Secretly Smitten#14 (Thread 15 Link @ Pg 148)

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Secretly Smitten... Thread 14



Story of small Maan and little Geet. They were innocent, they were kids, they did not know what they were doing, but their naive act became the most unexpected incident of their life in which they had to suffer for entire life..


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She is my Geet..


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INDEX


Thread 1

Thread 2

Thread 3

Thread 4

Thread 5

Thread 6

Thread 7

Thread 8


Thread 10

Thread 11


Thread 12


Thread 13


Part 125 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3958504/secretly-smitten-14-thread-15-link-pg-148?pn=2


Part 126 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3958504/secretly-smitten-14-thread-15-link-pg-148?pn=21

Part 127 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3958504/secretly-smitten-14-thread-15-link-pg-148?pn=28

Part 128 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3958504/secretly-smitten-14-thread-15-link-pg-148?pn=48

Part 129 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3958504/secretly-smitten-14-thread-15-link-pg-148?pn=51

Part 130 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3958504/secretly-smitten-14-thread-15-link-pg-148?pn=61

Part 131 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3958504/secretly-smitten-14-thread-15-link-pg-148?pn=79

Part 132 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3958504/secretly-smitten-14-thread-15-link-pg-148?pn=97

Part 133 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3958504/secretly-smitten-14-thread-15-link-pg-148

Part 134 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3958504/secretly-smitten-14-thread-15-link-pg-148

Part 135 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3958504/secretly-smitten-14-thread-15-link-pg-148


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CONGRATS ON THE NEW THREAD
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congrats for new thread ...
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Congrats For New Thread...🥳👏
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I am really so much overwhelmed with all precious comments you all are giving me .. Thank you so much 😊




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Part 125


Maan was sitting with Geet when SD touched his shoulder. He turned up to see. She was tackling to smile but when Maan didn't give any response over her attempt, she blinked eyes to hide water inside them.

"She looks like a real angel" She said softly.

Maan smiled hearing her statement. Yes, indeed his Geet was his true angel. He stared her with his love filled heart.

"Maan beta, I know what you'll be thinking. But your Dadaji has not done anything which.. "

"Don't try to defend him Dadima!" He stood up in anger. He didn't want to argue with her neither could hear about Yash, anyone favoring him.

"Maan please listen me Beta"

"Why Dadima? Why you want me to hear about him when I have already declared I have no relation with him! Not anymore!"

"Relation can't be broken like this easily Maan. It's not in your hand"

"A relation needs collaboration Dadima. When Grandpa wants my Geet to be dead, how can you even think me to be in favor of him?"

"He didn't tried to kill her Maan, its wrong!!" she shouted in depression but then controlled herself. "He didn't do anything which can give you reason to hate him Maan. If ever he had needed to harm her, would've been done it long before. Much before you met her" She paused for a second. Filling a deep breath in lung she continued.

"Maan, he is not as bad person as you think of him. His rudeness, his harsh words, everything was his fear to lose you Beta. He doesn't want to lose you like he missed Rajveer. He didn't want to send you India because he was scared, this place will steal you from him. Maan, today what fear you are feeling to see Geet in this state, fear that you will lose her, it's killing you every second? But your Dadaji has experienced this fear. He has suffered a lot after Rajveer death and this suffering turned him into the most helpless person. He always tried to keep you safe, with him. I accept the way he chose was not right, was not convincing but his reason was not wrong. Not especially in my view"

"She is telling correct Maan" Alka came in holding a tray with glass of milk. She kept it on table and caressed his face dearly. "Maan, you know, when we got to know about Geet we hurried to come to India. Your Dadaji arranged a safe journey for us. He didn't come with us and we doubted that he was not affected even after this incident. But we were wrong. He came. Even before we could touch the land here, he had arranged everything for Geet. This place, a troop of doctors and nurses, every facility which Geet needs, he settled here. When he came to know that how you're struggling to stay with her in hospital, he planned everything, so that you can be with her every second and no one can stop you. Maan I know in past his words has hurt you but can't you forget them and give your relation another chance to grow up? Don't give mind over his words beta, just try to understand his heart. And isn't this the same thing your Angel had demanded you? Wouldn't she like to see that everything has settled down well in your life? Tell me Maan!"

Maan knew, this was the same thing Geet had told once. He could remember her every word. After hearing them, Maan was slightly convinced that Yash was not done harm to Geet. But the risen anger in his heart was yet not completely satisfied. But he didn't refuse their demand to have a talk with yash. And Geet would also want same. he looked at her. he felt as if it was her wish too. he couldn't deny her order. he will fulfill her every wish, her dream to live a life where they would have blessings of all their people. He said, he will go and talk to Yash.

He left the place and walked toward the place when Yash could be found.

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RS was roaming tensed in his cabin. He was drown in deep thought. His forehead was covered with thin lines of worries. Seemed, he was waiting for something. Suddenly the landline rung and he grabbed the receiver without further delay. As though he knew who it was, he shouted another second, "Why the hell you didn't kill her!! Bustard! What if she takes my name in police? Just grab her and kill at the spot!"

He threw the phone over the table. He clutched his hairs in fury.

"I shouldn't have believed on that girl. It was my mistake.. No, my biggest mistake. That girl.. !! I can't take another chance. What if she reaches to police before my men reach her? Everything will be fizzled out. I can't let it happen!!" Instantly he took out his cell and dialed a number.

"Listen. I want that girl to be dead, right now!"

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"I don't know how you will find her. Just catch her and give me news of her death. I want Nitya dead, heard you!!!"

He cut the call taking deep breathe.


Precap : An vital talk between Yash & Maan & Geet opens her eyes 😊


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Edited by MonaSWrites - 11 years ago
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Lakshu babbie lily priya sona mauaa dona ..

koi chutaa toh nahi na
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congrtes for new thread
nice
positive move betn maan n yash

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Congrats for the new thread👏
Nice part
Rs want nitya to be killed...he is behind geet's attack
Precap...interesting
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cong for the new thread👏
a nice update plz continue soon
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I knew it..
Rs is behind all this...

Superb update

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