MG SS: COACH..! I LOVE YOU - PART 3 - UPDATED PG 12 - 25-APR-2014 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ooo I'm sooo excited!!!!
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just now re ur story hijack
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new concept ...
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Wow sounds interesting
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PART 1

MAAN SINGH KHURANA dropped himself on the bench in a locker room exhausted. He was hot and sweaty and been knocked on the ground for so many times in the practice game with the players to whom he was coaching. Sweat dripped down maan's face and arms running over his Greek goddess sculpture like body. Not an ounce of fat on him, everything is hard and the field workout he'd just endured has strained his muscles which were screaming for a long cold shower. Maan walked towards his locker and leaned against the wall beside his locker, the cool brick and ice-cold water in his hands is not helping at all to lower his temperature. He was exhausted and not in the damn mood for a party tonight but the party was thrown by the Indian Football Team Association Board (IFTAB) in the honour of himself, the great Maan singh Khurana, former Captain of Indian Football team, 35 year old; still the most eligible bachelor in the country. IFTAB has chosen him has a coach for Women's Football team, who is going to represent India in upcoming Women's Football world cup (WFWC). He knew people have so much expectation from him and it's his responsibility to keep up with the people's expectation. What he'd really like to do is take a cold shower, go home, cook himself full meals and relax on his king sized bed. When had he gotten so tired of it all? Hell, when had he gotten old? He stripped off his practice jersey and tossed it to the ground, pulled off his pads and breathed a sigh of relief, then grabbed a towel and wiped the sweat from his face. He removed his shorts, drained the water from his bottle, and went under a cold running shower. When cold water hit him, he hissed a breath and closed his eyes to feel the water soothing his stressed muscles. Maan made mental that, he will go to the party, will show his face to the Director of IFTAB; will have a brief introduction with all the new players he is going to guide and coach for next three months and leave the party ASAP. But storm is in its way to him and God has some other plans tonight. If not god, The Devil, Geet Handa defiantly has some plans for the coach tonight; and she is going to nail it.

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At The Party

A bartender placed a cocktail on the table "your martini with green olive" Geet flashed her usual knock-off smile to him taking the glass in her hand "Thanks Hotty.." geet replied making him to smile broadly "you're most welcome sexy..." bartender said leaning more close to her staring at the cleavage "So beautiful.. What are you doing tonight after the party? I have a very cosy place--"he couldn't finish his sentence when a tight slap fell on his cheek. Geet "this is for calling me sexy" and another slap "and this is for beautiful.." another slap "and this is for your cheep pick up lines.." another slap followed "this is for trying to flirt with me" Geet grabbed his collar "Geet Handa have some class and only she decides who will flirt with her not the other way...do you understand...? Never have I meant never dare to cross my path... Mind it " saying this geet released his collar and turned to look at the people who were watching them.

Geet "WHAT..?" geet was so irritated coz of this boring party..no loud music ..no dance.. And top of all this... no familiar face except her state coach and representative of Punjab Sports Association, Mr. Jasmeet Singh. "Yaha kya draupadi ka vastra haran horaha hian... aise kya dekhraheyho...tum sab? "Geet asked them rudely which caught little more peopel's attention. Some men's lustful eyes were feasting on her red knee length dress which has covered her figure like a second skin to which geet was not so comfortable of. Again only she decides who will look at her.


Geet left from there irritated to the core and went out to balcony to get some fresh air taking her drink in hand. A slow music is played in background where people in the party were enjoying but geet was so anxious to meet his new coach. She has an attitude problem and very short tempered and hot headed girl. Due to this behavior of her she doesn't have many friends. Her family is to blame the way she is like this today. She hails from a very rich Punjabi family, her both parents own a very successful multi million business in London but now they are just a business partners rather than a happy family.

When Geet was 16 years old, her parents got separated and she was sent back India to her Daarji and Beeji's (Geet dad's parents) place in Punjab. She has witnessed her parents constant fighting and that has left bitterness in her memory. Both her parents love her, not has a whole family but divorced-single-parents. Somewhere she thought, she is the reason for her parent's separation. She always took out all her frustration on physical workout and games. That's how she started to play football when her daarji insisted. She loves playing the game in hard way; she thinks that to hurt and get hurt is sweetest thing. After all she is simply didn't get the name "TIGRESS" the most notorious & aggressive player on ground and no one wants to be in bad side of Geet Handa i mean no one.

Sameera Balan, The Captain of Andra Pradesh Football team saw geet alone standing in the balcony sipping at her drinks and walked towards the balcony. Geet looked back when she heard the footsteps giving a blank look to sameera who stood there smiling. Sameera extended her hand towards geet and said in her Andra accent "Yello..! Hi..My name is sameera balan, from Andra! What about you? Which state you play for?" Geet totally ignore her question and her hand, just kept sipping at her drinks looking at the glowing city. Night life in city like Delhi can't be explained in words but to experience it but not to forget about how dangerous it is. Sameera "Naku hindi baaga vaccha ledandi..." Geet stared at her like she heard her talk in alien language, sameera realized her mistake and said again "I mean to say, I don't know hindi much except telugu and little bit English" ..Geet was so pissed off due to the boredom and said "Buzz off!" sameera felt hurt but ignored it and said "I think you are mood is not good.. nunu mijotla aaminda matladtanu..(I will talk with you later)" saying this sameera left geet alone and walked back to the party.


And then Geet heard loud applause, hooting followed by congrats and praises of someone from the party hall and walked inside to know who that person is. Geet tried to look at the person whose back is to geet's view talking with someone. People, mostly females from 10 to 60s surrounded him like ants to the candy blocking her view which irritated more. Geet pushed people aside forcefully making her way to the center of attraction with confidence. Maan felt so uncomfortable with so many people surrounding him. He patiently answered to everyone's question and politely refused the drinks offered to him. He excused himself from the bunch of people and turned to leave but he heard Director of IFTAB call his name and walked towards them. Director introduced Maan to the players one by one along with their respective coach's. When a middle aged Mr.Jasmeet singh introduced himself, maan remembered this old man from his school days who encouraged him to play football and guided him to choose the right path. Maan bent down to touch his feet but Mr.Singh stopped him in mid and hugged him. Mr.singh patted his back and said "I am proud of you my boy.." Maan "How are you sir.? where is your representing player? " maan asked looking at Mr.singh's behind and beside.. "I am absolutely fine..son.." Mr.singh surveyed the crowd and saw geet coming towards them " There she is, Our Sherni of Punjab...Ek dum kadak player hain.." Maan saw the beautiful girl coming towards them with an attitude NO-ONE-COMES-IN-MY-WAY.

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..To Be Continued..


P.S : Let me know how you all finding this story. As it is Os, I can't go in detail at some parts of the story, so please don't search for logic in it. Don't forget to press like button and comment.



Edited by GurtiWonderland - 11 years ago
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Awesome update..loved Geet's Attitued
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice part
geet n her attitude...uff
maaneet face2face...
waiting for nxt 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow this geet is a tigress
if she is fire he is ice
this is gonna be good
ahhh now we know why she is like this
shame though
but maybe things can change
for them both
they need it i guess
hmmm look forward of more of this
gosh this is gonna rock for sure
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nice start...
geet n her attitude ufff...
truly sherni hai ye geet...
loved it...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome concept :-)
Geet ka attitude .. u ff.. ;-)
How ll maan handle this geet n vice versa..
interesting... curious to know their reaction seeing each other
N how ll their luv story starts ;-p
Waiting for more :-)

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