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maansi25

@maansi25

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#581

Whatever we do or learn in life comes as a saver for us

car mechanic kabir will be successful to open the lock to save themselves.

Hats off to you for writing such a lovely and long story in a totally

different manner. It was as we are reading three or four different

stories at the same time though connected with each other.

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#582

part 85 - loved geet "maan time" every morning...maan never stops teasing her
feeling bad for chandan ...still he is waiting for one chance from poonam...hope he will get what he deserved...megha is little naughty kid in their family who can bring them back close sooner...
oh...again brij played his dirty plan...omg...geet went behind him following him...hope soon help come to rescue all

beautiful song

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#583

part 86 - lovely update...so maan came to help geet and now she is sage...he contacted with others & police for their rescue party...glad that they took away tara & megha, both are safe...
again his evil plan revealed in front of chandan & poonam...hope now poonam can remove all mist in her mind had for chandan...
ye kya ho raha hai ...both maan & kabir stucked in jeep...hope they can save them before something wrong happenes to them...
oh...bravo geet...good thought...you can be always with him so make his path clear

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#584

Part-85

superb update

m loving this geet more, who is no more feel shy to show what she feels for him

megha, what a smart move & i think she can make poonam & chandan come closer to each-other

ye brij ko chain nhi milega jab tk maan se pit na le😡😡

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#585

Part-86

wow!!!!!!

what an update

they already make tara & megha safe without letting brij know about it

& like a true partner geet was accompanying maan so that she make sure he is safe

brij is thinking he will be able to make fool everyone but it is enough of his deed now

he is going to get a huge surprise in next update i guess

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sohni_kudi_111

@sohni_kudi_111

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#586

wow... geet is really brave! this whole update was totally action filled! i just loved it... everyone is working together to nab brij n finally destroy his ill intentions!

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kavya.sravya

@kavya.sravya

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#587

thrilling update !! megha and tara are released from brij's captivity !! very quick planning and quick action from our maaneet and kabir !! geet may be innocent and jhalli in mohabbat ki baatei ...but , she planned and executed well...even took care of brij's escape plans...complete sherni form !! waiting...waiting...