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WAITING FOR GEET'S SURPRISE FOR MAAN
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part 43
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oh ho another auction?
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Mission Impossible : The Don N The Diva

Part 44


As soon as Maan went away everyone turned towards Geet and she started to do the presentation and it was an impressive one too, everyone applauded as Geet finished her presentation, "wow, it was amazing, no wonder Mr.Khurana had given this responsibility in your hands," The Manager praised her, "Thank you sir," Geet said, "ok Then, I am completely satisfied with the plan, I think you can start up the project," The manager said,

"Thank you so much Sir, I am glad that you liked it" Geet said, then everyone started moving out and so as Geet, as Geet came out she called Maan, the ring was going on but Maan didn't attend the call, and Geet tried again and this time too no response, "where is He, what is he doing, who called him" Geet thought worried and then her mobile vibrated in her hand, and Geet looked at it, it was an messaged from Maan,

"Geet, go to the cottage, I will come back by noon" The Messaged read, "Noon? Then the party" Geet messaged back confused, "it's postponed to tomorrow's evening, so go to the cottage and take rest" The messaged came back from Maan, Geet wanted to ask where he is but before she could type the message, another message came from Maan, "Geet, now I think you will have lots of time to arrange for my Surprise,"

Geet immediately blushed reading the message and she started typing up and before she could type, one more message popped up. "Geet, I am going to meet an important person, so I am going to switch of my mobile, ok, will message you once the meeting is over, bye, be safe" Maan's message read and Geet was just staring at the cell, "Who is that important person that Maan had gone to see at this time, leaving the meeting like this and why he had to switch off his mobile to talk with someone,"

"Is he that important, who is that, or is Maan hiding something from me," Geet thought confused, "may be the drug auction timing had been changed and so," Geet thought and called Breej immediately, "Yes, Geet" Breej took the call in one ring, "sir, is the auction timing changed," Geet asked slowly, "What, why" Breej asked puzzled as he didn't get any information, "no sir, just asked, can you check it please," Geet asked and Breej said an ok, "will call you in a minutes," Breej said and cut the call and Geet wait for hi call, and in few minutes Breej called her back,

"Sir," Geet took the call in the first ring, "Geet, I had confirmed that the auction is at 10.30 pm today here in Delhi, and the drug worth is above 3 million, so MSK will be up for sure, so watch him clearly," Breej said, "Sir, I don't think MSK will attend that," Geet said with a smile, "why," Breej asked, "because he is having some other work," Geet said with a grin, "no way," Breej said, "No Sir, from now onwards, MSK will not participate in any auctions of underworld,"

"Geet, don't be stupid, why would he do that, he will never change or back away," Breej said confidently, "ok sir, today MSK will not come to Delhi or attended the auction and if it happens, will you believe me and help me," Geet asked and Breej's laughter echoed in her ear through her mobile, "you are that confident ah, ok, if MSK doesn't attended the auction today, I will do as you say, ok," Breej said,

"Deal sir," Geet said with a smile as it's her first step to get Maan out of the dark world, "deal Geet," Breej too replied, "will call you tomorrow," Breej said and cut the call, "Geet, so Maan haven't go to auction now, maybe he had gone to meet some other else, may be an important client or something," Geet thought and went out to the cottage,

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It was 1.00 and Geet was feeling the killer hunger eating up her stomach as she didn't eat in the morning too, "Maan, where are you," Geet thought as she tried Maan's number once again, but it was still switched off, "what is this, still what is he doing," Geet thought and went and stood near the window throwing her mobile on the bed, "Maan," Geet called looking at the sky and her mobile rang up,

Geet jumped up and went and took the call, and it was Maan, "Maan sir," Geet jumped up as she took the call, "where are you, how long should I wait," Geet spoke out, "Geet," Maan's voice was so low and it hurt Geet's heart suddenly, "what happened sir," Geet asked feeling worried, "nothing," Maan said in a low tone, "Geet, you have your lunch, I will be back in the evening," Maan said, "Sir," Before Geet could continue, Maan cut the call,

Geet was turning upset and worried and suddenly an message popped up in her mobile, "Geet, I love you, I am ready to do anything for you, all you have to do is just ask, ask me," Maan's message made Geet nervous to the core, what is the meaning of this, Geet thought feeling scared, her tears raised up, another messaged too popped up again, "Geet, ask," Maan's message was short but too strong for Geet,

"I don't need anything in this world than you, I will lay down my life for you, I just want you in my life, I would do anything for that, because I Love you" Geet typed her words and she send it and waited for his reply, Geet was holding her mobile for his reply which didn't show up even after 30 minutes, Geet then kept the mobile on the bed and went and stood near the window, "what happened to Maan, where is he, and why the message," Geet feel confused,

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Maan was sitting in the green environment on Hanging garden's bench, he was holding his mobile, with Geet's message in one hand and he held the letter, that changed everything in his other hand, "Geet," Maan closed his eyes as his tears rolled down his eyes, "why, why it's always me, you wanted to target my lord, why," Maan's mind cried up, "Little happiness, a little light is not too much to ask for, right" Maan looked at the skies up,

Maan read Geet's message again, and then he looked at the letter, he then kept, both the things on the bench and stood up and walked up, "now what will I do, only if I had this letter two days before, I would have avoided her as such, but now, how will I avoided her, now she loves mw with her life and she knew that I too love her, then if I change my behavior that will kill her inside out, already she is thinking that her warrior is dead and left her alone and now she had accepted me with all her heart and now" Maan thought,

"I am lost, I am lost, please god, if not for me, atleast for my Geet, please, what should I do," Maan asked looking that the sunny sky finally giving up, "Uncle," Maan's thought disturbed by an sweet voice, and Maan looked down at see an small girl in a pretty white gown must be 6 or 7 years old, "Uncle" she smiled at him and Maan kneed down to her level and she asked for Maan's hand and Maan too gave his right hand, the little girl, held his big hand in her small hand and kept his mobile on Maan's hand and Maan looked at it and then at her,

"You had kept it in the bench there na, I saw it. But uncle you are so grown up but still don't know anything, my mama says if we kept like this and move away na, someone might steal it away, didn't your Mama say this to you," The little girl asked innocently and Maan smiled with a nodded, eyes still holding the tears, "Thank you," Maan said holding her cheeks, and she smiled and turned away and run a few stepped and stopped,

"Uncle," she screamed and Maan looked at her, "don't lose it again, it your second chance" she smiled and went away and Maan looked at her shocked, it was like some kind of message and Maan looked at his mobile, the screen still showing Geet's message, "yes dear, it's my second chance and I will not lose her again," Maan thought and smiled up, his heart found an small hope and light,

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Geet was so tensed and she didn't eat anything even though the hungry killed her, she was having lots of questions inside her, did Maan found out about her, if he had what will she say to him, then should she confront him, it was 5.00 already and Geet didn't get out of the room, and her mobile beeped up and Geet rushed and took the mobile up and it was Maan's message, Geet felt scared to open the message but she did somehow, and as soon as she saw the message her tears flowed down and she smiled big,

"Geet, I will be there at 7.00, hope you got my surprise ready, I am looking forward for it," Maan's message read and Geet suddenly forgot all her worries and blushed up, and held the phone in her hand and wiped her over flowing tears, "Baba ji, looks like everything is fine, me na, what all I keep thinking, god I am really stupid," Geet smiled thinking silly for scaring like that, after two minutes her mobile rang up and it was Maan,

"Hello," Geet took the call, "god, Geet you are ok right," Maan asked and his voice was rough and bossy as always, "yes," Geet said slowly, "Geet for heaven's sake, if I message you, reply me something, so I can make sure you got the message," Maan yelled up, "sorry," Geet said, "ok, never mind, I will come at 7.00 and so keep my surprise ready, I hope I won't be disappointed, or else you would have an big punishment," Maan said in a warning tone, "sure, you won't be" Geet promised, and cut the call,

Geet jumped up with a big smile, "Baba ji, I didn't do anything for the surprise, go Geet go, make everything ready, you only have 2 hours," Geet thought and rushed down, "Rakesh ji," she called up as she came down, and Rakesh to came up, "ji can you do me a favor," Geet asked and he happily said an ok and Geet started her planning

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It was sharp 7.00 when Maan came to the cottage, the cottage looked so silent, Maan stood in the middle of the hall and looked around, "where did everyone go," Maan thought and Maan felt some movement upstairs and looked up and frozen up suddenly, "Geet" Maan thought as his eyes looking puzzled at Geet standing behind the curtain, Geet's heart started to beat fast yet she slowly stepped out of the curtain, making Maan's eyes open up widen in surprise,



Geet was standing in a saree, and she was so gorgeous looking and sexy too, it's as if her beauty was been hiding inside her still now and suddenly is busted out in this attire, she slowly looked at Maan's eyes, which was filled with her beauty and his light and desired look made Geet turn away shying up, her heart started to beat fast, Maan's mind filled up with an desire and he started walking towards upstairs and Geet was burning up even as she thought of his closeness,




Geet was standing there making herself strong for the things gonna happen, she was so excited and nervous that she felt she would fall off anytime nor faint up, suddenly she felt Maan's rough hand touching her bare waist, making her eyes widen up, he heart started beating in double making her faint and she turned around, to see Maan closeness to her, his eyes turned dark and his look deepen, his hand on her waist was burning up and Geet looked down unable to see his eyes,




Maan pressed his hold on her waist and Geet pulled away from him and ran up and Maan followed her up, Maan reached the terrace as he followed her upstairs, and stood stunned looking the place, it was dark yet filled with candle lights and the red curtains where flowing around making the place look like an heaven, Maan was totally speechless, and he looked for Geet around, Geet saw Maan searching for her and she blushed and smiled and she was enjoying seeing his face shocked and surprised,




Geet run around and Maan heard her anklets music and turned around, "Your surprise," Geet voice came up and Maan looked around trying to find where is she, "is nothing but me, myself, I am your surprise," Geet voice sound so lustful, making Maan go mad, and he looked around unable to control himself, "Maan," Geet's voice Made him turn around and his heart skipped a beat as he saw the flawless beauty standing there, shining like a temple statue in the candle light,

Maan was looking at her mesmerized by her shinning golden gaze and Geet too was smiling and looked straight into his black diamond's shining at her, they stood there like frozen up in time,

Maine Khud Ko De Diya Hai Tujhko
Main Tera Hoon Tera
Kaate Na Kate
Leta Hai Yeh Karvate
Din Mera Din Mera




Aa Tujh Mein Bitaaun Ratiyaan
Dil Dil Ko Sunaaye Batiyaan
Aa Tujh Mein Bitaaun Ratiyaan
Ho Tu Mujh Mein Kahin Pe Bas Jaa

Maan and Geet slowly came close to each other and stood opposite to each other and Geet was blushing up like hell, and she was breathing high up, Geet closed her eyes as she wasn't able to take Maan's stare, Geet suddenly felt Maan's rough hands on her cheek and the small touch created the heat of an sun, and Maan caressed her cheeks slowly, and Geet caught his hands and looked at him, His eyes shining with desire and love creating an lustful look,

Maan's longing look made Geet feel the shiver all around her body, Geet then bought his hand towards her lips and pressed her lips on his large fingers, Maan was burning up in his desire for her, his each cell screaming up for her, her love, her everything, but he didn't wanted to hurry, it's her day so he let it in her control and stood there breathing hard, his heart beat was up in a race,

Tune Chuaa
To Main Dhadakne Laga
Dil Ki Duaa
Hothon Pe Rakhne

Tune Chuaa
To Main Dhadakne Laga
Dil Ki Duaa
Hothon Pe Rakhne



Aa Tujh Mein Bitaaun Ratiyaan
Dil Dil Ko Sunaaye Batiyaan
Aa Tujhmein Bitaaun Ratiyaan
Ho Tu Mujhmein Kahin Pe Bas Jaa

Geet looked at Maan looking at her deep and she smiled and try to move away, blushing up, but stopped as Maan held her shoulder, Geet's heart stopped for a second, but she retrieved herself and turned and looked at Maan, who was breathing heavy, his hot breathe can be felt even in a distance and his body had stiffen and his face turned hard and his eyes darker,

Geet was too feeling an desire inside her for Maan, she don't know how bold she would go but she decided to go with her heart and looked at Maan, and she slowly touched his cheeks, the trimmed hair in his cheeks pricked her soft hand, she slowly caressed her hand on his cheeks and Maan fisted his hands trying to control his wild passion screaming inside him, even the volcanic lava would feel less hot comparing to his boiling blood now,

Meri Raahe
Kadmon Pe Tere Ruke

Yeh Panaahe
Sajde Mein Tere Jhuke

Yeh Meri Raahe
Kadmon Pe Tere Ruke

Yeh Panaahe
Sajde Mein Tere Jhuke Aa




Maine Khud Ko De Diya Hai Tujhko
Main Tera Hoon Tera
Kaate Na Kate
Leta Hai Ye Karvate
Din Mera Din Mera

Aa Tujh Mein Bitaaun Ratiyaan
Dil Dil Ko Sunaaye Batiyaan
Aa Tujh Mein Bitaaun Ratiyaan
Ho Tu Mujh Mein Kahin Pe Bas Jaa

Maan closed his eyes and leaned on onto her hand, feeling her soft hands, Geet saw his surrender self and smiled up, she felt the control she was having now on Maan, she took her hand away and Maan looked at her and pulled her close by her waist, as he can't control himself anymore, Geet trembled by his sudden move and she slowly pulled his hands from her and rushed away towards her room and Maan too followed her,



Geet went to her room and stopped for a second and looked at Maan, who was just a few feet away from her and looked with her longing eyes, signing him to follow her in making him go mad and she went inside and Maan too followed her inside the room, and closed the door behind him,

Precap: Geet surprise of Maan back fired as an surprise to herself, (on Monday)

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Note :

"Ishq Shava: Love Is Cure" MG SS part 5 had been updated... hope you will like it too...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3963296/ishq-shava-love-is-cure-mg-ss-pt-22-pg-104-updated?pn=20


Thank you... Love you all...

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superbπŸ‘ update

maan got some letter again ... n he is upset... thinking about ignore geet n all... why????πŸ˜•

maan surprised with geet surprise...

scary precapπŸ˜•...

interesting ... waiting to know more πŸ˜ƒ
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What is the letter that he got again? I wonder what Maan hinging from Geet. Nice surprise
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awesome update...
what is the letter that Maan get?
interesting percap...
waiting...
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my fav.song,lovd update..ah whats the letter maan had? Awsme update

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