I was thinking i wont comment because u didnt read my previous ones😔 but i am forgetting that after reading this update
This was so beautiful "
He found her pacing just at the entrance of the outhouse and his heart missed a beat. She hadn't changed clothes still clad in the ones he had seen her in earlier. As her gaze locked with his and he saw her face blooming like a flower. She grinned, tears of joy reflecting beautifully in her eyes. Before his mind-paralyzed of her beauty-could gather some sense she threw herself in his arms. Air flew out of him, suitcase dropping from his hands and then there was peace. She held him tightly... and he did the same."
Then the passion Maaneet shared together it looked so natural n sensuous. Though i went into a coma reading it🤣 haaye how he showered her with his love. They shared their first kiss. The fear of losing her made him lose control. Then again the never ending fight within
"Maan lay on the bed lost in their kiss. He replayed the sequence again n again in his mind. She was hot wax under his fingers. He could mould her the way he wanted but in return she would burn him. That was fair exchange. Only it wasn't fair at all, to her. How he could slip like that? He had been away for long and then seeing her with someone else served as the ultimate hit on his control. He realized what he was losing. Maan had never seen a future with her, not once considered it. He was her culprit and deserved punishment not her. But now- he felt selfish just by imagining them together. Such a sick person he was. She was already in too deep. He should not pull her closer instead of shoving her away.
He didn't have the strength anymore. Just a few days more, he told himself. So what if she was dancing with someone, so what if she liked him. She had all right to find the right partner and go far-far away where not even his shadow would be able to touch her."
He should alleast try to end this endless pain n agony by telling her the truth. She deserves to know the truth n decide by herself whether to forgive or punish him.
They watched Godzilla together! I mean geet watched godzilla n Maan watched Geet. He proposed for going out on a movie date. MSK was fuming seeing her with Armaan...lets see how long Armaan remains lucky n doesnt get beaten up. Geet didnt ask him for food nor did she prepare his breakfast not even informed him about leaving for college...it hurt him a lot n me also. Why is she behaving this way? is she giving him space? or distancing herself from him specially they way he wanted. Maan he wants her to be happy without him but cant endure it when she doesnt give him the attention he craves for. Loved it how she ruffled his hair...i have noticed how he is thinking of her as his WIFE "what is the need to plead someone that too for going with her HUSBAND".
Loved the update. First Maaneet filled long update.
Edited by mila1 - 11 years ago
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