Homonym | a MG short story | note page 47 & blog link - Page 9

Created

Last reply

Replies

266

Views

40.2k

Users

53

Likes

1.3k

Frequent Posters

_Maaneet_ thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#81
waiting for the next part...
Kalam. thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#82
"The party is downstairs."
She noticed his clenched jaw and the ominous look in his eyes. Taking an audible gulp, her hand remained on the doorknob behind her as she asked him how he knew Geet.

He remained nonchalant, explaining that he recognised her from an exhibition years ago. When Pari stated that she rarely attended exhibitions, he turned the questioning back to her and asked why she was so curious.

Pari claimed that she knew they were hiding something from her.

Maan shrugged his shoulders and gestured for her to return downstairs.

She had left the party straight away.

***

"It wasn't so bad, right?" Johan asked as they sped along the freeway. It was one of those beautiful summer nights where the skies were clear, the stars were shining and the temperature was the perfect setting of humid. Geet had been enchanted by the night as soon as they had left the gallery, commenting on how it reminded her of her childhood back home when she and Pari would sleep under the stars with their mother.

"It was fulfilling," she smiled, her hands clasped together on her lap. "The opinions and compliments of admirers really meant more to me than I could have imagined."

"Will you be making another appearance soon?"

She laughed lightly. "Don't push your luck, Johan."

Geet leaned back into her seat and recalled her encounter with Rosa. She had sensed an infinite wisdom in the woman, from the way her eyes turned wistful to how she paid attention to every minor detail.

Rosa had been the first person to ask whose initials they were. Everyone had assumed it was Geet's unique watermark, and she hadn't corrected them otherwise.

She saw glimpses of herself in the woman, and smiled to herself as she hoped she would be as wise and mysterious one day.

"What are you smiling about?" he asked as he pulled up outside their apartment.

"Nothing, just something I remembered." She glanced briefly at her apartment and the apartment adjacent to it, then looked away. "I'd better head inside. Thank you for a lovely evening."

Geet turned towards the door, but a soft hand on her shoulder made her turn back. The unexpected closeness of Johan and the familiar look in his hazel eyes unnerved her, and she knew where this was leading.

"Johan, I-"

"Please Geet, let me finish for once. Every time I try to express my feelings, you cut me off."

"You know the reason why, I just-"

He placed his palm over her lips, effectively silencing her. "I'm in love with you, and I know you don't feel the same. I'm not expecting anything from you. I just wanted an opportunity to let you know how I feel, in the hope that perhaps one day," he smiled wistfully. "Once in a blue moon maybe, you would return my feelings..."

Geet closed her eyes briefly, and then opened them and pushed his palm away gently. "I really am sorry. You shouldn't be wasting your time on me."

Johan leaned back into his seat, shifting away from her and running his hands through his hair. He sighed as he pulled out a cigarette from his pocket.

She sensed his need for privacy, and bid him a quiet goodnight as she gathered her purse and stepped out of his car. He drove away as soon as she had closed the door shut, and she felt her heart squeeze painfully as the aftermath of her rejection sunk in.

Geet began walking towards the spiral steps of her apartment when she stopped in her tracks, her eyes wide.

He was waiting for her, sat at the very last step.

***

A/N: The interior of Johan's car.



ainanwer thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#83
interesting update really like it feeling bad for Jhon
by the way I'm first one
Edited by ainanwer - 11 years ago
Gurlygirl thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#84
I'm in love with your ss...
Every part is full of mystery and suspense ...
really want to know how is maan and geet related ...
amazing story :)
update soon
-anjali (:
Craziest_MG thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#85
johan's confession ...not bad

Geet n Maan will talk ...will they ??
Doracake thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#86
The mystery continues,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

lovely update

Feeling sorry for poor johan
Flame_of_Forest thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#87
lovely update...felt bad for Johan...all the efforts from Pari went in vain, Maan neither revealed the truth nor let her dig it further.

seems Geet surely knows Maan or she is using the initials of someone whom Maan knows very well...hope the confrontation will shed some light on the mystery.
Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 11 years ago
honeygrape thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#88
phew amazing part...so ther s defintely some history for maaneet...but why did he turn lil rude to pari when she tried to enter that room...lovvving the story...and him waiting for her is making me too nervous😆😆 cant wait for more
Donnaa thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#89
awesome update...
maan n geet surely hiding something...
poor johan...he loved geet...n confessed even after knowing she will reject him...
is that maan waiting for her sittingat the very last step??!!
sanum23 thumbnail
Visit Streak 500 Thumbnail 13th Anniversary Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 11 years ago
#90
feel bad for john
maan geet knows each other

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Queen0fDarkness

2 years ago

Bound by Honour| Note page 50 Bound by Honour| Note page 50

Prologue “Where are you, Sameera?” I yelled unable to hold myself back. “I’m not coming, Maan”. “It is our wedding day. You know what my...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tellyme

2 years ago

MG FF - Indebted #2 Chapter 59. Pg 61 Aug 28 MG FF - Indebted #2 Chapter 59. Pg 61 Aug 28

Thanks to all my readers for the love that you have showered to this story and that I have been able to touch you all emotionally through this...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Vaidhumom

4 years ago

💗MG SS O RE PIYA #3 - Important note on page 19 dated 26th Jan 2025

WORK IN PROGRESS... . REQUEST YOU TO LIKE AND COMMENT ONCE I ANNOUNCE THIS THREAD IS READY I AM SO GLAD TO REACH TO THIS LEVEL. I CANT EXPRESS...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

3 years ago

MG#4 khudrat ka khel- completed/note- pg 36- 14 july25

Concept this is story of simple girl, she want to became a teacher, but her darji beeji fix her marriage in between of studies... . . Destiny...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tellyme

3 years ago

tellyme's MG World of Dreamzzzz - New Note Pg 83 Jun 29

Hi Buddies, Here is my all FF work compiled. Latest on Top My Forum - Anu's World of Fictions In Progress...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".