Secretly Smitten#14 (Thread 15 Link @ Pg 148) - Page 32

Created

Last reply

Replies

983

Views

58.6k

Users

53

Likes

1.9k

Frequent Posters

prachidalmia thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update
so finally maans mind started to work in the right direction
looking forward for the next update
please update soon
LILY111144 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
osm stry mona
ab rs ki khair nehi
geet theek ho gayee
geet blushing scene s super,,,,⭐️
LILY111144 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
hi mona sona dona babie laks priyand mauaa
missing u all...kaise ho,,??
spvd thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
part 127
awesome...
Geet is fine now...
and everything is gonna be fine now...
cont soon dear...
MonaSWrites thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: GeetMeet

9)

As the candlelight flame,
Ur life may always be happiness' claim;
As the mountain high,
U move without sigh;
like the white linen flair,
Purity is always an affair;
As sunshine creates morning glory,
fragrance fills years as flory;
with the immaculate eternal smile,
attached to u mile after mile;
All darkness is far away,
As light is on its way;
Wish all of u a very happy Ugadi.


Same to you friend 😳
MonaSWrites thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago
imageedit_3_2378152724_zps97962603
Hii lakshu babbie lily priya dona sona mauaa

Koi chuta toh nahi na 😛
MonaSWrites thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago

I am really so much overwhelmed with all precious comments you all are giving me .. Thank you so much 😊




(This FF i update daily so please don't wait for Pm.. please do check thread yourself, it's my kind request to all )



Part 128


Maan came out when he saw Geet, was trying to come out from her room, upstairs.

"Geet! What are you doing?" He shouted and rushed to her. Hearing his loud voice everyone looked at the same direction.

"What you going to do Geet? Where are you going?" Maan scolded. Geet made face and said she was getting bored inside the room. She also wants to have chat with others. "Plesae Maan I really, really got bored here"

"But you should've told me Geet, what was the need of you to come yourself" Saying he lifted her in arms, but caring of her wound not to hurt her. With this instant activity Geet startled. She blushed when found several pairs of eyes targeting on them and that embarrassed her deeply. "Maan please keep me down, see, everyone is looking us" She whispered turning red.

"It's your fault Geet, now enjoy your punishment" He smirked slowly descending on stairway.

"Maan please" Her eyes had no courage to look at all. She had her face down and had wrapped arms around his neck. She wanted to get rid of this situation and her embarrassment increased when heard slight giggles of Alka and SD. She hid face in Maan chest.

"Come Maan Beta, put her down here, on couch" SD said. Maan carefully made her lay on couch and covered her with a sheer duvet. "Are you comfortable now Beta" Alka asked. Geet was getting overwhelmed with this care. She nodded.

"Dadima, it should be me who should have taken care of you all" Geet said. She was feeling uncomfortable finding the love from the family she had never met before.

"It's okay Beta, don't think much. Anyways it's only for few days, enjoy our care. Afterward we have to enjoy your service lifetime beta" SD dearly said. Geet smiled on her statement. Suddenly her wound hurt and she hissed. Over this Maan started scolding her with double speed. "What was the need of you Geet to walk yourself? Now see, it started hurting!!"

"It's not that much Maan, I'm fine"

"Don't argue with me okay! I know it must be paining"

Geet was getting irritated with his constant shout. She complained, "Look Dadima how he is shouting on me"

"But he is saying true Beta. You should've not taken much stress. Your wound is not fully fine"

"But I was getting bored in room"

"Then you should've called us Beta, we would've come there" Alka spoke. "Okay leave it. And Maan, stop scolding my daughter okay!" then she turned to Geet and said she is going to make soup for her and left in kitchen.

"Where is baba and Chachu?" Geet asked looking here and there for them. Maan said they have gone out for something. SD thought to give them sometime so she also excused herself saying, going to help Alka in kitchen. Maan with Geet left alone in living hall. After everyone leaving Maan came near and sat with Geet. He lovingly caressed her hairs. "Are you really fine or just trying to console me Geet"

"I'm fine Maan, really" she knew he was over caring for her. She couldn't stop herself loving him once again. Maan noticed she was looking tired. "You should take rest I think". Though Geet denied but it was true that she was feeling sleepy. Maan convince her to sleep saying he had to go somewhere out. Geet nodded. Maan kissed her head. "I'll be back soon Angel. Take care" He left. Alone Geet was trying to sleep when suddenly she noticed a wondering shadow coming through slightly opened door. She thought who was it then guessed, it could be Yash. She saw the shadow was moving fast as if it was restless. She wondered, why he was disturbed. She thought for a second to go there and ask but then stopped, feeling hesitation. She better chose to take rest.

##

Maan directly went to police station. Due to Geet condition, he couldn't get chance to come there but meanwhile he had been having telephonic conversation with the police, but today he thought to give him a change to visit there. He was desperate to know who was behind this attack. But when he reached there, he had been told that man had been bailed.

"What! But why didn't you informed me and who did this?" surprised Maan shouted. He was not believing how easily these police men can let a murderer go! But police said that it was a big name behind his bail and they were powerless. Maan was furious. The man was the only one, who could have spit out truth but now, it was tough to find the real culprit. Though he had doubt on Ravi but had no proof. Maan didn't want to take police help now after witnessing their inattentiveness. He returned back to farmhouse thinking tonight, he will surely talk to Geet.

##

Geet was not able to sleep. Though she tried hard but failed. Meanwhile, Alka and SD came to see her but found her with closed eyes so they went in their room. Now alone Geet wanted to go back in her room but feared what if anyone sees her. They will again start shouting. She looked around. The place was empty. She had chance. She stood up and slowly started moving to up when looked toward Yash's room. Door was yet opened but it had dark inside. Unknowingly she made thought to check, he was there? If he was okay? Why was he moving so restlessly? So she walked slowly to room. She pushed the door softly.

"Who's there?"

A sudden tough voice startled her. She cursed herself to come here but now, couldn't run away. Calling a short prayer she stepped in. "It's me.." further what should pronounce him, she couldn't decide.

"Why did you come here?" yash turned to her switching lights on.

Geet got scared. For the first time she was seeing him. Maan's grandfather, the personality who was a fear for all. He was really huge' she thought. Her throat dried. "Actually.. um, I needed water" suddenly she replied whatever came in mind then waited for result with thudding heart.

"Hm, get yourself, it's there, on table"

She thanked God first, then him. With shaking hands she gulped down few drops then turned to leave, when his thick voice, thundered from back, "Stop girl!". She stopped.

"What Maan'd told you about his father's death?"

He asked abruptly.

Precap : Now What Will happen? 😆😆


********************************************************************

My FB Page

Mona's Magical Maaneet Fantasies

My MG Creation Gallery

http://www.facebook.com/pages/Monas-Maaneet-Creations/135552646632268

My Blog

http://monaswritess.wordpress.com

My twitter

http://twitter.com/Monaswrites

*********************************************************



MonaSWrites thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

part 127 - so geet is better now...maan could guess who was behind attack on geet...

will maan tell yash about who has killed his father...
will maan dig more info about RS
excited for precap
loving the pace of story ...pl keep the same pace


Story is already getting too longgg due to this pace 😛

pata nahi kab end hogi 😆
sanum23 thumbnail
Visit Streak 500 Thumbnail 13th Anniversary Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 11 years ago
awsum
geet feeling bore in her room

maan saw her and lifted her and settle

her on couch then he leave geet and went ps

yash asked geet about his son's murder
monikaseth thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
wow maan and his care so nice ohh noo why yash is so hard he should talk normal with geet hope maan come on time

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21 · 11 years ago

hello friends... am not able do pm regularly... so please my all friend follow this thread... i post the link here... so you get link easily of

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21 · 2 years ago

Concept This is story about two strangers which tied in sacred bond and one partner fall in love with another at first sight. Two individuals...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: tammana.m · 4 years ago

Dillagi Dil ki Lagi Jab Dil kho jata hai kisi aise mein Jo apna na hoke pe apna sa lagge. Jiski ek jhalak ke leye yeh nighein tarpati rahe Or...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: Queen0fDarkness · 2 years ago

As mentioned in the notes in the other FF threads that I had created the other ID at a time when I wanted to be anonymous and avoid raising...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: tammana.m · 4 years ago

Prologue Zindagi ke kuch faisle hum lete hai or kuch yeh zindagi humse karvati hai.. kabhi hass ke to kabhi is dil pe pathar rakh kar!! but is...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".