One Shot - A Story Of Her - Page 2

"A story" she replied, training her eyes back on the paper.

these two set of lines... i am thrown into different world.. where only he and she existed..

i loved it.. love this perception... Cant blame him when he is thinking she is leading men!!!

but yet again how easy it is to blame her for her nature..

Aloof, detached, guarded, the girl seemed more familiar to him than he would have expected.

"Wasn't her this attitude" her this aloofness had attracted both the men in the first place?" she asked turning her face slightly towards him, making her profile visible to him.

"Strange isn't it something she was loved for in the beginning had now the reason for curses to be hurled at her"

It makes one realize about their own self. The one which we dearly loved... is the cause of disappointment ...

@bold Ahaana YOU nailed it!!!

But then its Human tendency to blame other person ... Judgement- we judge people so easily as if its our birth right to judge them and categorize them...

Yes its wrong a thing when he bared his heart.. she unknowingly crumpled it..

she have her own set of reasons.. and he have his own to think anything about her.. cause she caused him the hurt..

"Hurt is a bruise on the outside. Harm is a bruise on the inside."

i loved the contrast between want and need...

"What does she want?" he asked after a beat, for which she lowered her eyes.

"I don't know" she admitted truthfully "Neither does she"

He observed her still form, and lowered eyes that was fixed on their entwined hands and with a flash realized, he had asked the wrong question.

"What does she need?"

"Instability, confusion, overwhelming of emotions. Something that never happened to her guarded life, something that would bring her out of her shell. Something only the man in her life can do. Bringing her to her knees"

ishhh im going to copy paste each and every line of this beautiful piece of art!! 😛😆

Is it easy to unleash the storm inside her?? Will he try once again? will she allow him to come near her Again?

He had already made space in her heart... but is he going to come out of his illusional world ... where he masked with his I-dont-care attitude.. the world which have loads and loads of pain and hurt but still pretending as if nothing mattered...

he is pretty good actor.. 😊

will his indifference going to help him or her? both are at loss... none can gain from indifference ..except uncertainty

"There are two possibilities. People change or maybe they do not change, they are just clearer who they really are."

🤗 Thanks for such a beautiful piece of writing gal...