THE LOCKET (20) MG FF, link to new thread pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 61

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 da pm n intense update! Thank God Geet is safe! She tells Maan everything! HE tells her to wait der! Maan goes n Geet hugs him n den realises other r with him! Maan contacted the police! Maan rescues dem! Sends Dev with NT to da hospital n he n Kabir r in the trunk! Oh no trunk is rusty! Hope nothinh happened to dem! hate Brij! Poor Chandan! Poonam helpless! Bt Brij's words stun them n nw Chandan stops him! Brave Geet! She devises a plan to stop Brij! update soon! Well written :)

Originally posted by: Zeal-DD

What kind of man Brij is... Beast... He still has grudge why chandan didn't listen to him and married to Poonam instead... I just loved maan's concern for ladies... And the way Geet stood by him I mean stood for him types Commendable... And that stupid truck grrr but on a positive note beacuse of it may be a new friendship start maan and kabir...

Glad that megha and Tara are saved but now maan and kabir are stuck and Poonam and chandan are in danger... This Brij deserves a cruel painful merciless death my monster he is...

Nice part full on Filmy spiceup climax with each and every character is playing their roles ❤️

Thankyou for the PM

Originally posted by: chavvi16

wow so its time for him to go down
brij you dont know who you messed with
all the wrong peeps for sure
trust me this is gonna be bad for you
they arent gonna spare you now
his destruction is coming his way
so geet made sure he cant make his escape
maan and kabir locked in damn
or could have helped the thakurs
they came running didnt they when they heard of their daughters
so dev has taken his i star away
but megha and geet are still there
though the villagers are coming for rescue too
this is what i was waiting for
he is doomed for sure
so he told all to chandan and poonam
hope things get better for them man
cheers for pm

Originally posted by: supernasahu

Nyc update... 👏 👍🏼

End of brij...Geet being maan's strength...

Truth revealed now poonam chandan's MU should be cleared...

'Somedays you may not walk together, one may simply follow the other.

I am not walking beside you Maan, but I will remove every obstacle from your path, she pledged.'lovely lines...❤️

thanx 4 d pm...

Originally posted by: aqvum

Sorry di due to exams tension i have forget to comment n only had liked the chapter... Due to which i didnt get pm of the latest chapter.. I know its my mistake..:P so without any delay here goes my comment.. Now coming to the update it was a mixture of romance and action.. By seeing maan getting his mishty morning my dil go garden garden..:D chandan over his future with poonam... Megha being her naughty self n getting her parents in embarassing moment... Brij the devil kidnapped megha n i-star thank god geet saw them i hope thata nobody get hurt in this..(obviously except brij)... Now plz give me password for next chapter will be waiting for it anxiously...:)

Originally posted by: annbell

WaHh .. kya update tha .. 😃😃 ..

i really liked dis ziddi geet .. geet tho badi hoshiyari nikkali .. hw fast she figured out brij's escape .. chandan would definitely not leave brij for da games he played with chandan n his family ..

even after da protests from maan its lucky dat kabir went along with maan .. otherwise he would've stuck in dat jeep ..

superb update .. 😃😃 ..

Originally posted by: BDayGal-11Jan

Aweesommmeee Update Aviii 🤗
Nice song by Kailash kher..
Giitt kisi ki nhi sunti, Maan ki tou bilkul bhi nhi 😆
Maan-Kabir as a Team 😃
Poor Poonam n Chandan.. I just hate Brij more n more 😡 😡
Waitinggg for some Zabardast wali Brij ki dhulai 😃 😆

Originally posted by: mannu_minnie

Avi Kudos girl.🤗 u have done an awesome job as a writer. being a reader from very first part i know how much hard work u have done for us. i completely adore this story. one of my fav. it is just not Maan-Geet. u made me fall for every good char of this FF. Be it DevTara story or Poonam-Chandan Story or megha-kabir story and Sameera's story i loved all side stories. the way u presented the story was just awesome. i still remember when u posted it as an OS, and i was like Geet with someone else- Big No. then someone clarified that dev is just happy for Tara accepting Him. Then u started writing it as an FF. I loved this story.😃

Now coming to the update- Our heroes and heroines are at work- Brij ki kya majaal hai ab. I m waiting for villagers to reach and do dhulaai of brij but i know usse pahle Chandan apni or poonam ki life hell banane ke liye badla lega.

Go Chandan GO.😈

I know this story is going to finish soon. i ll be waiting for ur next venture.😃

Originally posted by: aditi_2010

That was Evil di!!! How could you stop here???????

I am glad that both Tara and Megha are safe. And so many bitter truth unfolded...I guess it might clear way for Chandan and Poonam a bit. Maan and kabir locked and working together was beautifully described. Loved how geet conquered her fear of Height for being with Maan in time of need. loved how she removed the hurdles for him, that was nothing less than staying beside.

Love that villagers are coming...Give as much bashing to BRIJ😡😡 as possible... a long one of Brij bashing and also make Maithili and Poonam beat him...these two were the most affected...and Di please a quick update...

Originally posted by: singh24