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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
geet going in yash's room!!!!!
what will happen now??????
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Posted: 11 years ago
Geet was trying to meet Maan's dadaji... He was restless after maan said something abt his son... He will definitely try to get to know truth.. what's better option than Geet.. N Geet khud lion ke den mein chali gayi...😆 I wonder whether Geet will tell him.. she is smart.. instead of telling him she will force him to ask Maan.. N if this happen somewhere man n yash's relation will take different turn on nice note..
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update
looking forward for the next update
please update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Poor geet got embarrassed :P
Maan picked her up in front of all
Yash is tensed about his sons murderer
Geet finally met him :|
Now will geet tell him everything that she knows??!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
it seems that am commenting in ur thread after a long time... dosti ka kithna faayda utaathi hoona mein😉😆...mujhe patha hain, tumhein bura nahi laga hoga... phir bhi sowiee🤗... now will try to be regular... parso hi meine baitke saare unread parts pad daale...😃

i love the way ur geet blushes yaar... coma mein thi ... waapas aathe hi blush...😆 and now too blushing in front of her sasu mom and pad sau mom😉... maan is baat ka poora faayda bhi utaatha hain... chaloo kahin ka😆

dadaaji ko jo hum sadu bolthe hain... he turned to be a big fluffy jealousy waala teddy bear😆... i loved that part where he confesed y he dont like geet... just becoz maan loves her more... in front of geet , he dont need any one... that was so adorable of him...

restless dadaji... roaming here and there...😆 maan ki geet se milne ke liye tha kya woh... am sure geet wont give the prmpt reply to that question... hope she becomes a bridge to fill the gap between dada and potha...

aaj ka update ka intezaar rahega... cya
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Posted: 11 years ago

I am really so much overwhelmed with all precious comments you all are giving me .. Thank you so much 😊




(This FF i update daily so please don't wait for Pm.. please do check thread yourself, it's my kind request to all )



Part 129


"Ji?" Shocked Geet looked Yash thinking what did he just asked? She was not sure she heard him correct.

"I think you didn't hear me right Girl or are you trying to escape?"

"I can't getting what are you asking.. " She timidly said. She wanted to run away from his harsh question. She hadn't expected it. Yash was watching her right way, as if was searching his answer in her. He repeated the question.

Geet was silent. She was thinking what should reply! She didn't know the whole truth nor did she want to spit the thing Maan had kept hidden from all. Without his permission she couldn't tell the secret. But she didn't want to lie with Yash too, who she guessed, had been restless due to torture of same question. She hoped Maan would've been told him himself but she didn't want to interfere within the grandfather and son matter. She looked down.

"So, you know something, don't you?" Yash was curious what she was hiding and why! "You don't want to tell me?" he was furious. Geet knew he was getting angry but her mouth was sealed. "I'm sorry, but the faith Maan had on me, I can't break it" she spoke, timidly. Then she stare in his eyes gathering her entire courage, "If Maan tells you himself, wouldn't you feel better... Dadaji" She called him for the first time and it felt sweat to his ears, but Yash ignored the heartily satisfaction had come for a second.

"You can go" He stated out harshly. He felt like betrayed, standing before the weak girl who knew the most intense secret of his family because Maan had chosen to tell her, but not him. Unsuccessfulness pained his heart. He turned face from Geet. She was hurt. She was in guilt for not telling him whatever matter she knew, but she was glad, she took good decision. She started leaving the room but suddenly, the wound started hurting her due to being in standing position for longer. She groan in pain and hold wall for support.

"What happened?" Yash rushed to her. He held her and helped. "Are you okay?" He asked and surprised Geet could see the care in his eyes. She had gotten her answer. He was not that bad person from heart. She was right. "Relax Girl, I'm calling someone. Don't move yourself". He was going to call anyone when saw SD and Alka both were coming, running to them. Yash left Geet.

They had heard her groan. "What happened Geet? Are you fine beta?" SD asked worrying. Till then yash had been returned into his pervious mask of anger. "Why did you all let her come out of room when doctors have strictly advised not to let het move a bit from bed" He scolded. Till the time nurses also had appeared and with their help, they all made Geet walk to her room. In all this occurrence SD and Alka forgot the thing that what was Geet doing in YAsh room, but Geet selected better for not to say a word herself. Indeed she was happy after this meet.

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Maan wanted to remove his frustration on someone or something. He didn't want to go back home in this weird mental condition due to failure he had and he drove off far away from city. Where was he going to he didn't know but wanted to run away from all problems, which had been following him. He started sweating due to heat he had been suffering inside. The extreme anger was suffocating. He wanted to grab fresh air and so ceased the car like a shot. He came out and had an eager urge to scream. To run like a mad man. He pushed hairs in desperation and his mind had been blocked to think rational, when suddenly, his phone sounded. He startled. Keeping annoyance under control he saw, it was from home. He didn't want to pick up but then Geet thought forced his heart and he talked.

"Maan beta, where are you?" It was Alka. "Beta Geet was asking for you"

He said he is coming back and will be there in sometimes. Geet name was a word he could never have avoid to. He hopped in car and started the engine. He was crossing the main market area when car had to stuck in traffic. He was looking straight and waiting for the red light turning off when suddenly he saw, Nitya at roadside. She was purchasing groceries. Though Maan surprised to see her there, at outskirt but then not giving much attention he drove off after turning light into green.

As he stepped in home, he had decided to talk Geet tonight. Not much he could handle this secrecy, not more!

"Maan Beta,, where did you have gone?" SD asked breaking the randomly thoughts running in his mind and he looked her. "Look at your face Maan, what you had been doing? You looking so much tired?"

"Nothing Dadima" He tried to smile. Anyways he wanted to see Geet first, "How is Geet Dadima?"

"She is in her room" And SD told the entire situation that how she had again pain in stomach. Maan worried. He rushed to see her. The thought that he would ask about the attack had been vanished from mind. He just wanted to see Geet fine and well. He would find out about the culprit himself. He could not take chance with her health. Thinking the entire matter he stepped in room and found her sleeping.


Precap : Geet bossing over the family.. enen over Big Grandpa! 😲😆


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-lakshmi- thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
update ke upar mein... neeche mein... neeche ke neeche bhi main😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part
Geet didn't tell dadaji about maan's dad
Yash angry
Maan saw nitya...hmmm
Precap...very very interesting
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

it seems that am commenting in ur thread after a long time... dosti ka kithna faayda utaathi hoona mein😉😆...mujhe patha hain, tumhein bura nahi laga hoga... phir bhi sowiee🤗... now will try to be regular... parso hi meine baitke saare unread parts pad daale...😃

i love the way ur geet blushes yaar... coma mein thi ... waapas aathe hi blush...😆 and now too blushing in front of her sasu mom and pad sau mom😉... maan is baat ka poora faayda bhi utaatha hain... chaloo kahin ka😆

dadaaji ko jo hum sadu bolthe hain... he turned to be a big fluffy jealousy waala teddy bear😆... i loved that part where he confesed y he dont like geet... just becoz maan loves her more... in front of geet , he dont need any one... that was so adorable of him...

restless dadaji... roaming here and there...😆 maan ki geet se milne ke liye tha kya woh... am sure geet wont give the prmpt reply to that question... hope she becomes a bridge to fill the gap between dada and potha...

aaj ka update ka intezaar rahega... cya




finally mil hi gaya 😃

loved tedy bear dadaji 😆

aur sryy qqq bola ???? 😡wapas lo 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

mona..🤗

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