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@saima4744

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

oh brilliant update.

poor arnav khushi is such a clavier girl.

she is ignoring arnav v much.

I hope soon their will b arshi moments.

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Loved Maan's gudiya n Khushi's veerji.Sweet bonding.Liked Arnav too.He is sweet romantic.But K seems 2 b cold 2wards him.Maan is always thinking of Geet.nice dreamy song sequence.Loved d male version of song too.if u can plz give short pararaphs.its more easier 2 read.Banner is superb

Edited by jasminerahul - 11 years ago

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Deepa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

CS
nice...
well if Dev is 26 and Annie is 25, who is Annie's mother?
that Pammi?
and how are Maan and Khushi related?

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priya

@priya111111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

lovely update BB arshi ka nok jhok very entertaining hai aur maan geet ki khayalon mein kho jaana aur khushi ko doubt aahi gayi hai dono ladkiyon mein se ek tho zaroor hai

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

hey dear i will copy and post the same comments here...
sorry...
its just i will get confused later...

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

part 1
awesome start...
whoa this is the first time u are writing like this...
but interesting start...
poor Geet...
how could Maan do this to her?
Geet and Rajji are alone and have only each other...
hope they escape safely...

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

part 2
awesome...
Geet and Rajji escaped somehow but the creeps caught them...
WHAT?
this is Maan?
then who the heck is that man whom Get was being forced to marry?
they are hiding in Maan's jeep?

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Deepa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

part 3
awesome dear...
glad they both escaped...
oh thats Dev and this is Maan...
well after reading so many stories on Maan being a bad guy then turned good made me think in that line...
but here Maan is good...
disgusting Dev...
and now Maan knows the truth and has promised to save her and take her to her place safely...
wow Geet is courageous...

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Deepa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

part 4
awesome dear...
excellent...
let me tell u one truth...
yesterday or say night when i was reading this update seriously i was laughing so so so much...
my God my whole face was full of happy tears...
got good scolding too from my mom for laughing like that at night...
seriously i have never laughed like this this uncontrollably...
Geet's fight and Rajji;s comment were too funny...
seriously dear i enjoyed this one...
back to the update,
that Dev has his men all around...
but Maan Geet fought them off...
but that rogue punctured their tyres...
hope they will come out safely...

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i can never forget this part...
and my unending laughter...

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Deepa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#80

part 5
awesome dear...
nice one...
they are safe as of now...
and Geet poor her...
that evil Dev destroyed her life but now they have escaped...
Maan is amused and highly impressed by Geet...
interesting...