THE LOCKET (20) MG FF, link to new thread pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 63

Originally posted by: varu

Just awesome dear

akhir two girls ko rescue karke charo phassgai

jo hotha hai achche ke liye hotha hai agar ye sab nahi hotha to poonam ko sach ka kabhi nahi patha chaltha haina jo bhi ho jaldi maan aur kabhir brij ke band bajaye khoob dhulayee hojaye

cont wait for next update jaldi dedo

Originally posted by: spvd

part 86
awesome dear...
excellent...
Geet thank God she called Maan...
and Maan has the forces now...
all are together...
but that creep found out but didnt get to see anyone of them till now...
oh no Maan and Kabir are stuck in that trunk...
and now only Megha and Maithili and Geet are out...
Tara is safe with Dev but Megha and and her parents are in that devil's trap still...
my God Geet baby tho bohut smart nikli...
what a presence of mind...
Maan will be so amazed to know this...
excellent dear...
hope Maan and kabir come out soon...
cont soon dear...

Originally posted by: sohni_kudi_111

the previous update was very emotional, loved megha's bonding but wat touched me the most was geet craving for her mother n maan supporting her! i really hope i will find a better half like him someday!

Originally posted by: Craziest_MG

when are u planning to kill this brij

Ahaan ...sherni Geet in full form

Mujhe tension ho rahi hai ...lol

Originally posted by: maansi25

Whatever we do or learn in life comes as a saver for us

car mechanic kabir will be successful to open the lock to save themselves.

Hats off to you for writing such a lovely and long story in a totally

different manner. It was as we are reading three or four different

stories at the same time though connected with each other.

👏

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

part 85 - loved geet "maan time" every morning...maan never stops teasing her
feeling bad for chandan ...still he is waiting for one chance from poonam...hope he will get what he deserved...megha is little naughty kid in their family who can bring them back close sooner...
oh...again brij played his dirty plan...omg...geet went behind him following him...hope soon help come to rescue all

beautiful song

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

part 86 - lovely update...so maan came to help geet and now she is safe...he contacted with others & police for their rescue party...glad that they took away tara & megha, both are safe...
again his evil plan revealed in front of chandan & poonam...hope now poonam can remove all mist in her mind had for chandan...
ye kya ho raha hai ...both maan & kabir stuck in jeep...hope they can save them before something wrong happens to them...
oh...bravo geet...good thought...you can be always with him so make his path clear

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

Part-85

superb update

m loving this geet more, who is no more feel shy to show what she feels for him

megha, what a smart move & i think she can make poonam & chandan come closer to each-other

ye brij ko chain nhi milega jab tk maan se pit na le😡😡

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

thrilling update !! megha and tara are released from brij's captivity !! very quick planning and quick action from our maaneet and kabir !! geet may be innocent and jhalli in mohabbat ki baatei ...but , she planned and executed well...even took care of brij's escape plans...complete sherni form !! waiting...waiting...

Originally posted by: abinaya.m

Dear Avi,

this update was so intense .it showed how close knit all of them have become and that each one was risking their own lives for the other. and as u said good always wins over evil and i know brij will be soon out very gripping indeed. waiting for the next keep me posted

tc

Abinaya