life a hell...

bt anth bala toh sab bhala...loved d end...
will we get a epilogue to dis one...

lovly ...i guess i ll have to frequently chk ur blog...kya pata kab naya ff post kar dogi,
nd i wont miss dis time...like dis...one...last part main pata chala ...story ke bare main😭

lovly Musqan Di...👏